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>>30592

I'm just wondering if it's a new common way of writing to double whole sequences? ;b
Edward did this already in his story "A Farmer's Market Feast" (>>30583) so I had to mention it (>>30680) :)=)

Here it happened in
> Chapter 3: The Tiger
between
> Once the paint had dried enough to stop smudging, Matilda guided Riley up onto the table itself.
and
> And seated atop the paint-stained table with Matilda between her legs, Riley felt strangely, terrifyingly safe.

I'm afraid I'm to busy to proof-read the stories of both of you on a regular base. ;D
This said I'm desperately waiting for Riley's next chapter.
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