>>29215

I'm curious about the name changes. There was only one name used twice ‒ for Samantha's cousin and Amelia's maternal granddad. So what is the reason?

By using BBCode and providing more text I made a change myself, hoping that the markers will be a bit more descriptively about the difference between the original text and my proposed amendment. And I will seperate comments from the proof-reading results to keep them visible.
Regarding to >>29122 and >>29256 I'd like to repeat my wish that you correct my false positives and explain proper "inaccuracies" to brush up my english. :)

The start is very promising. Will it be a "short" story or will it last until next Christmas? :)=)

> “You know, ... we are quite popular with fathers and daughters.”
This is not really surprising at a "Roebuck International", is it? :D