>>29216

Additional note about the markers. Each one labelled with "(?)" indicates that I'm unsure about the correctness of my proposed amendment. It's possible that I don't know a certain expression or that I don't get the meaning. Please take this into account.

> a large, comfortable-looking porcelain throne.
Is it comfortable enough for a "Game of Thrones"?
Would be nice for those who are into "watersports" or other readers of /s/. *lol*

> a friendly-looking waiter brought their menus, two the same, fortunately,
Wouldn't it to be expected that the menus are different, at least in a higher level restaurant ‒ with prices for the gentlemen and without for the ladies?
Just kidding ‒ go ahead. *g*

> Phantom of the Opera
You describe a show you've seen, don't you? When and where?