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I’m pleased you’re enjoying the story. The story being told is a modern take of farm life. I kept the year ambiguous so future reader will not feel it is dated. For us it is 2026.

All characters are free use. I have no qualms about their use in any forum.
Ms Baker would make a lovely spit-roast. So do as you please.

The spit roasting chapter(s) is next. Not penned at the moment yet it is already written in my head. As in past chapters you never know what is going to happen chapter per chapter.

Will piglet be able to match wits with Gramps and the Howdy Boys? Will she become part of their particular type of partying? What was the note scribbled in haste? Many questions answered in the following chapters.

Nothing I dislike more is a long story without some kind of epic ending. Not gorging on the forbidden meals kills the whole story. I do appreciate the efforts yet “The wham bam thank you mam” for an ending seem incomplete. Just my personal peeve, disregard my ramblings.

Their is an old saying. “Stories are never complete, they are merely abandoned.”
I look back at what I had written and say “ah I should of wrote this or that, or add some pretext of a scene.” Always an issue with chapter release posting. It is what it is.

Okay let briefly hint about the next chapter.
I should do end credit scenes like in the Marvel movies. lol

The chicks are becoming the rotisserie roasted chickens they were meant to be. Ducky is having her moments still twitching and bathing in the circulating heat that penetrates deeper as the oven heat molecules dance around her body.
Piglet is risking life and limb to save someone she holds dear. Gramp is old and settled in his way. Doesn’t like change or disruption. Can piglet stop this? Does she have something to offer? Would it be enough?

Currently we have a big holiday happenings in the States this weekend. I’m attempting to have the next chapter out tonight (my time) split into two chapters so I can make the spitting scene as erotically exciting as I’ve attempted to with other roasters in the ovens.

I have a free yet busy weekend so if all goes well Attempt to finish out this story to a satisfying end.


Can this story get any better? Will it continue to excite? I hope so. I generally write what’s excites me, it’s a bonus to me when other appreciates it as well.

Thanks for your comments
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