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You'll be pleased to know I've fixed the "Sunday 4th May" issue! See below :D

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“Good news?” Josh asked, seeing the look of excited happiness on her face.

“Yeah!” She clasped her phone as if it were made of gold and precious jewels. “They’ve set a date for the Christening! Sunday, sixth of May!”

"Ah! It when it's out for revenge!" Josh chuckled.

"Revenge?" Amelia was puzzled. "What do you mean?"

“Well," Josh explained with a broad grin, "everyone knows the fourth of May is Star Wars day then, after that comes Revenge of the Sixth!"

“Star Wars Day?” Amelia asked, puzzled.

“You know!” Josh chuckled. “May the Fourth be with you?” Amelia rolled her eyes and slapped him playfully on the chest.

“Just think!” she told him dreamily, deciding that his silly dad-joke did not deserve the dignity of any further discussion. “On that day, you’ll get to watch me roast then get to to enjoy a slice or two of my juicy rump! I know you’re looking forward to that!”

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You also asked about "The Phantom of the Opera" - I've seen the West End show maybe four times? I forget exactly. But the version Samantha and Amelia watched is the 25th Anniversary production from the Royal Albert Hall which is available on Blu-Ray/DVD and sometimes streaming :D

The show Josh and Amelia go to see in this story is the sequel, "Love Never Dies". I am basing the production they see on the original concept album and how I would stage it if I was put in charge :D
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