>>31632

Thanks for the links.

I had to take a break. Think about the ending to this story.
I’ve written a solid draft and outline for the judging phase. Not the epic finish I really want. It’s as exciting as reading an expense report.
Watching a game show judging is way more exciting then writing it out play by play.
That said I’m going to try and pull off the impossible.

I’ve decided to break the chapter up into a few chapters. Spice the story up a bit. Judging each of the four categories. One category for each chapter.

I’ll be able to add a fun commercial and a little more of the Henderson Family Bonding.