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>>29167
Yeah the "wanted" thing is a reflection of English as natively spoken. We often leave words implied so the full precise expression would be "if you wanted me to be" but it would be normal for someone to say "if you wanted" :)

Thanks for picking up the typos etc - it will be a big help 😁

But did you actually enjoy the story?
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