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Hai! I'm the weird guy who had been writing (and doodling sometimes) two thing that should had not go together on this site. Guro, and Scat... because I had realized that there's a niche that not many people had touched before since I saw the thread in /g/.

After having been around dipping my toe a good bit in that thread and providing a few crappy (literally, because I wrote scat... duh) stories in 100 words thread. I decide that it's time for me to give a try on a longer story.

For this one, it's an extended version of >>27297

I'll have to be upfront that English was my second language and I wrote all these in a single sitting full of caffeine, so expect the quality of language to be as polished as sandpaper....

​[​i​]​Thumbnail art badly made by me[​/i​]​

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...sound of seawater's clashing against the side of the ship as she got her oxygen tank mounted on her back by an experienced diver along with the weights, Excited to be the first to explore the wonder beneath the ocean ever since she arrived to his private beach.

Being a daughter of a fourteenth richest families in the west provided her with an unfathomable amount of benefits. Private beaches, premium villa with room reserved just for her (with 5 stars breakfast on the bed), constant treatment akin to royal families everywhere she goes. Such a luxurious life for someone of adolescence like her to have.

Ever since her first exposure to outside world, the girl develop a massive fascination for exploring an wonderful world beneath the ocean surface. With her family approval, she and her older sibling were sent to the private beach on the owned island in the southwest. A private resort only reserved for the wealthiest who looks for a quick escapism from a menial city live living at the top of the food chain.

While she’s considered too young to be going on a dive according to policy, a little persuasion (and extra cash) had arranged her to be on the trip with her sibling and hired instructors accompany her, with a custom tailored wetsuit to make sure she always looks nice underwater for a photo. She’s so excited that she gun straight to the pier right after finishing her big breakfast.

However, just before just dive, The older siblings got a terrible case of seasickness that she is no longer fit to take a dive with her. Being stubborn she is and not wanting to have her first diving trip ruined by her sibling vomiting her guts out in the lower level. Two instructors agreed to accompany her’s trip down below.

Her body is greeted with a chilling cold water as soon as she’s dropped into the ocean. With some times to adjustment (and a good bit of flapping her hands around in doing so). She’s ready to go on the underwater trip. Looking at her sibling who’s still trying to recover. The girl blew raspberry at her before putting on the regulator on her mouth before going below the surface.

The trip down to the deep water can only be described as ‘amazing’ to her perspective. Many fishes swimming around her as if to greet her with a dance. Corals with so many vibrant colors that even the best television cannot represent how great it is to see in person. Even floating still she can feel the underwater wave brushing against her skin beneath the wetsuit. It’s wonderful that she wish she could be down there forever, like a mermaid from cartoon she watched prior.

...and that’s when thing start to get terribly crappy…

Her excitement earlier is now replaced with sense of dire urgency as her stomach twists on itself. Ever since she arrived to this resort she was so excited to be exploring the ocean she hasn’t use her bathroom even once. Shrugging it off thinking it will slow her down. And with all the premium food she had ate earlier want to make it’s exit this instant, she can only clutch her stomach and groaning heavily as bubbles exit her regulator like fire hose.

She wants to swim to the instructor and ask to help her back to the surface hoping to find the bathroom. But just before she can reach for their shoulder, another terrible cramp hit her as she feel a large amount of warm gas escaping her delicate backside, creating a group of bubbles that seeps through the fabric of her seat a little too warm for her comfort

In that moment she knew, even if she manage to get back onto the ship she cannot hold it long enough to have accident in front of the instructors and boat crew, not to mentions that her sick sibling will be making fun of her for having an incident in front of her.

With an immature mind of her, she decide that if she were to have a shameful accident, she would rather have it by herself. While the instructors’ not paying attention, she quickly kick her flippers as she swims as far as possible from the instructor to find a private spot, one hand clutching her backside as more bubbles begin to seep through the wetsuit, signaling her that she won’t have much time.

Making sure nobody around can see what she’s about to do next. She pulls her legs toward her chest, and push!

Muffled grunt echoes inside her head as she bit down on the regulator trying to force her troublesome colon to release. The back of her wetsuit puffs up for a moment as the remaining gases in her colon come rushing out at once. Causing a massive bubble foam to shoot through her backside and dissipate as it ascend toward the surface.

But her quest for relief is far from over. Taking a deep breath as large bubbles shoots out the front of regulator she strains again. Curling her body up until it looks like she’s suspended in squatting pose. Her face became crimson as and veins begin to shows on her temple as she exert herself as much as her body can.

But instead of immediate sensation of everything rushing out. What she’s pushing out can only be described as a compacted mass with the density of a rock. She can feel the massive girth struggling to push out of her delicate ring in-between her tight cheeks, held together by the tight wetsuit once claimed to make her look pretty underwater, now becoming the final obstacle she need to overcome as it held back the emerging wide tip.

She pushes, and pushes again as her body’s having a reverse tug-of-war against the suit’s restrictive material. Feeling it inching out as much as the amount of push-back she received. Now tearing up inside her diving goggle. She took one last breath and bit on the regulator. Pushing with so much strain that her mind became foggy from exertion.

...there’s a loud cracking noise in her mouth just before she succeed in relieving herself.

Her vision suddenly got flooded with the massive amount of bubble bursting upward, obstructing her sight, followed by a piercing pain in her mouth.

Panicked, she quickly open her mouth to take a breath…

But instead of air, it’s water rushing down her throat.

Her body thrashes in panic as she can barely registered what’s going on. Having applying so much strain on her stomach to the point of getting lightheaded, she failed to noticed that the plastic rebreather has shattered inside her mouth. shrapnel piercing her tongue, the roof of her mouth, and her gum. Some of the shrapnel is pushed down her throat along with seawater.

Her lung, already having been almost emptied from the strain earlier is now flooded with seawater. In her fading consciousness she tries to reach for the broken regulator, watching air bubble flowing out with so much force that the air tube flail around and slapping her in the face several time. Spatting a considerable amount of shrapnel along with crimson. Her flailing hands start to get slower, her mind begins to drift toward the deep slumber as the last bit of air left her nose.

And just to rub it in her face before her brain finally shuts down. She can faintly feel her body pinching off the troublesome loaf she spend all of her air on. Leaving a large but contained bulge between the cheeks as the rest were forced back inside her already full bowel…

...for the following week ever since, the family had been hiring divers trying to find the body of the girl, having last seen at the diving spot off the coast of the private resort.

Rumors and conspiracy theories begin to spread around about what could had happened to the poor girl of a wealthy family, one suggest she was attacked by the local sharks while the instructors’ not paying attention. Other suggest a possible kidnap but they have yet to heard about the ransom. Some even suggest that the two instructors who had accompanied her down on the diving trip is responsible for her disappearance.

Whatever it is, the mystery of the girl’s disappearance remain unsolved, and the posting for the missing child is still up to this day…
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