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    gore
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    10/10 short stories in one word or less.
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    Full Review
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    This breathtaking work takes the reader on a mind expanding journey of limitless possibility.

    Eschewing the constraints of conventional prose, with it's hidebound adherence to a narrative structure and predictable formulaic tropes, the author sends the reader's mind cartwheeling into a void of possibilities.

    Even the title rewards the most casual browser of internet fiction with the 'empty mind', a state long sought by Zen masters for millennia.

    The main text of the story is cut to an absolute minimum, every word perfect and vital, planting an acorn of blood-curdling destruction into their mind. A single word from which a forest of horrific images can grow uninhibited, before resolving to an abrupt conclusion; a brutal, premature death echoing the singular theme of this great work.

    And yet still, the author takes us onward, with another brilliant literary device. By eliminating the finality of a punctuating full-stop, he leaves room for a similarly spectacular sequel, rather as a musician might end a dark fugue on an unresolved minor seventh.

    It is no wonder that the author has decided to remain anonymous. As a true artist he is now free of burdensome, constant offers of movie adaptations and merchandising opportunities, and is hard at work, employing his towering genius to craft us an award-winning sequel.

    That inevitable follow-up is certainly one that I, and I'm sure many of you, look forward to with great eagerness.
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    Please tell me you have more, this is some of the best material I've ever seen. Do you have a patreon?
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    >>17980
    Of course he doesn't have a Patreon. Stuff like this is totally against their terms of service.
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    Jesus christ that was dark. I know it's just a story, but should I nuke my hard drive?
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    >>17994
    Nuke it from orbit. It's the only way to be sure
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    This is the peak of Gurochan literature ladies and gentlemen
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    I dunno… I found it a bit overly wordy with a lot of unnecessary padding.Hopefully he'll work on that for the sequel!
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    I think he may have pre-empted you Mr. Hyde.

    I'm hanging my head in shame, thinking of all the times I bitched about those "blank posts" scattered across this site. I think we can all now recognise that those works carry the hallmarks of the un-named Master.
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    >>19441
    What about him?

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