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> According to your story Bunny is arrogant one as she initiated actually started everything with her bragging about being superior and mocking Novahawk.
> I will try to write alternative ending on how it should end.
>.I love the idea of forcing them to choose between losing their breasts and losing their lives. I wish they were a bit more reluctant to make that choice. Heroes are ready to lay down their lives, but giving up their breasts isn't part of the job description. Even so, I guess realistically the choice is obvious.
> Better than before because now the story is pretty consistent and logical. Unlike the first version where lots of things were lacking logic.
> You gave too little screen time for actual breast destruction.
> I doubt if in that kind of world they don't have some better experimental technology than implants or prosthetics.
> Attacking teammate in so horrible way was too dumb because how she will explain that to her team?
> I had no time but I had some interesting ideas how bunny was going to lose her breasts in the hard way.
> Your ending is somewhat disappointing because it ruins all expectations.
>I had an idea that they later try to use some experimental technology to grow back breasts but start competing for whose is going to be bigger.
> This would not work because Hawk cant use the gun in front of all team.
> How they are supposed to work together from that time?