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Love your work as usual, but jumping right into her being owned, I feel like there’s a hole in the story where at least chapter or 2 towards her actual training and what the state thinks a live service animal can and should be put towards it would make an interesting contrast and perhaps explain her attitude of needing to prove worthy to her new owner. I was also expecting, even though I know you wanted to step away from the more sexual aspects with this particular story but with comments about the wax the missing spot with the page and about her previous set of stripes I kept expecting a little bit more being expected of her than just being there,
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