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Terra woke up to the sound of crunching leaves beneath her skin. Her eyes opened wide, startled as she looked around and saw an unfamiliar forest surrounding her while the dawn sun peeked up from beyond the trees, she was completely naked from head to toe. Her arm went across her chests to quickly cover herself in case someone saw her but nobody was around. Her body was sticky from a slight sweat. As she held herself up, she tried to recall what happened last night - running through her memories of going to the bar with her friends for her 25th birthday. They joked around and got drunk, one by one they left to go home. She remembered being alone for the last hour. Nothing strange happened and nothing memorable happened on her way home. As a matter of fact, she couldn't remember going home. She had started heading out and one last person bought her a drink. it was a woman, a short lanky geeky looking gal with round glasses and a slight southern drawl. She took a sip and the rest...

"Anyone here?" Terra called out nervously. Over and over she kept trying to think past that sip she took in hopes of some rational explanation for what happened. As her mind kept drawing blanks and reality set in, her stomach started to churn, her heart began pounding relentlessly. An ominous feeling washed over her in a chilling wave going down her body - it felt like the world started falling apart under her shaky legs, causing her breaths to quiver and escalate around that hammering in her chest and against her arm. The feeling of utter terror from the realization that a stranger stripped and left her there - that she was vulnerable, naked and helpless and probably wasn't alone. The unwanted explanation for what happened slowly setting in forced her to move anywhere but there in the open.

Without anywhere looking any safer, she started running towards the trees nearest to her away from this wide open and exposed grassy space to the comfort and cover of the forest, sitting between a bush and a tree so that she could stop her head from spinning and wonder where she was and why, what might have happened to her. Despite the lush green scenery she noticed that it was oddly quiet. not a single animal to be seen, not even your usual squirrel or bird in this seemingly endless forest. It didn't help her mind stop racing at all. It all seemed to look the same and there were no mountains or distinct features to be seen beyond the tall redwood trees and dense bushes.

"If this is a joke it's not funny!" she yelled out in an angry tone followed by heavy quivering breaths in desperation that it would all make sense and someone would stop this charade. sweat starting to bead down her now flushed, pink accented, pale skin as the forest became brighter and warmer, making her jet black hair stick to her shoulders. Before she could really even catch her breath, a loud gunshot and the snap of bark breaking from the tree behind her made her heart freeze in terror. Without a moment's hesitation, Terra ran deep and aimlessly into the trees to lose whatever was shooting at her, pushing herself as hard as her body could muster. She ran so fast that she started to trip and fall only to get right back up and run further. there was nothing but trees for minutes that seemed like hours, panting and sweating she kept going but nothing looked any different. After what felt like miles of distance into nowhere, she had to take a break. Her lungs couldn't draw in enough air, her heart was racing and pounding harder than she had ever felt, and legs were covered in cuts from stepping in bushes and tripping. A river caught her eye a little in the distance but the open and uncovered territory seemed so ominous. She couldn't even begin to know who her captors might be, running before she could see them.

She could only hope that lake led to something... anything at all besides more forest. Before she could second guess it She got up and bolted downstream within the forest alongside the lake, keeping track of it as she went. Dawn turned into full daylight she could see something else... There was a tall blue sign among the leaves further in the forest. Finally a sign of life. Having not seen her captors for a while she felt comfortable enough to sprint lightly toward it. Her pale skin was drenched in sweat and her legs and feet covered in cuts. She wanted so badly to scream for help but she kept her mouth shut as she reached the end of trees to find a road, not wanting to be found.

"Thank god" she let out in a quavering sigh of relief. She approached the sign but for some reason there wasn't a building...
If anything the sight was nerve wracking, Why is there a gas station sign with no building? she asked herself.


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Literature
Milkmaids

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Htabdoolb

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1 - Training

"Wow." Holly breathed.

"Aha, that was my first reaction too." Natalie said.

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5 - The Red Line

When she went to drop off her next full milk jug, Holly discovered that the jugs that she and Natalie had filled earlier in the day had been removed from the refrigerator.

"Our jugs were gone." Holly commented to Natalie, as they started their third and final break.

"Yep, they usually get collected once or twice a shift." Natalie replied.

"What do they do with all the stuff?" Holly asked.

"Oh, all sorts of things." Natalie replied, waving her hand vaguely. "Food additives, cosmetics, stuff like that."

"I think there are even a few kinds of medications that are based on it, at least in part." she said. "But the big one is food additives. That's where most of it ends up."

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6 - Package for You

It was nearly the end of Holly's first day as a milk maid. Both she and Natalie had filled, capped, and stored their last jugs of semen, and there was only about ten minutes left before their shift ended.

Holly followed Natalie as the woman grabbed an odd device from the top of the equipment shelf, then they moved to stand behind the large fellow that apparently needed to be replaced.

"This is a trimmer." Natalie said, showing the hand-held machine to Holly.

It was made mostly of white plastic, with a thick, round handle; a set of sturdy, slotted jaws that formed a moderately large circle when closed; and an unlit, dark green LED button at the top of the outer edge of the handle.

"It has a replaceable clip, which you can access at the bottom of the handle." Natalie instructed.

She released a catch with her free hand, and a cylindrical object slid smoothly out of the handle.

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7 - Dichotomy

Perhaps the worst part about getting his manhood cut off was the fact that he had known it was coming.

He had known for months, in fact. It wasn't hard to connect the dots when you had literally nothing else to think about all day. He had watched, with mounting dread, as all the men who had arrived before him had been dragged off, cockless and ball-free, by ones and twos, every few days.

Finally, he was the oldest one in his room, and he knew his time would come soon.

What he hadn't anticipated, however, was getting to hear his usual milkmaid describe his impending nullification to the new milkmaid. It was a special kind of horror, listening to them chat about cutting off a rather important piece of him in completely casual terms, as if they were just about to trim his hair, and being able to do nothing at all about it.

The fact that the girl who was about to remove his manhood had been, just a few hours earlier, eagerly stroking him to orgasm, only added salt and vinegar to the wound.

The bands that cinched around the base of his cock and balls, vise tight, inflicted upon him the worst pain he had ever felt in his entire life. He thought his agony could grow no worse, until, a few moments later, the girl had activated the blade that severed his sexual organs from him completely.

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8 - Epilogue

If it hadn't been for Emily, Holly would have been late for her second day of work as a milkmaid, which would probably not have impressed her employers much.

Natalie, who's next shift was not scheduled to start for another twelve hours, got to sleep in, which made Holly very jealous. Both Emily and Holly had awakened late, and had time for only a brief, cleansing splash of a shower together before they had to dash, quite literally, to work.

Panting, Holly had arrived at her room, 402, with just moments to spare.

The large male she and Natalie had trimmed the day before had been replaced; a new man was bound in his former position at the second horse in the first row.

Holly looked around the room for a few moments, taking in the view of all the men, securely bound, awaiting her touch.

Her men.

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I'm a bit confused as to why someone felt the need to repost this, as I had already posted this story here on gurochan.

Is there anywhere else it was reposted? I'm not particularly angry or irritated that it was, I'm just curious. I'm also a little flattered that someone thought it was worth reposting at all, ha ha.

3D CGI
Genre: guro, gore hentai, bloody hentai, extreme hentai, horror hentai, snuff fantasy, asphyxiation
Censored: no
Color: full color
Language: English
Format: jpg
Pages: 229
Size: 150.5 MB
Extreme hentai pics with blood, Ritual Guro

download file

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My antivirus is warning me of malware on the download site of vol18
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Nice job lol
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>>10240
It was one of those paid link shorteners. Just spam. Though the thread itself is not bad.

Freakshow
Poison
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Bumping.
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Actually, wouldn't this belong in /g/?
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>>9031
after
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i w<nt to be savege

3D CGI
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why don't these onion links work?
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>>9981
Because you have to be on the Deep Net to use them. Look it up.
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Unfortunately thjat blog got removed
maybe someone still has links to the files?
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you have some link about castration?

3D CGI
152764
I see a lot of people here with incredible skills.Is is possible to create some snuff animations or at least pictures for VR? i.e android? Like having sex with a girl and a monster comes takes her off your dick torture and kill her. Or just kil her! ;) I think it's possible! Will someone do this?
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Another sugestion will be to start with cardboard videos and apps, because that's what many people have at the moment.
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I made a little something. It's not what was proposed but goes to show it's possible. The assets themselves (the 3D models and some other code) took a long time, about a week of work, but the app itself took about half a day.

dorumeka.itch.io/zako-doru-cardboard-testing-build
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The game looks promising, and that doru ideea is a really nice thing.People will certanly appreciate such a product.Meanwhile i was thinking of video, short animations like the vr sex scenes with a guro element like ninja, hitmen, mad killers or some natural disaster appear and kill your girl for you.
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>>10199
Tested the app, it loads fast and the graphics are clearly there, but it doesn't show well on my device running android, the panels show but you can only see the doru's legs and half the menu.
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>>10202
That's ok n_n. Why are videos preferable?

>>10214
What's the phone you used? Would you mind sending me a screen cap? I would appreciate if you do it in my thread or via PM on dorumeka.tumblr.com so as not to fill this thread.

Role-playing
I have a selected few of my OCs. For all of you to slaughter.

The game is easy choose a girl and do what ever you want to her but it must end in a gory mess.

Anything goes here just as long as one of my girls end up dead heh.
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Whoa that was hardcore heh. Nice. You should snuff another one.
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Thanks, Fuuby, I'd be happy to. I hope that you don't mind me adding a bit of backstory. I'm assuming since you didn't leave bios for these characters you are okay with us inserting them into whatever dark world we need.

Selection: Tracie

The image I had hacked from from the Dragon Gang's deep-web website didn't really seem like her at all. In the shot she was half naked, grinning drunkenly and giving the mob lord (Known only as Big Guy) a lap dance.
Here in person she looked like some kind of prep-school drop out, in her short skirt and pink top.
I didn't expect to find anyone here in Big Guy's penthouse, but fortunately for me his secretary had come back in the middle of the night to do some work, so I had a stooge I could beat information out of.
I looked over at her, clearly just a kid, handcuffed to a chair, kicking and swearing under her breath. I tried to appeal to her humanity.
"Look . . ." I looked into her soft eyes, "Your boss is the bad guy. He's out there dealing drugs, breaking legs and hurting innocent people."
She didn't say anything, but she stopped kicking so I went on, "He . . . he hurt some people who were really important to me."
I waited for her expression to change, and it did, into a calloused smile, "Yeah, I bet him fucked them up good, like he's going to fuck you up!" she spat at me.
I tried to block out the images of the children I'd seen gunned down in the streets, but I couldn't repress my impulses, so I slapped her across the face.
She looked so shocked at first, like she literally couldn't believe someone would strike her in the body. I could see that she was holding back tears as she barked, "Fuck you!"

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Nice you really took your time with that little cunt.
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Selection: Roxy

The young fox girl was causally strolling around the park early in the morning hours. The sun didn’t even break through edge of the sky to shine any light. Roxy was just trying to get in her morning exercise. She decided to jog around the heavy forest area of the park since it a lot of people avoid it duo to the rumors of beast being out there. She shrugged it off seeing it as nothing more than simple horror stories to scare people.

She was an hour down the pathway, and switched onto the dirt road. 3 miles along these dirt roads that would easily lead her back to her home, seemed simple enough. She took heavy and deep breaths, with each step against the smooth ground. Her breast jiggled up and down against her smooth pink top wildly as the teen took a sharp turn upon the path way. As she took that turn, her eyes went wide in fear. Two twisted pairs of eyes hidden within the darkness of the trees, both focused dirty at her.

The killer intent behind those eyes made her freak out, her mild jog turned into a full sprint. She was running, trying get back home away from whatever had just saw her. As she run she could hear it, trees branches and leaves being broken as the two figures moved after her. The rustling in the woods got closer and closer to the woman. She looked back, eyes widen in horror to see the creatures own glowing orbs staring at her.

She turned around just in time to see another sharp turn in the pathway. The woman didn’t make it instead she fell off the pathway, she had hit a hill side and rolling downwards through thick trees and bushes deep into the forest. Her roll came to a horror stop when her back was pierced, blood rushed out the corner of her mouth down white furred cheeks before she spat out a large amount of it. She gasped in horror to see a petrified try branch sticking out her abdomen.

Part of large instincts were twisted around the branch stabbing through her stomach region. She could only cry a short whimper and allowed her body to tremble in pain. Her bladder opened the flood gates to large wave of pits as she lost some control of her body duo to the pain. All she could do was crying, thick tears down her cheeks as she gave a whimper of cry for help causing blood to drip from her mouth and over her bright pink top.

Her cry was answered, she saw it. The pair of eyes that were stalking her, could smell the blood and piss. Before her were two horrible creatures. One seemed to be a teen aged woman, only demonic with pale skin and twisted black metal teeth. The other a large black werewolf like creature, yet also very demonic with the same twisted teeth. Their evil grins showed their joy at seeing her in such pain. Both predators moved close to her before the woman moved close to her neck.

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Since no one seems like they are about to jump in this point, I guess I'll waste Rosita, hope you don't mind.

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Rosita is standing in front of me, her arms laced together behind her back, looking shy and a bit aloof, avoiding eye contact. She doesn't know that I know what she's done, but the spectators do, and they've come to see me wreck her.

"Same rules as always?" she asked, batting her lashes and making a cute duck face at me.
My eyes are drawn to her bouncing yellow breasts, wrapped in a skin-tight onesie. They are perky, and their nipples point straight ahead. She was adorable, but this was the end.
"New rule." I said.
"Oooh, will it be buttsex this time?" she giggled, like a schoolgirl.
"It's to the death."
She was quiet at first, starring at me with big, confused eyes, then she decided it was a joke, "Okay big boy, if you win I'll kill you."
"Good." I said, "And I'll do the same."

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Discussion
I've been following http://aogami.soup.io/ for some time, the innocence this artist can convey in the characters doing all the sexy stuff is amazing and just up my street. Even though furry, which constitute the majority of the author's works, isn't. But the ones with human characters, especially ones with Cardcaptor Sakura characters are among my favorite hentai pictures ever.
But now that site only has very few and very old stuff dating back to 2015. I'm sure the artist keeps drawing new pictures as I saw some of them appear on rule34.paheal.net. Unfortunately, I couldn't track the source.
Through googling I've found Aogami's accounts on pixiv, inkbunny, deviantart and even something called hiccears.com. But pixiv only has very old stuff, inkbunny has only furry (and even that is hell to navigate) and says human stuff is on hiccears.com, but even after I created an account there it doesn't show me any of Aogami's works (even though it says they have 137 submissions, so the works must be there on the site, but I don't see any way to get access to them), on deviantart there is also only very old stuff.

By any chance does anyone have any idea where I can keep following that artist?
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Did you try searching on e621 and furrybooru?
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I can see Aogami's drawings on various galleries, like rule34.paheal.net I mentioned has some new Cardcaptor Sakura drawings, but with that I can't be sure its all they got and new stuff will keep being posted. Also it's a pain to collect images from various sources and keep track if there's anything I've missed or if there are duplicates or if one has a better resolution than the other... But if they appear on paheal, they must come from somewhere, so if I only knew the source.
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Reason I suggest [random booru] is that content by a certain artist can be easily found by tag. Also, some comments or image metadata might contain information about the original source.
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Oh, thanks, it actually helped!
I've tried looking at source field on gelbooru before, but now I tried more thoroughly and found a link to the hiccears.com, and while I've also already found Aogami's account on that site before, I was unable to see the drawings themselves. But now that I've followed a direct link to the image it told me why: apparently there are settings for hiding extreme and mature kinds of content (I did look through the settings for that specific thing before, but was unable to find them).
The settings appear to be not linked to the account, but to an "identity" (the site allows you to create multiple "identities" on one account). To access identity settings you first go to the control panel, look for the list of your identities (each represented by its userpic) and above each userpic there's a pencil icon, you click it to go to the identity settings for that specific identity.

Literature
Milkmaids

1 - Training

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"Wow." Holly breathed.

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"Aha, That was my first reaction too." Natalie said.

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The space they had just entered was quite large, warmly lit, and a very comfortable temperature. What had impressed Holly, however, was what room 402 contained: men. There were at least fifty of them, all nude, restrained, and bent over, bound securely to sturdy yet graceful steel frames mounted in rows along the floor.

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"It's a pretty impressive sight, isn't it?" Natalie said, smiling back at Holly as she led the way into the room.

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"How many are there?" Holly asked, as they moved between the first two rows of males.

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6 - Package for You

&Tab;
It was nearly the end of Holly's first day as a milk maid. Both she and Natalie had filled, capped, and stored their last jugs of semen, and there was only about ten minutes left before their shift ended.

&Tab;
Holly followed Natalie as the woman grabbed an odd device from the top of the equipment shelf, then they moved to stand behind the large fellow that apparently needed to be replaced.

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"This is a trimmer." Natalie said, showing the hand-held machine to Holly.

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It was made mostly of white plastic, with a thick, round handle; a set of sturdy, slotted jaws that formed a moderately large circle when closed; and an unlit, dark green LED button at the top of the outer edge of the handle.

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"It has a replaceable clip, which you can access at the bottom of the handle." Natalie instructed.

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She released a catch with her free hand, and a cylindrical object slid smoothly out of the handle.

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Awesome! I'd prefer if they were boys, 10-13 years old though, so i pretended :3
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Finally! a Guro story that has men as the victims. And not little boys. No offence to those that like to read that sort of thing, I just prefer adults.

That and I doubt little boys would give as much substance as the men would.
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>>9089
>>9096

I'm glad you both were able to enjoy it. I do try to leave ages non-specific, so someone with a specific age preference can project what they most like onto the characters.

>>9089

You could copy/paste the text into a text editor, then search/replace the terms 'man' and 'men' with 'boy' and 'boys'. It would probably only take a minute or two, and it might help you enjoy the story more.

Literature
After many wars, humankind dispersed into the stars, some more peacefully than others. A few of their groups survived, some more comfortably than others. Eventually they unlocked the deepest secrets of the universe.

Time-travel led to wars unlike any seen before. Entire lineages prevented to undo mild inconveniences. Paradoxes that brought both morality and reality into question. Genocides to assure tyrants that their mistakes simply never occurred.

Eventually entire universes could be created, first simple and random ones initially filled with thermal, electric, and kinetic energy and simple elements, but eventually complex dimensions that were crystaline or mechanical and even galaxy-sized computers in inter-dimensional sub-space.

Once humans were capable of creating super-complex universes that were atom by atom replicas of the machines that gave them birth, they could essentially create infinite numbers of universes expanding eternally in every direction, some filled with life, some with fire, and some with nothingness.

As these humans became immortal gods, able to create new forces, shooting infinitely hot flames that broke their ancient understanding of conventional physics, teleport any distance or even into any realm, and be threatened by nothing except their own kind, they had only their desires and a new plane of science and philosophy to contend with, if they so chose.
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My creativity keeps going and demands I continue typing but the rest of me just cannot keep up... Thanks Hunter-Seeker for joining in, this girl will be made to see rows of cows and force-fed milk and human buttmeat for an eternity when her admittance comes.

Before that ticket is handed to his gatekeeper, I'm going to put her through quite some ordeals. A series of her witnessing herself being tortured in the future, with each wall a different scene, then her being dragged down the hall several different kinds of ways in turn. Being made to hold a railing covered in bugs with blades and flamed keeping her tummy back and her butt sticking out to be spanked as she's seen from behind and in front through windows, dragged upside down by her teachers, crawling inchworm-style covered in chains through fire, and a new room separating each transition, not to mention the torments getting her from the walls at the side along the way!

Eventually, the plan if for her to see her past self witnessing her. Hope I can keep this up without too much caffeine.
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Brilliant! I love stories with pain and submission but without blood and guts.
I also like it when the girlthing isn't too focused on and treated as the protagonist (I don't like feeling like the victim)
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Why thank you, I'm every post so far except yours and Hunter, and intend to rewrite this on other sites. But you can't edit a blank page as they say;)
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sage

Artwork
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Yep! Commissions are now open!

It took me a while to figure out the pricing. I had to factor in taxes + transaction fees + conversion rates... All the ugly stuff :-(.

Just send me an email to get started!

Go to my pixiv gallery to see what I can do:
http://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=12896581

Also check out my stickied Guide to R-18G:
https://www.gurochan.cx/art/res/7184.html

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ah it's a shame you are leaving us Veiled, it's been a wonderful journey with you, best of luck!
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>>16161
You're not gonna blackmail me, are you?

I guess I should be happy that I am the cause of your depression in this case? :-p

Like I said, I will probably still drop by, if I get inspired.

>>16162
Lol, I'm actually not quite sure abou the the consistent part. Thanks!

>>16166
Thanks! You keep making good stuff too :-)
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>>16202
After i read my post it does sound a bit like i'm treating you! xD Not my intention in the slightest - its just that ppl are dicks and can do stuff like this just to be mean.

I have one question tho. What about commissions? I mean new ones. You will or wont take them?
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>>16216
No commissions right now. They take up too much of my time :(.
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It's a shame you won't be as active here, but I'm glad to hear you're following through with your original goals!

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389068
Sneak peak at a comic I'll finish up one of these days.
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Good job.
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Just ignore the haters, rediculo. Your stuff is 10 times better than what they put out!
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Onix, no critique was requested therefore your critique was uncalled for.
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>>10111
It is common sense that it is requested merely if artist is posting something to the public. And that critique is precisely reason for making the post itself. Praising artwork is also critique by the way.
When you view any picture or read story you are obligated to write some kind of response as payment unless you think that it was total crap which is not worth o of your attention.


And also it WAS specially requested in another thread
www.gurochan.cx/3dcg/res/6641.html
I don't think that request has to be repeated every time.
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It's fine. No need for further argument. Thanks for all the opinions everyone. Just enjoy it it you like it.

Discussion
What's the easiest way to save stories (such as for reading on an ebook reader) that preserves italics and other formatting, but not the red-on-pink text? I've tried copying and pasting into Microsoft Word, but I'm not sure how to then clear the pink highlighting that comes along.
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Update: Opened a saved copy of the thread in question with Cold Turkey blocking Gurochan, and found that that worked. Obvious in retrospect.

Discussion
I know it isn't related to gurochan's main topic, that is guro, but I feel comfortable here and not sure of a better place to ask. I, like, tried google search it, but didn't find anything exactly like what I'm looking for.
What I find to be the greatest thing about the Strike Witches anime is how it handles girl not wearing anything over their panties, like pants or skirts. It is just a norm in that world and no one questions it and no one finds it erotic. There is also a great excuse for the camera to often focus on panties because the charachters fly and it just makes sense to place a camera behing a flying charachter. While it is undoubdatly done to please the eyes of audience, it is easy to pretend that it is indeed just natural. Like a special case of suspence of disbelief, only not regarding the story, but regarding the presense of panties all over the frame. It is easy to make oneself believe that it doesn't show panties purposefully, but rather doesn't see a reason to avoid showing them because it finds nothing indecent in them. And the best thing is how no charachter is ever concerned about it in any way, even when there are men involved, they don't see the lack of pants as shameful or erotic same way they don't see the lack of paranja as such, in fact in a Western country when you look at any random girl on the street it doesn't even come to your mind to notice she's not wearing a paranja because you're not expecting her too, and it would rather seem more uncommong and eye-catching if she did. So the same works for pants on girls in the Strike Witches anime. Also, the charachters don't just pose there with their lack of pants showing off their panties to the camera, they just go on with their buisness, there's a main story going on that has nothing sexual about it, so the more you keep watching the more even you, the viewer, stop noticing anything unusual about them not wearing pants, as it just shifts out of focus when you try following the story. But on the other hand it also doesn't forget to catch some natural-looking patsushots every so often, so you can still enjoy its eroticism, but at the same time it's kinda pure? Like the way it does look erotic on screen but is considered pure in-universe, makes you being able to enjoy both sides? Or maybe to better put it, makes you being able to enjoy the eroticism while not feeling dirty? Something like that.
So, I was thinking, might there be more of that? Or maybe even more extreme? Like take the same Strike Witches, but make them not wear any panties too, and make it casual the same way it is handled in the anime? An anime series like that would be impossible on TV, but manga like that can exist, right? Also preferably with loli or at least relatively young girls with no oversized breasts and asses.
Some other examples I know that are close, but not perfect:
- Saki. I haven't actually watched the anime or read the manga, but from what I've heard and saw on some pictures there's a girl whose casual clothes are very skimply and seem to imply no panties under a skirt that looks so short the other charachters would certainly have a glimpes of her pussy now and then (though it seems less risky in the anime then in the manga). There's especially one frame where she sits with one knee bent, exposing her pussy to whoever sits opposite to her. And, I can's tell for sure, as, like I've said, I haven't really read or watched it, but it seems like she and other charachters alike are similarly unconcerned about it (or maybe that's just my wishful thinking?) Another thing that is exacly like what I want is that her clothing isn't the focus, the main story is unrelated to anything sexual, while her choise of clothes is just a part of her charachter design, same way different charachters have different hair colors. So there were pros so far, but then come the cons: first of all, it seems like she's just a side charachters that doesn't appear so much, and all the other girls seem to have their clothes be pretty normal (even the skimpily-clad girl herself seems to spend half the time in a totally normal maid uniform). Second, I'm pretty sure the camera never actually goes under the skirt to show her presumably uncovered pussy, as it doesn't have an adult rating, but the way this is purpousefully avoided brings up awareness of how it is still actually indecent. I can imagine there be a scene where the camera cuts to another shot just before a bare pussy would be revealed, but the way I want it is for the camera to stay there as if there is no specific reason to cut right here.
Then again, if I'm mistaken somewhere in my opinion of Saki and it is actually closer to what I seek, please tell me, and I'll go read or watch it rigth away (also do tell if anime or manga is better then).
- Sasami-san@gambaranai. I've seen the anime (don't remember if there's a manga it's based upon or is it original?) and I don't really remember it that well, but I do remember towards the end there were several episodes with charachters in the hot springs going around naked (or mostly so? But I'm almost sure I remember them totally naked) but with it never being the focus, because unlike usual hot spring episoes it wasn't a filler, there was actually a story going on. Or maybe it was like the charachters undressed for the filler episode, but didn't dress again when the story kicked back in. I don't really remember well, but I remember I totally liked how the nudity was handled there. It was almost perfect, the only contra point I can think of is how the nudity was excused by the fact they were bathing, so it's not like it was casual by itself, it was just casual because it was during bathing.
- Dance In The Vampire Bund. I've read first chapter of it, the loli heroine is dressed in only her panties (which are pretty skimpy too) through the most of it, especially as some action ensues and there's just no time to think of modesty when they have to think of how to survive. However, I already see how it's not what I'm looking for: first, she wears panties. There's plenty anime and manga with girls in bikinis and it is not what I'm looking for. The fact she only wears panties and not a bra helps a bit, but not much. In the end of the chapters she puts on a cloak, so if she was wearing that without panties and also unfastened so that her nude body is seen underneeth, that would be great, probably even better than plain nudity. Second, the charachters do see nudity as erotic. The MC tries to act like he doesn't because she's just a child and he wouldn't be excited by a child, and the loli teeses him with her nudity, trying to make him admit he's excited. If it was 'nude Strike Witches' I want, neither of them would be aware her nudity is something to be excited about.
Again, please do tell me if it gets better in casual nutidy department.
P.S. I've just looked at the anime's OP and it has the loli dance in a pretty risky outfit, but it defies the laws of physics to make sure her nipples are always covered. Whould be pefrect if it was just casually revealing them like it's not a big deal, but it's just impossible for a TV anime, right?
- KonoSuba has Aqua with a short dress with seemingly no panties underneeth, but there's actually to little of focus on it in this case. And the camera never goes under her skirt either. So it falls under the same catrgory as Saki, I guess, together with any other anime that kinda makes it look like a certain girl is going commando, but that's it. I mean, this way it is almost perfectly casual okay ('amlost' because the camera purpousefully avoids actually looking under the skirt, and only teases you with it), but this way you can't enjoy it as erotic either.
- Umisho. This is nowhere near perfect, but I just want to tell that I did try reading it and didn't find it anything like I want. The title says nude swimming club, but instead there's just one girl who swims in the nude, and she's not doing it in the club either, she also explicitly states how she is embarrassed when seen naked by a boy, only exception is if the boy is her love interest (of course the idiotic MC doesn't take the hint. Which is why Strike Witches is so perfect without a male main charachter).
- Prisma Illya. I know it's not anything like what I've descrbed, but there's something about it that I can't put into words that makes me enjoy it the same way. I don't know.

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Oh, that's a lot of everything. Let's see...

> Astarotte no Omocha

I remember starting watching the anime, then I dropped it, don't really remember why... from what I remember there was a pantyless girl who was just what I'm looking for, but the rest wasn't any good...
I've just read the first chapter of the manga and it seems to be more open about her pantylessness than the anime. I guess I can give manga a try then.

> Kodomo No Jikan

> Kanokon
> KissXSis
> Queen's Blade
It seems these all have both anime and manga, so I wonder if the anime for any of them worth watching or I should go straight to the manga?

> Touhou anime series


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>>4086
You are welcome, i found this research usefull also! I believe that Astarotte is number one because it takes place in a world where ecchi behavior is normal.I recomend you read the manga and see the anime also, it has "that" feeling you found in Strike Witches.
Kodomo No Jikan is great both as a manga and as an anime, i recomend both.For Kanokon and KissXSis i think you can stick to the anime and read the manga only if you like the anime.In Queen's Blade they power their weapons thru masturbation so there is a lot of that and there is an OVA where the elven master instructor exposes herself all the time. I've mentioned the Pokemon episode because of its historical value and because of its deleted scene where James literarly turns into a woman and shows his breasts to Misty.

There is a Touhou anime! You can watch it on youtube, but i think its a bit abridged, and on torrent sites like nyaa.se Its great and has a lot of casual nudity and implied yuri.
The story of 15 girls is funny, i didn't bother with the plot but the characters are put in situations like, "they are late, lets have sex!" :) has incest, lolicon and a lot of stuff. Imouto Jiru its a little gem in my opinion with a legendary scene where a neko girl wearing only an apron is cooking while wiggling her round ass, too bad the series was left unfinished.

More sugestions are: Another lady innocent, yet another unfinished masterpiece that is floating around in uncesored form. An example here, the daughter comes home walks in on father who is having sex with a maid, hugs him, kisses him and he ejaculates in the maid.Maids walk around with their tits out and so on.It also had a good plot, sadly it was also never finished!

There are a lot of similaries with strike witches to be found in the dark world of the '80 anime, in series like Cream Lemon and Lolita anime if you want to go there.Many of those are obscure and hard to find! Good luck!
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> There is a Touhou anime!
So what's the title?
I managed to find two:
Touhou Niji Sousaku Doujin Anime: Musou Kakyou (2008)
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Gensou Mangekyou: The Memories of Phantasm (2011)
Which is the one with casual nudity?
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>>4090
The second one! It's verry well crafted and the casual nudity is a part of the magical atmosphere of Gensokyo! Resembles Strike Witches a bit too, with girls flying, fighting and using magic!

Don't even bother with the first one! Enjoy!
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So, I've watched Imouto Jiru and Another lady innocent.
Both look like rather generic hentai, though the former had the cute nude apron moment, and latter had that daughter hug while sex moment and it could probably get better in the later episodes, but unfortunately there isn't any.

Also I've stumbled onto the manga Mujaki na Rakuen. It's a comedy that derives its fun from children constantly getting into some sexy situations without realizing how sexy those situations are (except for the protagonist who is actually a 25 years old guy who happened to time leap into his childhood).
For example, a girl and her father sit on a bench in the park and chat. The father happens to drop a bottle of water onto his daughter so that it wets her panties. She lets him pull off her panties just right there. Later she climbs a whatever that construction of tubes on playground where children climb is called without care that the protagonist can see from below her lack of panties. Later she joins the protagonist in the bathroom without seeing anything wrong with it.
Though I think it goes a bit too far with mostly each episode ending in the protagonist somehow cumming (usually as a result of accidental touches by girls) which he also tries to hide which results in him having such an expression on his face that you can't say if he came or had his balls crushed.
And it also gets somewhat repetitive after a while.
It's not 100% ideal, as the protagonist being aware of sexuality and embarrassed by it goes against the casual atmosphere, and also it keeps staying on that unsatisfying edge where it goes almost to actual sex, but actually it doesn't. I mean, if it's about innocence, I'd go with either they can all casually be naked and hug and wrestle and whatever without it giving anyone any sexual thoughts (the reader is allowed to have such thoughts and the author is allowed to frame shots to make the reader have them, but the characters are not) OR like in my "Innocence" story where they can all casually have all kinds of sex with each other, but still not have any "sexual" thoughts, if it makes any sense, like it's just a fun game, but it wouldn't occur to them to associate it with lust, filth or even relationships. Also if you're interested in the latter, take a look at Aogami's drawings if you can find them (see the other thread I've just started where I wonder how to find that artists' new works).

There was something else I wanted to say on the topic...
Ah! The Flip Flappers. I st

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A new RPG based on this story called "Fleshscape" is now available for free on DriveThru RPG (PWYW Pay What You Want, even $0).



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Log One
I awaken. I don't know it at the moment, but this day marks my fourth straight year of existing in the dogscape. I push myself up from the carpet of writhing, twitching dogflesh beneath me and rise to my feet, stretching in the morning sun. It took me a while to learn to balance on the layer of solid dogs that now blankets every inch of solid ground, but nowadays I can walk and run as easily and as fast as I ever did on soil or concrete. Perhaps faster...
This was a city once, I think, though which one I can't remember. I only owe my guess to the massive pillars of dogs jutting into the sky, perhaps ancient buildings now completely filled and overgrown by canine biomatter. I climbed one once, sinking my fingers and toes deep into the dogwall to gain purchase, and after hours and hours of climbing was rewarded with an incredible vista - fur and eyes, panting tongues and wagging tails, hugging the contours of the once-barren land and stretching in a single aeomebic mass farther than the eye can see.

Now I don't do that, though. Now I merely go about my day. I hike to the Gardens, where the dogplants sprout up in bizarre shapes from the floor of the dogscape, and reach up to pluck the fetal puppyfruits right off the wagging, energetic branches. I bite into the succulent flesh, the juices dribbling down my chin and dripping down to be reabsorbed by the groundflesh, and revel in the savory taste. I'm thirsty, so I range until I find one of the Mothermounds, and there I suckle at a teatpatch until I've had my fill of milk. Sometimes I see other humans around me, as well-adapted to the dogscape as I am, but I barely acknowledge them, say nothing. What, after all, is there to say? The world is different now - what meaning would our old words have?

Free-ranging dogs are becoming rarer and rarer to see now, and those I do see seem as lost, as passive as I am. They too graze on the dogplants, step carefully over the undulating, bleeding dogfloor, dimly acknowledge myself and one another. In the distant sky, and on the far horizon, I sometimes see massive forms sail or crawl or undulate, and I wonder if in this new world normal, singular, ambulatory dogs have become as obsolete as I am.

Log Two

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Log Thirteen
While archaic, tribal worship of the Dogmother, in all its visible and fleshy glory, is the most common form of "religion" in the barbaric Dogscape, there does exist another mythology. One practiced only in distant, isolated pockets, and by a few of the older survivors. The exact details change from tribe to tribe, year to year. But the basics never change. It is the legend of the Beginning of the Dogscape, the genesis of the world we know. It tells of a time when humans were plentiful, and walked upon ground that wasn't alive.
There is a god. Or a demon perhaps. A dog that lived amongst the humans was even accepted and provided for by a human family. But it was no ordinary dog. This beast lived for over 50 years, while canines of the time rarely lasted more than a decade. It was greatly powerful, more in control of its owner family than they were of it. They say, it went out at night and hunted human prey, bringing back large collections of bones as trophies to its home. But the humans tried to ignore it, convince themselves that it wasn't a problem.

Soon though, as the Origin Dog reached a century of age, it became increasingly powerful and unlike others. More strange disappearances and even attacks during the day. Vehicles were found with deep bite marks through metal, and homes were burrowed into from below.

The government of the time, many times more powerful than any chieftain of today, captured the hellhound. They performed experiments, tried to understand where it channeled its energy from. Progress was good; it looked as though even the secret to immortality could be gained from this dog! But accidents occur. The Betrayer, as they call her, who worked at the government facility, felt sympathy for the GodDog. She released him, and concurrently, the all-consuming hell that is Dogscape.

The enraged beast no longer held any sympathy for humanity. As it thrashed recklessly through the lab, mutated samples adhered to its flesh, growing like a cancer. Soon, what would become Dogscape was spreading like wildfire, its maw gnashing at everything that moved, its hide spreading over soil, stone, and sea.

What is the name of this horrible demon? It varies, but they all come from a similar etymological origin, I believe. I've taken down names from all over the world, Armad, Me'arm, Aduke.

And yet, the DogMother is most certainly feminine. Well, it is said that The Betrayer was in fact, the first human assimilated into the Dogscape.

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Log Fourteen
It's cold here. Jets of moist breathe dot the landscape amid undulating hills. There are no proper dog trees, only short piles of huddling dog limbs. Teats are few and far between, and when I find one I must work to coax the milk into a skin bladder.
I move across the hills, my feet numb through the shoes I have fashioned. I move in the direction that seems easiest, a subtle and mangy slope that I only just noticed was guiding my path in a general downhill fashion. Where there is fur it is thick and rancid with matted oil. I don't know why The Mother does what it does, but all of her fruits have their uses. I hack at a fur clump, separating it from the flesh below. There is only a little blood from a grazed skin tag. I fold and shape the waxy fur onto the insulating hairy coverings on my body. The dogflesh rumbles beneath me in a more than disconcerting way. It has been doing that for the past several weeks, more so the further I have traveled. It is getting colder.

I can hear only the wind now, tearing across The Mother. The howls, warbling and mournful, have stopped. The sharp barks and yips no longer form a background cacophony. I huddle into my coverings, and shoulder ahead. I have no path to follow but forward.

The ground feels harder here. The gentle give of the dogland has ceased, giving way to a dull sound absorbing thud of matted fur. I slipped yesterday on what seemed to be a lake of solid piss. It was not reabsorbing into The Mother. My own shivering seems to syncopate with the occasional rumbles of The Mother. Her flesh no longer seems like a living being, but I know that deep within her the blood flows. It is so cold here.

I continue forward every day. The ground slopes more, and I struggle to sleep in a forgiving skin fold. There is no purpose but to move forward now. One foot in front of the other. It has been dark for as long as I can remember. How long will this night last?

The air is dry. The land is mostly featureless and hard as I walk. The wind blows clumps of brittle hair across my face, and they hurt. A soft pop, a subtle blue flash, and then they blow past me. My hands are deep within my coverings. They are numb, and if I expose them to ward off the shocks then the cold will take them from me. I have already lost three toes. I can no longer feel that foot. I no longer bother to light fires in the deep crooks where I sleep, but the last I saw of that foot it was black and swollen. It felt like it was burning.

My travel is slow. I have heard soft subtle tapping sounds, but when I investigate I find only dog claws moving against the ground. The rumbles have continued, and with them now come subtle rending sounds, like a mouth chewing on a bone. When the sounds intensify I move faster. I don't know what causes them, but I do not think it is The Mother.

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Epilogue

"My name is Charles Mountel, of Arctic Ice Station one. The abomination is not here, it is too cold. Tigger and I are the last survivors. We are 14 nautical miles South of the North Pole, directly North of Vancouver. Triangulate our position based on this radio signal. This message will repeat in five minutes."

The radio broadcast the message again, as it had thousands, if not hundreds of thousands of times. A cold, dead, desiccated body sat huddled before the radio systems in a chair. At its feet lay the curled, dead body of a mutt.
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Alright, this was pretty amazing. Not many people apply animals enough in their stories, but I think there's a lot of potential in it, so I do enjoy and can appreciate how you depicted this furry, twisted post-apocalypse here.

I think my favorite part definitely had to be the descriptions of men fucking dog mounds dotting the dogscape. It's so horrific, yet so erotic to imagine.

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A new chapter of Maruo's current series, from the February 2017 issue of Comic Beam.

24 pages, in English

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Awesome x2! Thanks for this one too!

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Ok so let play, girls to, you find me in half but alive what do you do
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Well cut with all the organs visible, and my lower half is in tights jeans,
I have my head on my jeans trying to go under to touch my self, and one rubbing my tits, trying to stay alive
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I woud first check what damage you suffered and how long you are going to survive first job is of course to stop bleeding in some way like plugging or tying severed arteries because I prefer you to stay alive for a bit longer.

And if you are in so good mood I woud as you for a blow job while I take off your jeans.
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I'll suck it good well I finger my self, trying to remember the pleasure
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I'll take the jeans off the lower half. Then I have sex with it while grabbing around your inside, guts, womb.
THen when I'm gonna dump my load inside, straight to the womb. While you watch it happened.
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While you do all this I'll be watching licking my tits, trying to stay alive when you finish I'll eat my womb lick my pussy

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Right. I sort of backed myself into a corner on naming these things. Technically this is part of my "Offers" universe, but it's a side story with absolutely zero connection to any of the other stories in the series.

Also, technically this is incomplete because I'm planning on adding two or three epilogues. But as far as the story itself goes it's self contained and concluded. So read away, but expect more to be posted later.

Liselle offers Aria her Life


"Do you know why you are here?" Aria asked her daughter, Liselle, from atop her throne from the top of Afterlife. Next to her, restrained at the base of her couch was another Asari, covered in an Asari-leather set of bondage restraints that emphasized her bright blue tits, each one pierced with a set of silver studs through the nipples. The restraints came complete with a full face mask to hide the Asari's identity, with tiny holes for Ara's prized lover to see through, and a ball gag to keep her quiet. Liselle knew it was Councilor Tevos beneath the mask, her other mother; the bright blue skin and piercings gave the game away to those who knew her. But despite Tevos being the Asari counselor, it was hard to fear the powerful politician when her arms were strapped behind her and she was unable to speak the slightest word through the gag stretching her jaw. Liselle herself was naked, her soft purple almost lavender skin shining in the wild lights of the club.

Liselle was nervous. This wasn't the first time that her mother had called her to her seat of power, the older matriarch was incredibly controlling and had taken every opportunity to enforce Liselle's purpose upon her. To Aria, Liselle wasn't just a daughter, or her most effective employee, she was also Aria's prized possession; an absolutely pristine Azure filet that had been aging for nearly three centuries. A filet that as of yesterday was no longer untouched.

“No, mother,” Liselle responded, hesitantly. Her mother was obsessed with the proper care of her Azure, telling her since she was young that her sole purpose in life was to one day have her sex harvested to fuel one of her mother's orgies. The diets her mother put her on since a young age were never designed with her health in mind (though they were hardly unhealthy), but aimed instead at giving her azure extra flavor for Aria to enjoy once she took it from Liselle, killing her in the process. The friends her mother had found for her had been focused on teasing her and keeping her in a constant state of arousal without any relief, to add spice to the cut. And now, Liselle had ruined almost three hundred years of hard work her mother had put into her.


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You write good, really good, kudos! I love the ME universe and extreme fantasies but dislike consensual snuff fantasies, but thanks to your writing skills this was still an amazing story!
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>>9009
Thanks!
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nice story ,really good :) ,can you write a story wher eis a girl mutiladed and formed into a oral doll,by removing her limbs,then pelvis and shoulders and breast,and also some face parts? i would love it too!
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Wow, missed this the first time around. I love your Mass Effect stories, keep them up!

Have you considered writing one with Ashley 'starring'?
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>>9038
I don't take requests. But even if I did that idea probably isn't something I'd write.

>>9045
I have a story on Hentai Foundry where Male Shepard and Ashley destroy Liara, but I haven't finished it. I probably won't do one with Ashley by herself on my own (not a huge fan of her), but I am doing one with Jack and Miranda as part of a trade and I probably wouldn't have done taht on my own either.

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If you have any gaming ID's you want to share, post them here!

My PSN: Datanugget
My Steam: e621415270717
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I think my PSN is Psyco333

Or is it Psycho333

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