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Not AI at all (just over tired and over alcoholed), but I just had too many ideas that I forced into a very short story. And I didn't do as much proofreading or editing as I should have. I don't tend to do a lot of world building by exposition, so my writing can be like being thrown into a cold pond. It all totally made sense in my min's eye, but I failed to spell it out the way I had hoped to.

I promise the idea is/was very hot and playful. I rushed it. I may revisit it and repost it more the way I imagined it.

Thank you for your criticism (although it was ouchy, but not unwarranted)

I have loved a lot of the stories here, but I don't think I'll ever go so in depth as Jenny's Piglet Cure or Training Tina, for a couple examples of longer stories.

But who knows?