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I read your story with great interest. It's well-written and delves deeper into the psyche of a potential "meat girl" than is typical. Her character is convincingly portrayed. However, I also felt a certain sympathy for the girl. Ouch, that happened to me again. :D That's the danger with well-written, long stories.

The AI-generated imagery simulation showed that the metal skewer would fit well in her body. I'd be interested to know exactly where the wedding celebration would take place. I'm deliberately writing in the subjunctive mood. Like a previous commenter, I'm hoping for a surprise. And another question: would it be a vertical or horizontal skewer roast? With a vertical skewer roast, the extension of the skewer is triggered automatically on the grill. The "meat girl" can also operate the lever herself.

Some spit-roasted meats can be seen here in vertical mode. https://boards.guro.cx/ai/koko.php?res=14586&page=0#p13_15072

I hope for a sequel soon. However, I also know that quality content takes time. Best of luck with the rest of the writing.
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