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Personally I am not a big fan of regret or trauma in such stories. I lean to a mixture of the adrenaline rush and arousal dulling the pain to an extent but there's no harm in a character starting to notice that it's getting uncomfortable except when they start to get to the point where they feel like they can't take it, they either pass out blissfully or the nerve-endings are destroyed then they just feel euphoria. Please don't have our sweet little Ducky crying, screaming or begging to be let out. Maybe Piglet can reassure her as she takes her out to baste, keep encouraging her to stick it out and brave little Ducky wants so badly to be delicious for everyone!
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