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Thank you so much for all your compliments, I'm glad you liked everything I put inside. I did try to make as many references as possible to other works, and explained as many details of the first one as possible.

I did not read desperably seeking Sidney yet, I'm still trying to figure out in which order I want to read your latest stories once I get some free time, I got some the last few weeks but it got sucked by writing this story ^^"

The idea of a wheelchair meatgirl came because it would fit the light and happy tone, but also because it would be a fun idea to do with the lift. Also I like the idea of serving the legs of a girl that didn't get to use them ^^"

I'm happy it could pass as your style, it was a good exercise. All in all, just writing this story was a formidable breakthrough in my writing skills, I managed to work on the structure without it demanding heavy work, and i could see my writing speed improving to struggling to reach 2 pages to finishing 3 pages early^^
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