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Wow, a lot happened in just a few minutes. An action-packed chapter. Great. I’ll have to read it a fourth time. This cannibal feast seems to be turning into something bigger than I thought. I re-read three older chapters this afternoon. I’ve realized that when I only read a chapter once, I miss too many details regarding the facts. To be honest, on the first read, you tend to focus more on the erotica and the food. Haha.

I need to read through the chapter where Barbie was first described again. After all, this party is a major event. The grounds would have to be cordoned off over a wide area to shield the proceedings from the prying eyes of outsiders. Given the sheer number of additional candidates for a human feast—and the guests with such voracious appetites—it would certainly attract attention during normal operations if precautions weren't taken.

Uh, sorry, I’m overanalyzing things again. It’s an occupational hazard—or rather, a hazard of one of my personality traits.

Those crook brothers and the old man are truly sinister characters. I certainly don't want that lot feasting on any noble victims. They deserve to have a pitchfork shoved up their asses. Haha.

Thanks for this action-packed and dirty chapter. As always, I'm excited to see what happens next.
I’m going to read a bit more of your story; I’m sure a few more questions will come to mind.
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