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I appreciate that the little ones discovered "The Joy of Sex"[1] in time. There is very probably a position like theirs in the "Kama Sutra"[3]. And yes, these references are made on purpose (see footnotes). ;))

​Although I wasn't actually proofreading I found some issues:

​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Doubling: Starting with the last paragraph of the first post Since it was already a hot day (>>30583)
​​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ to the 29th paragraph of the second post giving her plump fillet a very thorough cleaning! (>>30584)

​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Doubling: were dropped back into the pot where they sank to the bottom so their their marrow could enrich the flavour and the last scraps of meat could boil off.


[1] The Joy of Sex: A Gourmet Guide to Lovemaking, by Alex Comfort (1920–2000), 1972.
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Joy_of_Sex
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ It was inspired by cook books, especially "The Joy of Cooking"[2], and has section titles like "starters" and "main courses".

[2] The Joy of Cooking, by Irma S. Rombauer (1877–1962), ​first edition 1931.
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Joy_of_Cooking

[3] Kama Sutra, by Vātsyāyana (Mallanāga) (around 250 CE), approximately second half of the 3rd century CE.
​​ ​ ​ ​ ​ There are disagreements about the authors name.
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Some experts believe that Vātsyāyana is possibly the clan name (gotra) and Mallanāga the first name.
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Others say that Mallanāga may come from a confusion with a creator of erotic science with that name.
​ ​ ​ ​ https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kama_Sutra
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