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hanging after failing exams
snufffantasy
2026/03/08
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another story where failing students get executed - part 1:
The janitor had just finished hanging the tenth rope when Principal Holloway waved him off the stage with a bored flick of his wrist. A few parents in the front row shifted uncomfortably at the sight, but no one said a word.
"Report cards," Holloway announced, tapping the microphone with a fingernail. The feedback screeched through the auditorium. "Let’s make this quick."
Four rows back, Lily Chen dug her nails into her thighs. Next to her, Mateo exhaled sharply through his nose—half a laugh, half a prayer. The air smelled like old wood polish and the faint metallic tang of the heating vents.
"Failed students will come forward when called," Holloway continued, adjusting his glasses. "No outbursts. No delays. We have a schedule to keep."
The first name sliced through the silence like a cleaver. "Brandt, Oliver." A gasp rippled through the room—someone's mother, maybe—before stifling into choked silence. The lanky boy in the third row stood slowly, his Adam's apple bobbing as he swallowed hard. His shoes squeaked against the polished floor all the way to the stage.
Holloway didn't watch him climb the steps. He was already scanning the next name. "Chen, Lillian."
Lily's breath stopped. Mateo's hand found hers under the desk, squeezing once before letting go. His palm left a smear of sweat on her wrist. She stood, smoothing her skirt with trembling fingers. The walk felt endless, the stage lights blinding as she passed Oliver already standing under his noose, staring at his own feet.
"Martinez, Mateo."
Mateo's chair screeched backward. He didn't hesitate—just strode up the aisle like he was heading to the bodega for a chopped cheese, hands jammed in his pockets like this was all some dumb joke. But Lily saw the way his jaw clenched when he passed her, the vein pulsing at his temple as he took his place beneath the third noose. The rope swayed slightly from his shoulder bumping it.
"DeSouza, Priya." A whimper came from the left side of the auditorium. Priya's mother clutched at her husband's sleeve, but the man stared straight ahead, lips pressed into a white line. Priya moved like a sleepwalker, her uniform sweater sleeves pulled down over her knuckles. When she reached the stage, she positioned herself carefully between Lily and Mateo, as if their bodies could shield her from view.
Holloway adjusted his tie. "Four more, people. Let's keep our chins up." The microphone picked up his dry swallow. "Hargrove, Jessica."
Jessica didn't cry. She flipped her honey-blonde hair over one shoulder and marched up the steps in her scuffed Doc Martens, deliberately stomping hard enough to make the stage boards shudder. When she took her place under the fifth noose, she glared at Holloway with such intensity that the principal actually hesitated before reading the next name.
"Wilson, Tyler." The name landed like a lead weight. A lanky boy with acne scars across his forehead stood abruptly, knocking over his chair. He didn't bother picking it up—just stumbled toward the stage with the jerky movements of a marionette with cut strings. When he reached the nooses, he kept wiping his palms on his khakis, leaving dark sweat stains along the seams.
Principal Holloway cleared his throat. "Nguyen, Kimberly." A tiny girl in the front row flinched so violently her glasses slid down her nose. She pushed them back up with one shaking finger, then stood with the careful precision of someone walking on ice. Lily watched as Kimberly's patent leather shoes made no sound at all against the floorboards—just tiny, precise taps like a metronome counting down.
"Two more," Holloway announced, sounding almost cheerful. The overhead lights caught the sweat beading along his receding hairline. "Petrov, Anya."
Anya's chair didn't make a sound when she stood—just the faint rustle of her pleated skirt brushing against her knees. The entire auditorium seemed to hold its breath as she walked, her posture impossibly straight, the gold cross around her neck catching the stage lights with each step. She didn't look at the nooses. Didn't look at anyone. Just took her place beneath the eighth rope like she'd rehearsed it in some terrible dream.
From her spot on stage, Lily watched Anya's fingers move against her thigh—tiny, precise circles. Counting. Always counting.
"Rodriguez, Carlos."
A meaty thud came from the back row as Carlos—all six-foot-two of him—kicked his desk sideways. He swaggered down the aisle like he owned it, his varsity jacket hanging open to show the faded tee underneath. When he reached the stage, he didn't climb the steps. He vaulted onto it in one smooth motion, landing so close to Holloway that the principal stumbled back a half-step. Carlos flashed a grin full of crooked teeth as he sauntered to his noose, deliberately bumping shoulders with Tyler hard enough to make the smaller boy stagger.
Principal Holloway's fingers twitched against the clipboard like he was considering smacking Carlos with it. Instead, he adjusted his glasses with exaggerated calm and turned to the microphone. "Last one," he said, voice cracking on the last syllable. He cleared his throat. "Warren, Zoe."
A choked sob came from the right side of the auditorium—Zoe's mother, hands pressed over her mouth. Zoe herself didn't move at first. She sat perfectly still in her seat, spine rigid against the wooden backrest, fingers laced together so tightly the knuckles blanched. The silence stretched until someone coughed. Then, with a shuddering inhale, Zoe stood. Her knees buckled immediately. She caught herself on the desk edge, the sound of her palms slapping against laminate loud in the hush.
Mateo's breath hissed through his teeth. Lily didn't dare turn her head, but she saw his shoulders tense from the corner of her eye. On her other side, Priya had started trembling—fine, constant vibrations that made the loose threads on her sweater sleeve quiver.
Zoe took one step. Then another. Her Mary Janes squeaked against the floor, the sound absurdly childish. Halfway up the aisle, she paused, swaying slightly. For one terrible second, Lily thought she might collapse. But Zoe lifted her chin—Lily could see the tendons in her neck standing out like wires—and kept walking. When she reached the stage, she climbed the steps like someone ascending a gallows. Which, Lily realized with a jolt, she literally was.
Principal Holloway stepped back as Zoe reached the tenth noose, the rope brushing against her shoulder like a spider's leg. Then, with a slow, deliberate exhale, he pulled a stopwatch from his breast pocket. "Forty-five seconds," he announced, his voice betraying nothing. "Remove everything. Every last stitch."
Oliver's breath hitched audibly. Kimberly's hands flew to the hem of her blouse before freezing—her fingers twitched as if electrocuted. Jessica was the first to move decisively, yanking her sweater over her head with such force it nearly tore at the seams. Carlos smirked, unbuckling his belt with exaggerated slowness, but his knuckles were bone-white where they gripped the leather.
Mateo counted under his breath—twenty seconds gone—as he fumbled with his shoelaces. Priya's trembling fingers slipped on the button of her slacks three times before she gave up, whimpering. Zoe simply stood motionless, her gaze fixed on some distant point beyond the auditorium lights. Lily's hands moved methodically, folding her cardigan before placing it on the floor beside her, but her throat worked as if she might vomit.
The stopwatch beeped. Holloway's polished shoes clicked against the stage as he approached Priya first. The scissors gleamed in the spotlight. A single snip, and her blouse fell open like a gutted fish. Another, and her bra straps surrendered with a quiet ping. She didn't cry. Just stared at the fabric pooling around her ankles as if it belonged to someone else. Tyler was next—his jeans gave way with a rasping tear, revealing striped boxers that Holloway sliced through without ceremony.
Kimberly was last. She'd managed to strip down to her underwear, but the stopwatch had beaten her. The scissors hovered near the clasp of her bra. "Don't," she whispered. Holloway paused—not out of mercy, but to savor the moment—before severing the clasp with a decisive click. The bra slipped away. Another decisive click and her slip fall down.
Silence. The air smelled of sweat and the faint metallic tang of the scissors. Ten bodies, bare as birth, under the unforgiving glare of the lights. Somewhere in the third row, a mother's choked sob cut through the quiet. Oliver's shoulders hunched forward, his arms crossed over his chest as if he could still shield himself. Jessica, by contrast, stood with her hands on her hips, chin lifted—but her rapid breathing betrayed her.
Carlos flexed, muscles rolling under his skin, but his usual swagger was absent. His gaze flickered toward the audience—toward his father, whose face had gone slack with something between horror and recognition. Mateo's lips moved silently, counting still, as if numbers could anchor him. Zoe's fingers brushed the noose beside her, her expression eerily serene.
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