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Although this is not part of the story I made the first hit here. :D

> NB - Some names have been changed from the first story, an updated version of which will be shared on verious sites once the proof-reading has been finished, but I hope I have included enough exposition for you to follow who everyone is, even if you are coming to this story totally "cold".
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Typo: shared on various sites
NB - Some names have been changed from the first story, an updated version of which will be shared on various sites once the proof-reading has been finished, but I hope I have included enough exposition for you to follow who everyone is, even if you are coming to this story totally "cold".

> “I’m sure it’s…” she muttered as remembered one that might be suitable.
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Omission(?): she muttered as she remembered
“I’m sure it’s…” she muttered as she remembered one that might be suitable.

I'm not sure about the first one: missing comma in an enumeration or wrong grammar or correct?
> Now,” she turned closed the wardrobe and began to rummage though the drawers of the chest that stood next to it, “do you have clean underwear? We can find you some tights in here.”
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Typo(?): she turned, closed the wardrobe and began to rummage
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Typo: rummage through the drawers
Now,” she turned, closed the wardrobe and began to rummage through the drawers of the chest that stood next to it, “do you have clean underwear? We can find you some tights in here.”
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Wrong word(?): she turned closed closing the wardrobe and began to rummage
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Typo: rummage through the drawers
Now,” she turned closing the wardrobe and began to rummage through the drawers of the chest that stood next to it, “do you have clean underwear? We can find you some tights in here.”

> “Good! Sammie’s hair-dryer is on the side there,” she pointed out, “you can use that.”
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Confusion (reference): on the side there,” she Laura pointed out,
“Good! Sammie’s hair-dryer is on the side there,” Laura pointed out, “you can use that.”

> “Don’t worry,” she assured them, “you don’t have to sort through it all today but before school’s back I’d like to have it all her stuff sorted out. Anything you don’t want, Dad and I will go through and maybe hold onto a few keepsakes then find new homes for the rest. Okay?”
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Editing-remains(?): I’d like to have it all her stuff sorted out
“Don’t worry,” she assured them, “you don’t have to sort through it all today but before school’s back I’d like to have all her stuff sorted out. Anything you don’t want, Dad and I will go through and maybe hold onto a few keepsakes then find new homes for the rest. Okay?”

> “You know, I did always say that I ever had an affair, you’d have to organise it for me!”
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Omission(?): say that if I ever had
​“You know, I did always say that if I ever had an affair, you’d have to organise it for me!”

> The lobby was decorated with a Christmas tree that had to be at least fifteen feet tall next to what they were fairy sure was a real wooden sleigh, painted red, highly polished and with a pile or presumably decorative presents in the back.
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Typo: ​with a pile of presumably decorative presents
The lobby was decorated with a Christmas tree that had to be at least fifteen feet tall next to what they were fairy sure was a real wooden sleigh, painted red, highly polished and with a pile of presumably decorative presents in the back.

> I will also have a family gift basket sent up to your room and some drinks and some drinks added to the mini-fridge in the room.
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Doubling: sent up to your room and some drinks and some drinks added to the mini-fridge
​I will also have a family gift basket sent up to your room and some drinks added to the mini-fridge in the room.

> Josh reminded her, then spotted the brass plaque on the wall positioned intentionally to help people coming out of the lift know which was to go.
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Omission(?): help people coming out of the lift know which way/direction/corridor/"nothing in particular" was to go.
​Josh reminded her, then spotted the brass plaque on the wall positioned intentionally to help people coming out of the lift know which corridor was to go.

> Josh closed the door behind them and set the bags down beside the bed that lay down beside her.
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Wrong word: down beside the bed that then lay down beside her.
​Josh closed the door behind them and set the bags down beside the bed then lay down beside her.