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50 days already! Here’s a short beginning of a longer story.
Big announcement at the end ;)

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Crimson rose from his bed, freshly 10 years old as this was the morning of his birthday. He slowly walked down the stairs, light smile on his face. His mother waited for him in the dinning room a large cake on the table. “Happy birthday Crim! I can’t believe my baby boy is 10 already. Take a slice of cake.” The young boy happily took it. “Thanks mom!” he said before taking a bite. “I can’t wait to become a pokemon trainer! Did you get ready too?” he asked to his mom who noded. “Yes. I discussed with professor Lorelei, everything is ready. I’ll meet up with her and get the last things done, meanwhile can you go to the shop? They should have received what I ordered for you.” he took one more slice for the way “Sure!” he said before leaving.

Crimson rushed to the store, to be greeted by the cute clerk. “Hello! I’m here to pick up an order?” he gave the number for the package and the clerk found something. “Yes I do have something. Here for you!” Crim obtained running shoes. Crim obtained large backpack. With his new stuff the boy left the store for Lorelei’s lab. In front waited a girl about her age. “You must be Crimson.” She said bluntly. “I look forward to becoming a trainer along with you.” she seemed to try very hard to act kind. “My name is Nova.” Not long after, Lorelei finally opened her door.

“AH! You’re both here! Come with me!” she dragged them into her living room and sat them on a couch. “I know you’re very exited to get your first pokemons, but I need to remind you some rules! You can’t carry more than 6 pokemon at once. After catching a pokemon, you can’t release it. You can capture any pokemon as long as it’s a female, and it’s not owned by anyone else. And of course, you can do absolutely anything to your pokemon. Now let’s go see your new friends!”

Lorelei dragged them further into the research part of the lab. “pokemons come in various species, but for your starters, only will be available: humans!” inside the lab are three women standing naked on a table, one of which is Crim’s mother.

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wow, 50 days, it feels so weird to already have done so much, I couldn’t begin any of those stories no even two months ago and now so many are finished.
But not completely! That’s what I want to talk about. The stories I posted here were rough drafts, I plan to post cleaned versions with no typos and better writing style.
That’s why I need your help, I’m looking for people who could help proofreading the stories and highlights the parts I need to work on.
I’m also very interested in turning the stories into audio, so I’m looking for people who would like to use their voices to bring the stories to life, this include english and French version. I can handle to sound editing, so I only really need voice actors / actresses, but any other talent is welcome.

For anyone interested, you can contact me on discord by adding me as friend with this user name:
wd_des
I hope to hear from you soon. See you tomorrow ;)
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