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Damn, that took longer to draw than I was hoping. Better late than never, I guess. When I get around to posting this story on Ao3, this image will be inserted into the appropriate point in the story.

While drawing this, I realized that I accidentally changed something about the original spitting machine. KaosAngel had the girl's hands tied behind her back when mounted on the machine, but in my rewrite her arms were locked into restraints, just like her legs. This implies that my Spartan has arm clamps, but the original did not.

Oh, well. I'm definitely not going to fix that now, especially since I think that scene where the oldest daughter was forced onto the machine works much better if the Spartan has everything needed to restrain her.
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