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> She made more in bugs for herself and her husband, poured some milk into a jug and found a packet of sugar and a handful of teaspoons then put everything onto a tray and took it into the hall.
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She made more in mugs for herself and her husband, poured some milk into a jug and found a packet of sugar and a handful of teaspoons then put everything onto a tray and took it into the hall.

Gramps was just emerging from the tent when she got back and was very grateful for his coffee.
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Confusion: she got back and was very grateful? No. Gramps was ... emerging ... and very grateful. Though "his" is male it refers to the last person: she = Gram. Therefore it has the wrong gender. But that is not the intendet meaning.
When she got back Gramps was just emerging from the tent and very grateful for his coffee.

They sat down on two of the chairs by the side of the hall and opened one of the curtains over the nearest window, enjoying the early morning light that it let in.Outside, snow still covered the ground but no more seemed to be falling.
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They sat down on two of the chairs by the side of the hall and opened one of the curtains over the nearest window, enjoying the early morning light that it let in. Outside, snow still covered the ground but no more seemed to be falling.

> It was not surprising that the children would start to wake up before the adults and that, once one was up, it was only a matter of time before the woke the others.
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It was not surprising that the children would start to wake up before the adults and that, once one was up, it was only a matter of time before they woke the others.

> Thinking that the end of the party would be as good a time as any to distribute the cutouts to friends and family who wanted them, Josh Laura’s bag of what she called “Potential Essentials” from behind the curtain and began to rummage through it.
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Thinking that the end of the party would be as good a time as any to distribute the cutouts to friends and family who wanted them, Josh got Laura’s bag of what she called “Potential Essentials” from behind the curtain and began to rummage through it.

> Just as they were starting to debate the logistics of how they were going to get everything home in just one car, especially as Laura had others things to do that day rather than keep driving back and forth to the hall, Mr Jenkins sent a message to say there was no hurry in clearing their stuff out and the next booking that had been made for the hall was on New Year’s Eve so as long as he got the keys back on the thirtieth to give to the next customers and everything of theirs was gone by then, it would not be a problem.
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Just as they were starting to debate the logistics of how they were going to get everything home in just one car, especially as Laura had other things to do that day rather than keep driving back and forth to the hall, Mr Jenkins sent a message to say there was no hurry in clearing their stuff out and the next booking that had been made for the hall was on New Year’s Eve so as long as he got the keys back on the thirtieth to give to the next customers and everything of theirs was gone by then, it would not be a problem.

> “I was thinking,” she explained, “maybe next year, you and Mummy can rent the hall and host Christmas there for everyone like Auntie Laura and Uncle Josh did and maybe,” she wriggled a little in her seat, “perhaps, I mean, I’m not sure yet, by maybe, if you wanted, I could be the turkey?”
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Typo (?): want it ‒ not sure about this. Sounds similar enough to "wanted" to be mixed up, but also can be an grammatical correct expression I don't know.
“I was thinking,” she explained, “maybe next year, you and Mummy can rent the hall and host Christmas there for everyone like Auntie Laura and Uncle Josh did and maybe,” she wriggled a little in her seat, “perhaps, I mean, I’m not sure yet, by maybe, if you want it, I could be the turkey?”