>>29290

“Just let me know, okay? I’ll bring the invitations over when they’re printed and you can address like like Sammie did. Sound good?”
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Doubling: address like like Sammie
“Just let me know, okay? I’ll bring the invitations over when they’re printed and you can address like Sammie did. Sound good?”
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>>29291

“Too back you can’t see much.”
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Wrong word(?): “Too backbad you
“Too bad you can’t see much.”

This pose too a little longer to achieve but the cooperative pair eventually managed to manoeuvrer themselves into the correct position with Ryan bending his knees a little to make him short enough for Erin’s arm to rest in the right place.
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Typo: pose took a little
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Typo: managed to manoeuvrer themselves
This pose took a little longer to achieve but the cooperative pair eventually managed to manoeuvre themselves into the correct position with Ryan bending his knees a little to make him short enough for Erin’s arm to rest in the right place.

“But I also know you collect special dolls and I’m roasting in, like, five months and you’ve got to wait at least give years, maybe more, so she’s worth a lot more to you than she is to me!”
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Typo: at least givefive years, maybe
“But I also know you collect special dolls and I’m roasting in, like, five months and you’ve got to wait at least five years, maybe more, so she’s worth a lot more to you than she is to me!”


>>29294

The only real controversy they either had generated from from animal welfare charities who complained that the real alligators used in the feeding scenes must have been kept hungry to assure that they would attack and eat the various young women and one little girl who were shown falling prey to them on demand.
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The only real controversy they either had generated from animal welfare charities who complained that the real alligators used in the feeding scenes must have been kept hungry to assure that they would attack and eat the various young women and one little girl who were shown falling prey to them on demand.

The laughter coming from the living room made it clear that nobody was finding the giant, man-eating tomatoes too scary and they all cheered when the team of rag-tag heroes used their concentrated microwave blaster to make them explode messily, much to the frustration of their creator, Professor Gangreen, played by the brilliant John Astin who had been ninety-seven years old at the time of filming but performed with no less energy than when he had played Gomez Addams in the nineteen sixties!
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ (Bio)Logical: Unless in the sidneyverse John Astin wasn't born on the March 30, 1930 he was only sixty-seven when the filming started on the June 22, 1987.
The laughter coming from the living room made it clear that nobody was finding the giant, man-eating tomatoes too scary and they all cheered when the team of rag-tag heroes used their concentrated microwave blaster to make them explode messily, much to the frustration of their creator, Professor Gangreen, played by the brilliant John Astin who had been sixty-seven years old at the time of filming but performed with no less energy than when he had played Gomez Addams in the nineteen sixties!
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>>29310

Either it they would all fit in somehow and enjoy their bath or they would find that they could not but would be more likely to accept it, having experimented and found out for themselves.
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Either if they would all fit in somehow and enjoy their bath or they would find that they could not but would be more likely to accept it, having experimented and found out for themselves.


>>29311

She highly doubted that her husband knew anything about the use of technology that three eleven year olds either did not already know or could not work out within seconds but never the less she thought it sweet of them to humour him.
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Typo: seconds but never the lessnevertheless she thought ‒ That's a tricky one, so FYI see below. :)
She highly doubted that her husband knew anything about the use of technology that three eleven year olds either did not already know or could not work out within seconds but nevertheless she thought it sweet of them to humour him.

FYI:
https://www.phrases.org.uk/meanings/nevertheless.html
https://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/nevertheless
Also interesting: Gary Martin writes that ‘neverthemore’ died out in the 16th century. Nevertheless ;) Wiktionary lists a remarkable number of modern uses.
https://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/neverthemore

He had received blow-jobs before, including from Ella herself, and there was no denying that he had wished they could go all the way she she teased him in the bath but was this really about to happen?
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Doubling: the way she she teased
He had received blow-jobs before, including from Ella herself, and there was no denying that he had wished they could go all the way she teased him in the bath but was this really about to happen?

With eager young eyes watching them from both sides, Lydia continued to ride Ryan harder and harder, trying to imagine that his rock-hard willy which was a respectable size for his age although still of relatively modest proportions over all was the tip of the spit which would soon force its way up through her cervix and into her uterus before piercing it like an unblown balloon and making its way through her meaty young body up to her throat where it would emerge back into the light, impaling her like one of Vlad’s enemies and confirming for the world that she was nothing but skewered meat ready to roast!
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Typo: willy, which ... over all, was the ‒ I recently learned that nonrestrictive clauses with which need commas.
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Wrong word(?): washad a respectable size ‒ Slang? Spoken versus written?
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Confusion: The sentence is waaaaaaay to long. It's a challenge to follow it through a whole paragraph. So I divided it a little bit.
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Wrong word: the spit whichthat would soon ‒ While in BE (in opposite to AE) "which" is acceptable in restrictive clauses I'd like to recommend "that" to not confuse the readers in oversea. ;D This point can of course be skipped if you adopt my overhaul.
With eager young eyes watching them from both sides, Lydia continued to ride Ryan harder and harder. She tried to imagine that his rock-hard willy, which was a respectable size for his age although still of relatively modest proportions over all, was the tip of the spit she would be riding later. It would soon force its way up through her cervix and into her uterus. It would pierce her womb like an unblown balloon and making its way through her meaty young body. The intruder would get to her throat where it would emerge back into the light, impaling her like one of Vlad’s enemies and confirming for the world that she was nothing but skewered meat ready to roast!
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Although Ryan had been able to perform as demanded of his, it was still too soon after his last orgasm for him to be able to cum again so, understanding this, Lydia leaned down to kiss him.
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Typo(?): demanded of hishim, it was ‒ possessive pronoun versus object pronoun? Is it something like this confusion comming from mixing up "I" (subject pronoun) and "me" (object pronoun). They are commonly used in a wrong way that is tolerated when spoken but should be avoided when written.
Although Ryan had been able to perform as demanded of him, it was still too soon after his last orgasm for him to be able to cum again so, understanding this, Lydia leaned down to kiss him.

Ryan blushed a little and pretended not to hear the conversation despite only being little more the a food away, nestled between the two sisters whose cherries he had popped along with his own not half an hour earlier.
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Typo: little more thethan a foodfoot away, nestled
Ryan blushed a little and pretended not to hear the conversation despite only being little more than a foot away, nestled between the two sisters whose cherries he had popped along with his own not half an hour earlier.

Part of her felt as if she should have been jealous, like she was being left out, but all she felt was happiness for her brother and her friends and general amusement at the whole situation.
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Confusion: Part of herErin felt as ‒ reference
Part of Erin felt as if she should have been jealous, like she was being left out, but all she felt was happiness for her brother and her friends and general amusement at the whole situation.

“Well Ryan’s willy might be kinda sort this morning!” Erin giggled.
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Typo: be kinda sortsore this morning!”
“Well Ryan’s willy might be kinda sore this morning!” Erin giggled.

The giggled together and both felt the significance of the bonding moment.
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Typo: They giggled together
They giggled together and both felt the significance of the bonding moment.

But the law says mother’s aren’t allowed to cook if they have minor children, even if there’s not technically an upper age limit, right?”
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But the law says mothers aren’t allowed to cook if they have minor children, even if there’s not technically an upper age limit, right?”