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There’s no need to apologize; you’re doing exactly the right thing. Splitting the story into two chapters makes sense—no need to rush. If the reader has to be patient, it creates a bit of delightful agony—a touch of torture for anyone interested in this topic. Hehe.


I’m glad they’re continuing to expand this setting. They’ve managed to bring interesting characters to life—well, okay, even if only a short life was planned for some of the pets. Haha.

(For risks and side effects affecting the animal during slaughter, ask your butcher or hunter.) :D

So, the point of erasing Piglet and Ken's short-term memory—and the reason for it—is only just becoming clear to me. I hadn't grasped that before. Well, let's hope there's enough food for everyone. :D

Yes, of course—you want to write other stories, too. I can certainly understand that. And I’m very excited about it.

Creating Dolcett-style content using AI isn't easy. There are techniques to make producing such content simpler, but the AI ​​generally refuses to display questionable material. Still, I think your image is good; it captures the atmosphere of the situation well.

If you have any questions about AI, feel free to ask. In principle, the text you create must always sound harmless to the AI. For example, instead of cutting open the belly with a knife, describe running the knife over the skin of the belly or lightly touching it. The AI ​​will handle the rest.

I don't see any spelling mistakes. My English isn't very good. The translation program corrects the English spelling errors, and I get error-free sentences in my own language.

But I also need to check whether the translation worked correctly. My poor English is usually sufficient for that. However, I always have to use software to translate your story. Sometimes I might miss small details in the plot. That’s why it makes sense for me to read the text more than once.

In any case, thank you for this new chapter.
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