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I'm glad! I'm very happy that the story pleased you!

It's a shame that you didn't like some aspects, but those were all choices. I wanted the deaths to be fast and dehumanizing, that's a personal touch. but at this point Dan has both the cleaver and the throat slitting knife at ready, as a skilled chef it doesn't take him long to grab and use either ;)

I'm glad you liked this scene^^

yeah I agree that the taxidermy works have been speed up. I quickly brushed it off saying that the science progressed, but this is a bit of a stretch. but I wanted to include all the taxidermy elements so I used this explaining.

the speed up was also voluntary. I put everything I wanted before. the story is about the Preparations of the grand opening, and not really the opening itself.

Thanks^^
I plan to write another "Sidney-like" story, but for now I'm more unbound on my brutal casual thread. you can check it if you want, it's quite a bit more violent though, and I make daily updates on the current story.

but I have to warn you, I still think preparation is my best story
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