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That story was so silly. I loved it. It was so fun and hot at the same time. What I sepecially liked, was that when you decided to use furries, you went all the way and gave them their race traits, like cats having nine lives. I bet dogs in this world have keen sense of smell, hamsters are extrymly suicidal and the only way to treat a horse person is to shoot it :) The possibilities are endless.

I also liked the male guro. You might want to tag it though, as I learned it may throw some readers off, when not prepared.

There was one flaw, I would like to point out: you might want to take more time to establish your scenes. I really wasn't sure what was going on in the beginning and most importantly, I didn't notice that the dragon lady detonated herself. It went from stampede to random chaos, to evacuation in few sentences. I was kinda lost in this moment.

Having that out of my way, I really like this style with massive murders happening all over the place and noone being bothered by it. It was my kind of fun. So far, your stories are great. I'll gladly wait for the next one.
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