Sorry for not commenting in between, but since my first post (>>30698) I limped always far behind. Now I caught up and finished reading the entire story more or less in a single run.
It is for sure one of the most erotic stories I've read in a long time. It's graphical and detailed and covers most of what I like.
I agree with Tanja Mars, but with words instead of pictures: Thumbs up!

Having this said I'd like to make some remarks and have some questions.

* It is mentioned that the animals are conditioned to be willing and compliant. But then they are asked to remember a safe word (>>30958). This implies a free will. But does one really have a free will with hypnotic triggers implanted?

* Miss Hog, was probably never scheduled to entertain and roast (>>31016), if she ever existed. Ms Baker manipulates the kids by playing the sorrowful host with fake Vaseline-tears (>>30958). She is not the kind Mom, she's a fierce businesswoman, a monster. Although I undestand that all this is essential for the story I don't like liers.

* The Howdy Boys came out of nowhere in the story (>>31016), completely casual like self-evidently. What are they ‒ a biker gang, the local Hillbillies?

* Fisting a seven/eight year old inserting the arm to the elbow sounds very unrealistic (>>31109). Even with taking into account that Piglet is way smaller than an adult it is surely a borderline thing. Though a woman's vagina is very flexible this doesn't apply to a preteen before puberty. Yes, actually a five year old can adapt to a smaller cock, but the magic word is "smaller". At seven a "normal" size may be possible. But a even a small wrist ‒ if buttered or not ‒ is bigger than "normal". And then the egg was larger than Piglets wrist ‒ about the same size as Farmer Fred’s dick. To have a reasoable amount of duck eggs inside the ceramic egg it has to be huge, which makes Fred's cock size unbelievable. Something doesn't fit together.

* "Piglet's piggy brain struggled with measurements" (>>31178) but has the widest part of Piglet's new plug really exaggerated five inches across or has it a girth of plausible five inches?

* Ms Baker's monologue proofs that to call the farm a treatment center is not only a euphemism but a big lie (>>31196). She states that "[t]his facility will become fully operational as a ... exotic food catering service" and that "these young tender morsels ... learn their full potential as ... delicious meals". One more reason that Ms Baker should ride the spit herself as soon as possible.
                              

While reading this fine text I randomly collected some information that partly needs clarification.
(The number in paranthesis is the count of occurrences I found in the text)
May be you can confirm, correct and/or fill in.

Ms. Baker; is it Clair(2), Claire(1) or Doris(1); full, firm and soft breasts; lost a younger sibling in the past when she was around 13 years old.
Ducky aka Mindy Chow; from China; is she 7(1) years or 8(1) years old (the estimation "perhaps half Jenny's age" points to the first); black hair; is she chubby? Why else can she at her age have: perky breasts, budding breasts, tiny breasts jiggling, small breasts jiggling, small breasts bouncing?
Chicken Little aka Lora (or Tracy); 5 years old.
Chick-a-Dee aka Tracy (or Lora); 5 years old.
Piglet aka Jenny; 13yo; budding breasts; has younger twin sisters (one of them named Amy (a future lamb?)); she remarkable often "acts and speaks before thinking".
Miss Goat, pre-teen fifth grader (may be 10 years old); small breasts.
Daisy Moo; teenager; blonde, blue eyes; heavy, full, ample breasts.
Farmer Fred aka Fredrick Arnold.
Dora (Arnold?); has a sister named Flora.
Coach Bart Wilson; is he gym coach(1) or soccer coach(1) or swim coach(1)?
Ken Doll aka Thirty-Six; maybe 13 or 14 years old; dickless.
Barbie; 19 years old; natural cherry blonde, blue eyes, pearly whites; breasts actively fighting the buttons of the blouse.
Mr. Smith; british associate and business partner to Ms. Baker; talent scout, manufacturer and seller of sauces and glazes; has a wive/girlfriend round about half his age, possibly twenty with jet-black hair, may be polynesian with perky breasts.
Gramps; patriarch of the Howdy Boys.
Butter Cream(3); or Krispy Cream(1); looks like 10 years old, probably is 13 (and a half) years old; big breasts.
                              

>>31146
And now for something completely different.
> I look back at what I had written and say “ah I should of wrote this or that, or add some pretext of a scene.”
I've heared of authors who today still write on oldfashioned typewriters. They argue that it keeps them "in the flow", because it removes the opportunity to change things on the fly, which may detain and/or confuse them.