More of your writing is always welcome. Even if this part might end up scrapped, it's still nice to see the story is not forgotten.

I've decided not to delete the chapter after all and just accept is as a weak point of this series. I like the content of it, I just dislike *how* I wrote it.

I'll just try to make the next part better.

So I'm waiting for suggestions what to do with little Anna. :)

>>11647
Your suggestion is already noted and I'll most likely kill her too.

>>11649

It was never forgotten, I'm just constantly either too busy or too tired to write. I'm sure you know this pain all too well.

>>11661
i like the idea of a good hard beating and skull fucking for Anna, as for the ice cream girl i think a gutting would be nice. also always down for some brain play.

I don't know if you would like adding it in your story, but some sort of gutting of Anna or someone else would be interesting.

>>11669
Seconding the gutting suggestion; maybe another older teen gets gutted and Maggie tries to burrow into her body cavity or something weird.

I kinda want Anna to happily going on a murder spree, before eagerly killing herself, but not before making Jack and Maggie promise to have lots and lots of babies together.

Maybe the murder spree becomes a death orgy? Or perhaps to make things interesting, whether someone lives or dies is decided by a coin flip.

Let ice cream girl use Anna's brain to make ice creams and sell it to other girls. She may take small bit for start, and even let Anna taste her own frozen brain with milk.

Really looking forward to the continuation of this awesome story.

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Is this story still being written. I sure hope so, it's awesome

>>13259
It is, I'm just busy and lazy at the same time so it may take a while.

>Let ice cream girl use Anna's brain to make ice creams and sell it to other girls.

> She may take small bit for start, and >even let Anna taste her

> own frozen brain with milk.


Interesting idea. Anna and Maggie at a birthday party... Anna would be volunteered or choosen...a farewell kiss and lick from the birthday girl... the caterer would strap Anna into a special chair...and the guest kids could see the procedure.

Where are you Rosie?
More chapters please!

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It has always disapointed me that a story that starts with breathtaking meal, developed into a story about fucking 6yearolds :-(

like… i get the teen stuff… anyone who like… would be old enough to be a sexual being… i get its sexy to think about them having sex and about them being snuffed. Breathtaking meal HOT, Outdoor Cinima HOT AS FUCK, part three also hot… but from there… i feel like the authors were just trying to be more and more shocking… but also didn't know how to do it and so just defaulted to making the victims younger and younger.

I did try to give it a chance, and like the girl calling out to her mom and her mom NOT being helpful… I get the apeel but that could have happened with a 12 year old or a 13 year old… I.d.k. … Maybe its because the sierese started so far to the other extreme that I was almost turned off by the trashy tarted up bimbos that the ending of this one seems like such a swing, but most of the time the codes make it obvious by puting things like, "toddler," in the story codes and starting off with that sort of stuff. When its obvious I can just avoid them, but i almost feel like I was honey pot trapped by this one.

Hot young interns getting raped and snuffed at lunch? 8-P…

A tight young teen being shown the wonders of her own body for the first time but then getting tricked into letting a guy snuff her because he decides she is too much of a word-omity-ditz? Hot Ass FUCK.

Taking the girls mom back home and fucking her HARD. Almost vanila by comparison… and I don't love the slight cockhold undertones but I get it and still a pretty fun read.

Finding a kinky girl who needs a babysitter and then abusing her… I'm not really into concentual snuff… and 10 is… too young for me but o.k. maybe this is a one chapter dip… and she lives so maybe the next chapter will involve some sort of time skip???

Lets go to the park and rape toddlers in the most graphic chapters of the entire series…. WHAT?!?!? that's a fucking heal turn!?!!!

Am I alone in this opinion?

>>25654

I agree with not being turned on by toddler stuff, but I don't think it's there just for shock value.

I think it fits pretty well within the setting, and fits the theme; it's obvious that the mc is just kinda going through life, looking at the present situation, and just doing whatever strikes his fancy.

In a story like that, you should assume that anyone who's even mentioned is a potential snuffee

well, then the obvious solution is to not mention toddlers. Again, it is't in the codes and the story started out with full adults…

I do like the basic story setup its just… you know?

>>25654
IDK, personaly I dislike anything non-consensual. There's plenty of non-con material out there, consensual snuff is in short supply. I'm not a fan of it involving toddlers either (especially non-consenting toddlers), but the consensual stuff kind of makes up for it for me…

Don't Like Don't Read

>>25654
IDK, personaly I dislike anything non-consensual. There's plenty of non-con material out there, consensual snuff is in short supply. I'm not a fan of it involving toddlers either (especially non-consenting toddlers), but the consensual stuff kind of makes up for it for me…

Don't Like Don't Read

Oh, and the story started with a 13yo. That's not a full adult.

FYI I never wrote anything for "shock value". I only really write what I'm into at the moment, and I fully agree with the "Don't Like Don't Read" advice.

I wouldn't expect too many adults in my stories if I ever write anything else, but I'll try to be better about tagging stuff. I'm not sure if I'd consider 6yo to be a toddler, though.

Speaking of writing more. I finished this chapter so I could have a clear slate if I ever want to write more, so enjoy this short wrap-up.

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# Outdoor cinema
## Chapter five
### Part two
#### tags: f/f, preteen, tween, snuff, consensual/dub-con, dismemberment

"Just lie down on top of your mom facing me. Yes, that's perfect"

Maggie smiled at the younger girl as she settled on top of her mother's corpse.

"Now wait a few seconds and prepare for the fun part."

"Okay." Anna smiled back.

Jack watched Maggie look for and then pick up the knife that Anna's mother threw aside earlier. She then went back towards Anna and her mom's body and kneeled next to them.

"What's your plan?"

Jack asked with interest in his voice.Besides

"I'm gonna cut her arm off at the elbow."

Maggie proceeded to do just that and thirty seconds and some grunting later she held Anna's mom's bloody arm in her own. Her top got some blood on it in the process, so (much to Jack's delight) she just took it off. After her top hit the ground she grabbed the arm by the forearm and moved it in a waving motion.

"That's so cool!" Anna seemed impressed with Maggie's handiwork.

"I'm glad you like it."

Maggie flashed a smile, then turned towards Jack.

"Care to join us?"

"I need some rest, crazy girl. I'll just watch this time if you don't mind."

"Your loss!"

Maggie stepped over the two girls and crouched directly over Anna's face.

"You make me feel good, and I'll do the same for you. Deal?"

"Deal!"

Anna obediently laid her head between her mom's breasts, which were quickly getting pale and cool, and stuck out her tongue.

Maggie moved her pussy onto Anna's face and moaned as the girl's tongue started moving, while she cupped Maggie's butt with her hands. She started by licking off all the cum that dripped from Maggie's ass to her pussy and then started working on her tiny clit.

"You've definitely done that before…"

"Mhmm…"

Maggie wasted no time and started working on her end of the deal. She straightened two of the severed limb's fingers, lubricated them generously with her saliva and gently pushed them straight into Anna's butthole. A quiet moan could be heard from below Maggie's pelvis when the fingers penetrated Anna's cute little butt. Maggie proceeded to move the dead fingers in and out of the little girl and simultaneously reached the girl's pussy lips with her mouth. She had to arch her back a bit, because Anna was significantly shorter than her.

First Maggie licked Anna's outer lips, then gently stuck her tongue between the undeveloped labia and moved up and down her tiny mound. For a few minutes the girls worked on each other, moaning and licking in unison, while Jack watched from the side.

Anna was reacting to every little movement as if Maggie's tongue was electrified. Every lick and every movement of her mother's dead fingers sent shivers through her prepubescent body. Much sooner than Maggie anticipated Anna's moans picked up the pace and before long the younger girl moaned even louder than before, her body tensed, toes curled and with a shriek of pleasure she dug her nails into Maggie's butt cheeks, hard enough to break the surface of the skin, as a powerful orgasm shook her little body.

"Damn, I'm not ready! Where's the knife?"

Maggie stopped licking Anna and started looking around for the knife, but couldn't see it anywhere. Anna was shaking under her while she frantically looked around.

"I was going to kill you when you came!"

There was no response from Anna, she just started flailing her arms and slapping Maggie's butt. Focused on finding the knife Maggie didn't notice that she put all of her weight on the little girls face and that she was now frantically trying to let Maggie know that she was suffocating, her air cut off completely by Maggie's pussy and thighs.

Jack was sitting on the bench, amused. He knew where the knife was, because he picked it up earlier, but watching Anna suffocate under Maggie's naked body was too hot to interrupt. The parts of Anna's face that weren't covered by Maggie got more and more purple every second and Anna's mom's arm flailed side to side, it's fingers still firmly inside the girl's anus.

When Maggie finally gave up the search Anna wasn't moving anymore. Only then did Maggie noticed what had happened.

"Hey, are you alive? Don't tell me you died just like that!" She asked annoyed, but there was no response.

Maggie quickly lifted her butt and Anna immediately took a reflex breath, still unconscious.

"Oh, you are alive!" She exclaimed happily. "But not for long."

She pushed herself back down onto Anna's unmoving body, and since Anna couldn't really lick her pussy anymore she started grinding on the child's face herself, taking care not to let her breathe anymore. She was close when Anna started coming, so soon she was on the verge of orgasm as well. Just when she was about to come Anna's body started shaking in her death throes.

This was enough to send Maggie over the edge and she shook as well, pleasure reaching every part of her body, while Anna stopped moving below her and her lifeless body. She rode the waves of her orgasm, sitting on top of two girls' corpses, panting heavily from pleasure and exhaustion.

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When she finally calmed down Maggie looked at Jack and smiled.

"I hope you enjoyed the show, because there's much more where that came from."

"Better words have never been spoken."

Jack smiled back.

Maggie stood up and walked over to him, then kissed him on the lips.

"Come on, big man let's take a walk and look for something else to## Chapter five
### Part two

"Just lie down on top of your mom facing me. Yes, that's perfect"

Maggie smiled at the younger girl as she settled on top of her mother's corpse.

"Now wait a few seconds and prepare for the fun part."

"Okay." Anna smiled back.

Jack watched Maggie look for and then pick up the knife that Anna's mother threw aside earlier. She then went back towards Anna and her mom's body and kneeled next to them.

"What's your plan?"

Jack asked with interest in his voice.Besides

"I'm gonna cut her arm off at the elbow."

Maggie proceeded to do just that and thirty seconds and some grunting later she held Anna's mom's bloody arm in her own. Her top got some blood on it in the process, so (much to Jack's delight) she just took it off. After her top hit the ground she grabbed the arm by the forearm and moved it in a waving motion.

"That's so cool!" Anna seemed impressed with Maggie's handiwork.

"I'm glad you like it."

Maggie flashed a smile, then turned towards Jack.

"Care to join us?"

"I need some rest, crazy girl. I'll just watch this time if you don't mind."

"Your loss!"

Maggie stepped over the two girls and crouched directly over Anna's face.

"You make me feel good, and I'll do the same for you. Deal?"

"Deal! I have a question, though… Are you going to kill me afterwards, like I killed my mommy?"

"Would you like that?"

"I think so. I don't really have anything interesting to do without my mommy. And I think she liked it when she died, so maybe I will, too."

"Only if you do a good job at licking me, then. Lie down."

Anna smiled and obediently laid her head between her mom's breasts, which were quickly getting pale and cool, and stuck out her tongue.

Maggie moved her pussy onto Anna's face and moaned as the girl's tongue started moving, while she cupped Maggie's butt with her hands. She started by licking off all the cum that dripped from Maggie's ass to her pussy and then started working on her tiny clit.

"You've definitely done that before…"

"Mhmm…"

Maggie wasted no time and started working on her end of the deal. She straightened two of the severed limb's fingers, lubricated them generously with her saliva and gently pushed them straight into Anna's butthole. A quiet moan could be heard from below Maggie's pelvis when the fingers penetrated Anna's cute little butt. Maggie proceeded to move the dead fingers in and out of the little girl and simultaneously reached the girl's pussy lips with her mouth. She had to arch her back a bit, because Anna was significantly shorter than her.

First Maggie licked Anna's outer lips, then gently stuck her tongue between the undeveloped labia and moved up and down her tiny mound. For a few minutes the girls worked on each other, moaning and licking in unison, while Jack watched from the side.

Anna was reacting to every little movement as if Maggie's tongue was electrified. Every lick and every movement of her mother's dead fingers sent shivers through her prepubescent body. Much sooner than Maggie anticipated Anna's moans picked up the pace and before long the younger girl moaned even louder than before, her body tensed, toes curled and with a shriek of pleasure she dug her nails into Maggie's butt cheeks, hard enough to break the surface of the skin, as a powerful orgasm shook her little body.

"Damn, I'm not ready! Where's the knife?"

Maggie stopped licking Anna and started looking around for the knife, but couldn't see it anywhere. Anna was shaking under her while she frantically looked around.

"I was going to kill you when you came!"

There was no response from Anna, she just started flailing her arms and slapping Maggie's butt. Focused on finding the knife Maggie didn't notice that she put all of her weight on the little girls face and that she was now instinctively trying to let Maggie know that she was suffocating, her air cut off completely by Maggie's pussy and thighs.

Jack was sitting on the bench, amused. He knew where the knife was, because he picked it up earlier, but watching Anna suffocate under Maggie's naked body was too hot to interrupt. The parts of Anna's face that weren't covered by Maggie got more and more purple every second and Anna's mom's arm flailed side to side, it's fingers still firmly inside the girl's anus.

When Maggie finally gave up the search Anna wasn't moving anymore. Only then did Maggie noticed what had happened.

"Hey, are you alive? Don't tell me you died just like that!" She asked annoyed, but there was no response.

Maggie quickly lifted her butt and Anna immediately took a reflex breath, still unconscious.

"Oh, you are alive!" She exclaimed happily. "But not for long."

She pushed herself back down onto Anna's unmoving body, and since Anna couldn't really lick her pussy anymore she started grinding on the child's face herself, taking care not to let her breathe anymore. She was close when Anna started coming, so soon she was on the verge of orgasm as well. Just when she was about to come Anna's body started shaking in her death throes.

This was enough to send Maggie over the edge and she shook as well, pleasure reaching every part of her body, while Anna stopped moving below her and her lifeless body. She rode the waves of her orgasm, sitting on top of two girls' corpses, panting heavily from pleasure and exhaustion.

—

When she finally calmed down Maggie looked at Jack and smiled.

"I hope you enjoyed the show, because there's much more where that came from."

"Better words have never been spoken."

Jack smiled back.

Maggie stood up and walked over to him, then kissed him on the lips.

"Come on, big man let's take a walk and look for something else to do."

Jack grabbed her hand and they slowly walked away.

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The ice cream girl watched them leave, she smiled when she noticed dried cum spanning from Maggie's butt down to her knee. She then looked at the mom and daughter pair lying on the ground in a pool of blood, their bodies pale and serene. She quickly put up a "I'll be right back" plaque on the ice cream stand, took her clothes off not to get the blood on them and slowly walked towards the corpses with one hand already working on her pussy.

"Sorry ladies, I'm really horny and you're really sexy. I know you're dead, but the cold never bothered me anyway…"

Let's go, a new update for outdoor Cinema!

I didn't believe that this day would ever come.

I though rosie was dead by now for sure!

>>25675

It's fantastic to see you again Rosie!

Woot!!!

An update on Outdoor Cinema? Wow, that's awesome! Almost like there's still hope for gurochan.

>>25671
N>>25674
On, the first chapter of this just isn't in this thread. The original first chapter to this story was called, "A breath taking meal." and it involved this protagonist passing by a trio of hot interns out on their lunch brake.

>>25671
N>>25674
Im not sure, but was there a copy past error here

>>25695
That was 100% not me. The first story I ever posted on Gurochan was Outdoor Cinema chapter one.

>>25695
I think they mean this story by Kittycunt
>>8123

is there gonna be more?

I think we all hope so.

>>25729

Maybe ;)

^ :-)

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i am kinda curious.
do all those carcasses get recycled or just tossed in the dumpster?

It occurse to me that there is a loose thread that could be used by someone to continue this story a bit, either with jack or with Rosie's Dad:


""Hey, Jack!"
"Yeah?" He looked at Mark.
"If you ever feel like having some more fun, I've got a few more girls. I probably won't have time to take care of them without Jess anyway."
"I'll think about that." Jack smiled.
"You know where I live."

Jack got into the car and drove off."

>>26505
well, almost certainly that was the purpose of that line, for an eventual continuation of the story. Maggie moving with Jack perhaps and having two twinsluts to snuff for celebrating.

>>7768
I just realised that "Children playing with dogs" could've ment that the dogs were fucking the children.

>>26588

I honestly don't think that was the intent.

I sometimes have the weirdest thoughts whenever I drink too much.

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