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Another brilliant chapter. Your story is dangerous. As the plot unfolds, you show how a young girl is manipulated into viewing herself as a delicious dish. She wants to offer herself up as the ultimate sacrifice. I find myself empathizing with Piglet more than I’d like to admit. Not having to worry about the future anymore—and instead ending up as a delicious dish in the ultimate spotlight—is a very seductive prospect for bowing out of life while commanding maximum attention.


Your story appeals to me on several levels: the sexual and fetishistic, certainly, but also the intellectual.
You write the kind of story that leaves me deep in thought. I don’t know if you realize it, but there is also an undercurrent of social commentary running through your narrative.

Overall, I find your story highly entertaining. I have no trouble immersing myself in the atmosphere you’ve created—perhaps a bit too easily. I even find myself imagining lying there next to Piglet on a large silver serving platter. I’m looking forward to the next chapter.
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