>>28387
Hey Anonymous! Thanks for your feedback and I do not take offense at all! I saw your similar comments on Pixelwriter's story praising him for doing what I do not in this respect so I understand your perspective.

The thing is, for me, I write stories that I would enjoy reading and the danger when a girl is too "real", when she thinks like an actual person would in this scenario, even one who grew up in such an alternate world, the stories can quickly become too sad for my liking.

For me, part of the hotness comes from a girl with masses of potential, who could go on to do great things with her life, choosing to give it up to become somebody's dinner.

I get that my style may not appeal to everyone but ultimately these are my *ahem* private fantasies written out for others to enjoy so I hope at least some of the scenarios I write about are enough to spark your imagination even if the stories themselves do not quite hit the spot? ;)