>>29183
>>29184

> I try to write such scenes in such a way that they could be the hallucinations of a dying brain.
That's exactly how I felt about this scene. To me it was the point of transition from life to death.


>29173

You're welcome. Sorry for not commenting the story itself, I was too tied up with proof-reading. ;D


>>29172
>>29178

Ah, this is good to know. It gives the opportunity to learn both ‒ the correct forms and slang phrases. Especially the latter help sometimes to cover the fact that I'm a non-native speaker. *g*