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To preserve the playful character of your story, I recommend describing the oven-roasting process in a manner similar to Edward's approach. Before the truly intense pain of being cooked sets in for the fictional character, death by heatstroke—or death during orgasm due to cardiac strain—would be more fitting.

Regarding the last point, I think it should be clear that the fantasies described here have nothing to do with the author's reality. For instance, it would be highly alarming if I were to treat the children in my neighborhood the way they are described in these stories.
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