The ideas are creative and fun even as is, but the writing has a lot of room for improvement... then again, I guess the best way to git good is something is to do it more, so absolutely do keep writing.

Furry isn't really my thing, so I personally enjoyed the first two parts without furry elements better. The first part is probably the most up my alley, being gangraped together with your crush is such a wholesome romantic experience. Too bad it's also the shortest part. Perhaps it was the idea to make it short as an introduction, but it ends up reading less like a story and more like a brief retelling, only superficially covering the highlights.