I did enjoy this story and I'm not going to be snippy about AI, especially since you were open and up front about where this story came from, but maybe use what AI writes as a guide to put your own story together? There's a few little bits in here that a human writer, even one as fast and lazy as me, would pick up such as Sherry pulling her dress off over her head only to have it pool at her feet as it would have if she'd slipped it over her shoulders and there were some other rather bizarre descriptions too. AI is a very useful tool but works best when used alongside human creativity :)