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>>30210
>>30211

I'm sorry I've to say this, but this story was boring to me. With all the repetitions it seems to me it would be better placed at the AI-board. And like the first version it gives no real explanation ‒ beside "tradition" ‒ for what reason the executions take place.

There is still plenty room for improvements.
Post number No.30214
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