@PBandJ

I’m really enjoying your story so far. Everything is described in detail, and I can practically feel the atmosphere and the essence of the situations you’re depicting.

By the way, that "children's game"—where kids pretend to be roasted, just as a form of roleplay—actually exists. However, it doesn't involve any props or anything like that; all it takes is nudity and imagination. Fortunately. "Props" could pose a danger. I don't think things would have ended well back then if one of the kids—during the games I played with my friends—had actually turned into a roast duck. But in our childhood imaginations, everyone got a turn at being the roast duck.

I find it engaging that you accompany your story with images. I know you can train your imagination to visualize things, but it’s nice to see how the author envisions their characters. Your visuals are well done.

I’m glad that, thanks to AI, we now have the opportunity to look at images of beautifully roasted suckling pigs—regardless of the artistic style used to depict them.

I’m really looking forward to the continuation of your story.