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Short and sweet. So well written. You captured the essence of the world as well. How conditioning can break when realisation hits. How children will often be naive.

A few questions:

Was this supposed to be a bus that exclusively ferries Animals to their final destination or was Jackson only noting the other Animals?

Are you planning on different characters per short story?

Was the world easy to write creatively in or is it too macro detailed?
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