No worries about grammar. A little hard to read but I got the gist of it. I feel like the first story covers a lot of ground concerning Riley's mindset change from human to Animal. She was naturally submissive, responsive to touch and not afraid of sex. All training did was reduce her further and hone the traits that made her desirable. And the sexual tension between Riley and Lola was unintentional, I was trying to write them as sisterly.