>>29217

> It was true that Amelia’s days were numbered but the recently-confirmed Christening date was still more than six months away. She had half a year left to live and he wanted to make sure it was the best half year of her short but happy life!
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Logical: Even the fourth of may is only a little more than four months away. And if it will be a sunday the fourth it is much less or much more than six months (>>29269, item 6).

> The man behind the counter put everything into a bag which he passed to Josh then offered the card reader for him to pay, which he did by tapping his card whilst trying not to look!
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Confusion: Up to "for him to pay" everything is fine. But after the comma it gets mixed up. Who is "he", who is "his" and who is trying not to look? The question rises because normally the salesman would not look to keep the customers privacy untouched (and the PIN secret).

> In a rage, he then turned his anger towards Madame Giry who assured her that she had nothing to do with the boy’s disappearance and was deeply hurt that he could think such a thing.
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Wrong word: who assured herhim that she had nothing to do
In a rage, he then turned his anger towards Madame Giry who assured him that she had nothing to do with the boy’s disappearance and was deeply hurt that he could think such a thing.

> It was then that one of the other dancing girls admitted then had seen Meg heading, in a state of distress, heading towards the pier dragging someone small by the hand.
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Wrong word: girls admitted then she had seen Meg
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Doubling: had seen Meg heading, in a state of distress, heading towards the pier
It was then that one of the other dancing girls admitted she had seen Meg heading, in a state of distress, towards the pier dragging someone small by the hand.

> Clearly her words were directed at the Phantom. “What the fuck did you expect!” She squeezed his hand and cried a little more as Christine, with her dying breath, told Gustav that the Phantom was his father and that they would be each other’s family from now on.
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Confusion (reference): She squeezed his Josh's hand and cried a little more ‒ The Phantom is on the stage and therefore to far away to squeeze his hand. :)
Clearly her words were directed at the Phantom. “What the fuck did you expect!” She squeezed Josh's hand and cried a little more as Christine, with her dying breath, told Gustav that the Phantom was his father and that they would be each other’s family from now on.

> Once in the lift, Amelia could not hold herself back and longer and pulled Josh down by the front of his shirt to kiss him passionately, releasing him only when the door pinged to announce that they had arrived on the fifth floor.
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Typo: hold herself back any longer and pulled Josh down
Once in the lift, Amelia could not hold herself back any longer and pulled Josh down by the front of his shirt to kiss him passionately, releasing him only when the door pinged to announce that they had arrived on the fifth floor.

> You can’t but them new.
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Typo: can’t buy them
You can’t buy them new.

> On long, elegant leg was stretched out in front of her and the other slightly bent, sticking out towards the side of the bed.
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Typo: One long, elegant leg was stretched
On long, elegant leg was stretched out in front of her and the other slightly bent, sticking out towards the side of the bed.