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>>31544
Oh, what a cliffhanger!
> It was clear that the pair had a real mutual respect and friendship.
Are we to expect a threesome? Holy shit, you're teasing us!


>>31085
> […] be described as being masturbated from the inside! […] a lot of boys seem to like it […]
Do you describe something purely out of imagination or have you done some experiments (of course without the hair-like barbs)?


>>31204
> […] the T-bar between his elbows and locked it to the spit […]
The spit is inside of Carl and the distance from the elbows to the open parts of the spit would in both directions be something between one and two feet. Plus: Going to the top on the backside the head would be in the way. Going to the lower end on the frontside the same would apply to the genitals. All in all it seems to be a very unstable construction.
Sorry for beeing picky, I'm just wondering how this can work.


Couldn't help but to find some errors too obvious to ignore:
>>31281
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Wrong word: β€œMiss Mollie! Miss Mollie!” she heard the Poppy and Lydia Tara calling in something close to panic from the pot.
>>31300
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Typo: β€œOff with your head! Off with your head!”
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Wrong word: β€œYou abandoned your post! Luckily Mollie Poppy and Tara were on the ball or the stew could have been ruined!”
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Typo: […] or at least give him a nasty poke! β€œThere’s one more spike […]
>>31467
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Confusion: β€œLikewise!” Sarah smiled. β€œAre we about to see the master in action?” she asked, looking past Sarah Mollie at the three naked, freshly-stamped piggies.
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Sarah smiled, asked and looked past herself? I guess she looks past Mollie.
>>31510
​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Typo(?): After all, if she managed to wrap her car around a tree and hospitalise herself ofr worse, she would definitely not be going on her date that evening, […]
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