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    Draco Malfoy was trying to eat his toast without looking at anyone. The Great Hall was louder than usual this morning, a buzzing undercurrent of nervous laughter and too-quick conversations. He kept his eyes fixed on the plate, fingers tight around the knife as he scraped butter across burnt edges. The knife trembled. He pretended not to notice.

    At the High Table, Dumbledore stood up. The hall didn’t go quiet immediately—someone at the Ravenclaw table dropped a goblet, and the clatter echoed before silence finally settled. Draco didn’t lift his head. He already knew what was coming. They all did. June sixth. Execution day.

    Daphne Greengrass was sitting two seats down from him. She had her hair braided neatly, coiled at the nape of her neck like she’d taken extra time this morning. No loose strands. No imperfections. Next to her, Pansy was gripping her fork so hard her knuckles had gone bone-white.

    "Another year," Dumbledore said, voice light, as if commenting on the weather. "Another culling."

    A choked sound came from the Hufflepuff table—a first-year, probably. Draco still didn’t look. He counted the scratches on the table in front of him instead. Three deep grooves near the edge, probably from someone’s nails last year. Or the year before. It got harder to remember.

    "The following students will report to the center of the Hall," Dumbledore continued, unfolding a parchment with deliberate slowness. "Daphne Greengrass. Draco Malfoy."

    Draco Malfoy avoids eye contact in the unusually tense Great Hall as Dumbledore prepares to announce the annual culling victims. The hall falls silent despite initial nervous chatter, and Draco focuses on mundane details—Daphne’s perfect braid, the scratches on the table—to avoid acknowledging the inevitable. Dumbledore’s casual tone contrasts with the gravity of the situation as he names Daphne and Draco among those to be executed.

    Someone let out a sharp exhale. Draco finally glanced up—Pansy was staring at him, mouth slightly open. He shrugged. What was there to say?

    Dumbledore kept reading. "Susan Bones. Mark Smith."

    A gasp from Hufflepuff this time, followed by a clatter as Susan’s knife hit her plate. She didn’t move. Mark, beside her, had gone very still, like he was trying not to breathe.

    "Luna Lovegood. Terry Boot."

    Luna didn’t react. She just kept stirring her tea, humming something under her breath. Terry’s hands flattened against the table, palms pressing down like he was trying to steady himself.

    "And finally," Dumbledore said, almost gently, "Ginny Weasley and Harry Potter."

    Silence. Then a scrape of benches as Ginny stood up abruptly. Harry reached for her wrist—too late. She was already stepping over the bench, face blank. Harry followed, slower. His fingers curled into fists at his sides.

    Draco exhaled. His toast was untouched now, butter half-melted and glistening. He pushed the plate away. Time to get up. Time to move.

    Daphne was already standing. She smoothed her skirt once, adjusted her tie, then walked toward the center of the Hall without hesitation. Draco forced himself to follow.

    The other chosen ones were gathering too—Susan walking stiffly, Mark trailing behind her like he wasn’t sure where to put his feet. Luna drifted over as if sleepwalking. Terry kept swallowing, Adam’s apple bobbing. Ginny stood straight-backed, chin up. Harry’s shoulders were tense, but he didn’t speak.

    No one spoke.

    The rest of the students were watching. Some looked sick. Some looked excited. Most just looked resigned.

    Draco reached the center. He stopped beside Daphne. Her hands were clasped in front of her, perfectly still.

    "Now," Dumbledore said, "you will disrobe."

    That was always the first part.

    Daphne’s fingers moved first, unhooking the clasp at her collar with practiced precision. The sound of fabric rustling filled the cavernous Hall as robes began to slide from shoulders. Draco didn’t look at her—didn’t look at any of them—but he could hear the steady rhythm of her breathing, the faint click of her necklace hitting the stone floor. His own hands felt numb as he fumbled with his tie. The silk slithered loose, pooling at his feet like a dead thing.

    Across from them, Ginny was pulling her sweater over her head in one sharp motion, mussing her hair. Harry’s hands paused at his belt buckle, knuckles white, before he forced himself to unfasten it. Susan Bones had started crying silently, tears streaking down her face as she unbuttoned her blouse with trembling fingers. Mark kept his eyes shut tight while he stripped, as if that could make it less real. Luna, already barefoot, was humming louder now, fingers tracing the hem of her skirt before letting it drop. Terry Boot was the last to start, but the first to finish, standing rigid with his arms at his sides like a soldier awaiting orders.

    Draco’s robes puddled around his ankles. The air was cool against his skin, raising goosebumps along his arms. He focused on the sensation, grounding himself in the physical—the uneven stone beneath his toes, the faint draft from the enchanted ceiling. Anything but the weight of hundreds of eyes on his exposed body. Daphne, now nude beside him, didn’t shiver. She might as well have been carved from marble.

    "Good," Dumbledore murmured. His gaze swept over them without pity, without hunger. Just assessment. "The rest of you—to the grounds."

    Benches scraped as students rose, the noise too loud in the stillness. Some lingered, staring at the chosen seven with wide eyes. Pansy was frozen at the Slytherin table until Theo nudged her elbow, urging her up. She mouthed something at Draco—he didn’t catch it. Didn’t try to. The Weasley twins were conspicuously absent. Probably locked in their dorm, charmed silencing spells cranked to maximum. Smart.

    One by one, the crowd filtered out. McGonagall’s lips were pressed into a thin line as she ushered the stragglers along. Snape lingered near the doors, black robes swirling as he turned to watch the procession. His expression was unreadable.

    Soon, only the seven remained. And the silence.

    Terry cleared his throat. "Do we—" He stopped, swallowed. "Do we walk out like this?"

    No one answered. Ginny strode forward first, bare feet slapping against stone, head high. Harry followed, then Luna, drifting after them like a ghost. Susan hesitated until Mark took her elbow, guiding her forward. Terry fell into step behind them. Daphne glanced at Draco—just once—before moving. He forced his legs to work, to follow.

    The corridors were empty. Their footsteps echoed. Draco kept his eyes on the back of Daphne’s neck, on the fine hairs at her nape, the elegant curve of her spine. The castle had never felt so vast, so hollow. The portraits avoided looking at them as they passed, frames conspicuously empty or figures turned away. Even the staircases seemed to still, granting them unobstructed passage.

    When they reached the towering oak doors leading to the grounds, Ginny didn’t pause. She shoved them open with both hands, letting in a gust of wind that made Draco’s skin prickle. Sunlight hit them like a spotlight.

    Outside, the crowd had already formed a semicircle around the execution site. The students stood shoulder to shoulder, expressions ranging from morbid fascination to outright horror. At the center, the instruments waited—gleaming glass tanks for drowning, wooden pillars with coiled wire, the chopping block dark with old stains, the gallows casting long shadows across the grass.

    Snape stood beside the first tank, sleeves rolled to his elbows, waiting.

    Dumbledore raised his hands. "Let us begin."

    Draco's bare feet scraped against the grass as he approached the first glass tank. The structure loomed taller than he'd imagined—thick panes reinforced with silver runes that pulsed faintly under the morning light. He hesitated, just for a second, before climbing the short ladder bolted to the side. The metal rungs were cold under his palms. At the top, he paused, staring down into the empty basin. His reflection stared back, fractured by the imperfections in the glass.

    "Draco," Snape said, not unkindly. A command.

    Draco stepped in. The tank was just wide enough to stretch his arms, if he wanted to. He didn't. He stood very still as thick leather straps snaked around his ankles, securing him to the iron grate below. The bindings tightened with a click that echoed through the silent grounds. He could feel Daphne watching him from where she stood beside the second tank, her breathing steady. She didn't look afraid. He tried to borrow some of that stillness, letting it settle between his ribs.

    The water came fast—a gush from hidden pipes near the base of the tank, swirling around his toes, then his knees. Cold. Draco gasped as it hit his thighs, the shock of it making his muscles lock. The crowd murmured. He could see them now through the glass, distorted faces pressed forward. Pansy was gripping Millicent's arm so hard her fingers were bloodless. The water climbed higher. His stomach clenched when it reached his waist, then his chest. His body tried to arch away from the rising tide instinctively, but the ankle restraints held firm.

    When the water touched his chin, Draco tipped his head back, gulping one last breath before the surface closed over him. The world muted instantly. His hair floated around his face like pale seaweed. Bubbles escaped his nose as he exhaled, drifting upward in a slow spiral. He kept his eyes open. The sunlight filtering through the water made everything waver—Snape's silhouette, the crowd's eager faces, the distant shape of the castle towers.

    His lungs burned first. A deep, insistent ache that spread outward until his whole torso felt like it was splitting open. He jerked against the straps, legs kicking uselessly. The water muffled his thrashing, turned it into something graceful, almost dance-like. His fingers scrabbled at the smooth glass, leaving no marks. A thin stream of bubbles escaped his lips as his body betrayed him, trying to inhale where there was no air. The pain crested, then dulled. His movements slowed. Above the tank, someone was counting seconds under their breath.

    Draco's vision darkened at the edges. The last thing he saw was Daphne, already climbing into her own tank, her head held high. Then nothing.

    The pipes shut off with a hollow clank. The crowd exhaled as one when Snape nodded to Dumbledore. Four minutes, on the dot. Efficient.

    Daphne's fingers traced the ladder rungs with deliberate precision, as if she were ascending to some grand ballroom rather than her own execution chamber. The glass tank shimmered under the morning sun. She didn't glance at the glass tank with the dead Draco. Didn't hesitate when her bare foot touched the grated floor.

    The ankle restraints slithered up her calves like living things, cold against her skin. Daphne inhaled through her nose—once, sharp—as the leather cinched tight enough to bruise. She could feel the imprint of every stitch. Around her, the crowd leaned forward, whispering. A Hufflepuff girl was crying openly. Pansy stood rigid, lips moving silently, perhaps counting Daphne's breaths the way one might count the last strokes of a dying clock.

    Water surged into the tank with a hiss. Daphne arched her spine instinctively when the first wave hit her shins, icy enough to steal her breath. The liquid climbed faster than she'd anticipated—already at her knees when she'd barely registered the chill. Her thighs tensed. The waterline reached her navel, then her ribs, each centimeter marked by the tightening of her abdomen, the way her nipples hardened against the cold. She didn't tremble. Even when the water lapped at her collarbones, her chin remained level, her gaze fixed on some distant point beyond the watching faces.

    The final wave closed over her head.

    Silence.

    For three heartbeats, Daphne floated perfectly still, her hair fanning out like spun silver in the churning water. Then her body remembered it was drowning. Her back bowed violently, heels driving against the grate as her lungs screamed. Strands of hair caught in her open mouth—she spat them out in a burst of bubbles, her hands splaying against the glass.

    Minute four: her movements turned jagged, less controlled. Her nails scraped the glass in frantic arcs, leaving no mark. A Ravenclaw boy mimed the motions back at her, laughing when his friends elbowed him.

    Minute six: her thrashing slowed, turned almost languid. Her legs drifted like seaweed in a tidepool. Blood vessels burst in her eyes, tinting the whites pink.

    Minute seven: one final convulsion—her spine snapped straight, toes pointed like a dancer's—before she went limp. A last silver trail of bubbles escaped her parted lips, rising in a slow spiral toward the surface.

    The pipes cut off. The water stilled.

    For a suspended moment, no one moved. Then the applause began—first scattered claps, then a roaring wave of it. Someone wolf-whistled. Pansy's hands hung frozen at her sides while the Slytherins around her cheered.

    "Magnificent resistance," Dumbledore remarked to McGonagall, as if critiquing a particularly challenging chess match. "Nearly double the expected duration."

    Snape was already motioning for the next two victims to approach. Behind him, the garroting pillars stood ready, their wires glinting. Susan Bones made a small, animal sound when Mark Smith took her elbow, guiding her forward.

    Mark Smith's bare feet left damp prints on the grass as he approached the first wooden pillar. The grain was worn smooth from years of use, darkened in places where sweat or blood had soaked in. He didn't resist when Snape guided him backward, pressing his spine flush against the wood. The wire felt colder than he expected when it settled around his throat—thin enough that he couldn't see it, but he could feel its presence like a thread of ice against his pulse point. Behind him, his wrists were bound with rough hemp that scratched at his skin.

    Susan was being secured to the adjacent pillar, her breath coming in short, panicked bursts. Mark tried to catch her eye—some silent reassurance—but she was staring straight ahead at nothing, her pupils blown wide. A bead of sweat rolled down between her breasts.

    Mark's scream tore through the grounds—not from pain, but from the sheer, primal panic of understanding. The wire bit into his throat without warning, tightening in slow, mechanical increments. His legs spasmed first, heels digging into the soft earth as his body arched away from the pillar. The crowd gasped when his cock stiffened abruptly, standing at attention against his abdomen as if mocking his terror.

    Air hissed through his constricted windpipe in pathetic, wet bursts. His vision pulsed—dark at the edges, then blinding white—as his bladder twitched in protest. The orgasm hit him like a seizure, back bowing violently as ropes of semen arced onto his stomach. His toes curled. Someone in the audience laughed—a high, nervous giggle that dissolved into coughing when McGonagall shot them a look.

    Minute three: Mark's kicks lost their rhythm, his thighs trembling with exhaustion. His cock wilted, dribbling the last of his release onto his thighs. A thin line of drool escaped the corner of his mouth. His bladder let go abruptly, piss splattering down his legs to pool at the base of the pillar. The wire had sunk so deep into his neck that his head lolled forward at an unnatural angle, chin nearly touching his sternum.

    "Five minutes," Snape announced to no one in particular, inspecting his pocket watch.

    Susan's breath hitched when the wire brushed her throat—lighter than a lover's fingertip, yet colder than the Black Lake in December. The crowd's murmurs faded to white noise as the metal kissed her pulse. Her wrists strained against the ropes, raw from earlier struggles. Mark's corpse sagged beside her, head tilted at that awful angle, piss still dripping off his toes.

    The wire tightened in increments, each twist stealing another fraction of air. Susan's heels skidded against the grass, carving furrows in the earth as her body fought to arch away. Her nipples pebbled instantly, tightening into hard peaks as adrenaline and hypoxia flooded her system. Someone in the front row whispered, "Look at her tits," and laughter fluttered through the audience like diseased butterflies.

    Minute two: Susan's kicks grew frantic, thighs quivering with the effort. Spit gathered at the corners of her mouth, her tongue swelling against the unrelenting pressure. Her bladder gave way suddenly, a hot rush down her legs that drew cheers from the Slytherin section. The piss splattered over her feet.

    Minute five: Her vision tunneled. Colors bled together—the green of the grass, the blue of the sky, Snape's black robes—all smearing into gray static. Her breasts heaved with aborted breaths, nipples still stiff despite her failing strength. The wire pressed against her neck harder.

    Minute seven: Susan's body convulsed violently, her back bowing until the pillar groaned. A guttural sound tore from her ruined throat as her hips jerked forward—once, twice—before vaginal fluids gushed down her thighs in a transparent rush. The crowd roared. Pansy Parkinson clapped a hand over her mouth, eyes wide.

    Minute eight: Susan's legs spasmed a final time, toes curling inward like clenched fists. Then stillness. Her head lolled forward. Her eyes stayed open, pupils blown so wide the irises were mere hazel halos.

    "Eight minutes," Snape announced, went to the blocks and call for Luna Lovegood and Terry Boot summoned forward.

    Luna Lovegood's bare feet whispered against the grass as she drifted toward the chopping block, her gait so light she might have been floating. Beside her, Terry Boot moved like a man already dead—shoulders hunched, steps dragging through the dew-damp grass. The axe's blade caught the sunlight as they approached, throwing jagged reflections across Luna's pale thighs. She tilted her head, watching the play of light with detached curiosity, as if studying an interesting species of magical insect.

    Terry knelt first, his knees cracking against the hard grass. Luna followed more gracefully, lowering herself with the fluid motion of someone settling into a warm bath. The block's surface was cool against her cheek, the grain rough where decades of blood had soaked in and been scrubbed away. She stretched her neck forward obligingly, her hair pooling around the stained wood like spilled cream.

    Then—unexpectedly—her hand slid between her legs.

    A murmur rippled through the crowd as Luna's fingers began moving in slow, deliberate circles. Her eyelids fluttered. Someone in the back row choked on their own spit. Luna's breath hitched—not from fear, but from the building pleasure humming beneath her skin. Her hips rolled minutely against nothing, the motion almost imperceptible.

    Terry's execution came swift and clinical. The axe's descent was a silver blur—then the wet thunk of steel meeting wood. His head bounced once before settling face-up, eyes wide, mouth slack. Blood jetted from his neck in rhythmic pulses, splattering the grass in dark arcs. His body remained kneeling for three impossible seconds before toppling sideways, one arm outstretched as if reaching for his own severed head.

    Luna didn't glance at the corpse beside her. Her fingers never slowed. If anything, her movements grew more urgent as Snape stepped over Terry's headless body, adjusting his grip on the axe handle. The blade glistened red when he raised it.

    The swing was perfect—clean angle, full force. Luna's head separated from the rest of her body with a sound like a melon splitting. It landed with its cheek pressed to the grass, her expression eerily serene. But her body—oh, her body was magnificent.

    It surged upward as if pulled by invisible strings, back arching violently while arterial blood fountained from the stump of her neck, painting the air in glittering crimson. Her fingers never left her clit—if anything, they worked faster, riding the last waves of sensation as her nervous system fired its final signals. The blood showered down like rain, pattering against her twitching thighs, her shuddering belly.

    For seven glorious seconds, Luna's corpse danced. Then, as abruptly as it had risen, the body collapsed sideways. Her fingers stayed buried between her legs. The blood flow dwindled to a trickle, then stopped altogether.

    The silence held for a breath. Then—applause. Tentative at first, then swelling into raucous cheers. A Ravenclaw girl vomited.

    Ginny's toes curled against the wooden platform as she climbed the gallows steps, each footfall resonating hollowly through the structure. The rope hung limp above her, its fibers frayed from years of use but still strong enough to hold. She didn't look at Harry, though she could feel him mounting the steps beside her—his breathing ragged, uneven. The noose smelled of hemp and something darker, like old sweat pressed into the fibers.

    Snape adjusted the rope around her neck with impersonal efficiency, his fingers brushing the hinge of her jaw as he tested the knot. Ginny swallowed reflexively, the rough texture catching against her throat. Behind her, her wrists were bound with coarse twine that bit into her skin. The crowd's murmurs crescendoed—someone wolf-whistled—as Snape moved to Harry, looping the second noose with the same detached precision and bound his wrists. Ginny's pulse hammered against the rope's embrace.

    The lever groaned when Snape pulled it.

    Ginny dropped.

    The fall was shorter than she'd imagined, but the jolt as the rope snapped taut stole her breath instantly. Her neck didn't break. The crowd gasped in collective disappointment before erupting into cheers. Ginny's legs pistoned wildly, bare feet kicking at empty air as her body spasmed against the noose's grip. Above her, the gallows beam creaked under her convulsions.

    Minute three: her kicks grew arrhythmic, her thighs trembling with exertion. Spit dribbled down her chin. Her nipples pebbled tight against the chill morning air, drawing another wave of laughter from the watching students.

    Minute five: her vision tunneled. Colors bled together—Ron's horrified face in the front row, Hermione's hands clamped over her mouth—all dissolving into gray static. Ginny's bladder twitched, but held.

    Minute eight: her back arched violently as the orgasm ripped through her — vaginal fluids flowed down her thighs in a transparent rush. The Slytherins roared approval.

    Minute ten: her bladder released in a hot rush, piss splattering to the ground. Her legs jerked once more—a spastic, uncoordinated twitch—before falling still.

    Harry watched Ginny's corpse sway through tear-blurred eyes, his own cock achingly hard beneath the rope's shadow. Snape didn't pause before yanking the second lever.

    Harry's vision blurred at the edges as the lever clicked. The trapdoor vanished beneath him—one moment solid wood beneath his soles, the next empty air. His body jerked violently when the rope snapped taut, the hemp biting into his windpipe with brutal efficiency. His cock, already stiff from watching Ginny's final throes, bobbed obscenely with each convulsion. The crowd's roar swelled as his legs cycled through the air, heels drumming against nothing. Someone screamed, "Look at Potter's dick!" and laughter rippled through the stands like fire through dry grass.

    Minute seven: his vision swam with black spots. Colors bled together—Ron's horrified face in the front row, Hermione's hands clamped over her mouth—all dissolving into gray static. His thighs burned. Precum beaded at his tip, glistening in the sunlight.

    Minute nine: the orgasm hit like a bludger to the gut—his hips bucked wildly as ropes of semen arced onto his stomach, some splattering as far as his collarbone. The crowd screamed approval.

    Minute twelve: his cock went limp. Piss streamed down his legs in a final, humiliating release. His toes uncurled. Silence.

    Then—applause. Deafening, relentless. Dumbledore beamed as if he'd just witnessed a particularly riveting Quidditch match.

    "Twelve minutes!" he announced, as if Harry had won something.
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    This was rather different from your earlier work, but still very well written. At what point do this takes place?
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    It is a completely independent story.
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    And which year does it take place?
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    Yeah i also wanna know their age. If they were younger, it would make sense that they survived for so long on the noose because they are lighter
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    In the story I image they are 14 and 15 years old.
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    "Feels different this year," Ginny muttered, rubbing her thumb along the edge of the parchment strip. The Great Hall was quieter than usual—no clatter of cutlery, no chatter bouncing off the enchanted ceiling. Just the rustle of students scribbling their names and the occasional sharp intake of breath.

    Harry glanced at her, then at his own blank strip. "Different how?"

    Ginny shrugged. "Dunno. Maybe the way Filch keeps looking at the Goblet. Like he’s waiting for it to bite someone."

    Across the room, Neville dropped his strip, fumbled to pick it up, and nearly knocked over a first-year in the process. A few stifled laughs rippled through the hall.

    The Goblet flickered with an eerie blue flame as the last few students shuffled forward to deposit their strips. Harry watched as Ginny's fingers lingered over the edge before letting hers fall. Something about the way it vanished into the flames made his stomach tighten—no sound, no spark. Just gone.

    "Ever wonder why it's always seven?" Ron muttered behind him, voice low enough that only Harry caught it.

    Before Harry could answer, the Goblet erupted in a burst of emerald fire. Strips of parchment shot upward, spiraling like leaves caught in a whirlwind before arranging themselves in a neat line midair. The hall held its breath as Dumbledore stepped forward, his wand tracing the first name.

    "Pansy Parkinson," he read, and the parchment flipped to reveal its other side. "Drowning." A murmur ran through the Slytherin table. Pansy's lips curled into something that wasn't quite a smile as she pushed back her chair.

    Mark Thomson's name came next—beheading—and the Gryffindor table collectively stiffened. Mark, a burly sixth-year with a perpetual quill stain on his cheek, blinked rapidly before nodding once, as if confirming an unspoken dare to himself. The parchment fluttered to the floor, ignored.

    Hermione's gasp was audible when her own name followed. "Short drop hanging," Dumbledore announced, and her fingers dug into the wooden bench. Ron's hand shot out to cover hers, but she jerked away, shaking her head like she could dislodge the words from the air. Harry caught the way her throat moved when she swallowed—sharp, deliberate—before she lifted her chin and smoothed her robes with trembling hands.

    Daphne Greengrass was next—another beheading—and the Slytherins' murmurs grew louder. Daphne merely arched an eyebrow, as if this were a mildly inconvenient scheduling conflict. Ginny's name followed Hermione's method, and Harry felt her knee press against his under the table, steady as a heartbeat.

    Terry Boot's drowning assignment barely registered before the final name burned itself into the silence.

    The silence shattered when Dumbledore read the last name. "Harry Potter—short drop hanging."

    The silence in the Great Hall became something alive—a held breath, a coiled spring. Then Dumbledore cleared his throat, and the tension snapped. "Selected students," he said, his voice carrying effortlessly to the rafters, "please make your way to the center. Strip completely."

    Daphne's robes hit the floor before Dumbledore had finished speaking, pooling around her ankles like liquid silver. She stepped out of them with the casual grace of someone shedding a coat after light rain—no hesitation, no tremble in her fingers as she unhooked her bra and let it slide down her arms. The Slytherins whistled; Daphne merely smirked and stretched, arching her back until her breasts lifted, daring anyone to look away.

    Terry fumbling with his tie before giving up and yanking it over his head in one sharp tug. His shirt buttons pinged against the stone floor. When he bent to untie his shoelaces, his knees cracked loud enough to draw nervous laughter from the Hufflepuff table. He flushed but kept going, stepping out of his trousers with a shrug that said *well, this is happening*.

    Pansy took longer. Her fingers lingered at the clasp of her necklace—a delicate silver chain with an emerald pendant—before she tossed it to Millicent Bulstrode in the front row. "Keep it," she said, and Millicent caught it midair, grinning. Pansy's underwear was black lace, expensive-looking, and she peeled it off slowly, rolling the fabric down her thighs like she was savoring the last touch of luxury before the plunge.

    Harry's fingers brushed Ginny's shoulder as he untied the laces of her robe, the fabric sliding down her arms like water. She didn't flinch, didn't hurry—just tilted her head slightly, giving him room to work. Her hands found the hem of his shirt, lifting it over his head in one smooth motion, her knuckles grazing his ribs. Around them, the hall thrummed with whispers and shifting feet, but the space between their bodies felt strangely quiet, like the eye of a storm.

    Ginny hooked her thumbs into the waistband of his boxers, and Harry mirrored the motion on her underwear, their movements syncing without discussion. The air prickled against newly exposed skin. Ginny's breath hitched—just once—when Harry's fingers skimmed the inside of her thigh as he pushed her briefs down, but her hands stayed steady as she peeled his boxers away. Their clothes pooled together at their feet, a tangled heap of cotton and wool.

    Across the circle, Hermione was still wrestling with her bra clasp, her arms twisted awkwardly behind her back. Her cheeks burned pink under the weight of staring eyes, but her mouth was set in that familiar stubborn line—the one she wore when tackling a particularly nasty arithmancy equation. Mark, meanwhile, stood frozen beside her, his fingers clenched white-knuckled around the elastic of his boxers. A bead of sweat rolled down his temple as he finally, agonizingly slow, peeled the last scrap of fabric down his legs. It clung to his ankle for a breathless second before flopping to the flagstones.

    Harry caught Ginny's eye. Something passed between them—not quite a smile, not quite a question—before she reached out and squeezed his hand, just once. Her palm was warm. Dry. Nothing like the trembling terror thrumming through his own veins.

    Dumbledore's wand flicked upward in a lazy arc, like he was conducting an orchestra of invisible strings. The air shimmered, warping into shapes that solidified with wet, heavy sounds—two glass basins rising from the flagstones like bubbles breaching a lake's surface.

    Next came the chopping blocks—They materialized with a sharp crack. The axe landed between them with a metallic thunk, its blade catching the candlelight in a way that made the steel look freshly licked by flame. The handle was dark walnut, worn smooth by generations of hands.

    The nooses descended silently, ropes unspooling from the enchanted ceiling like vines seeking soil. Three stools popped into existence beneath them—ordinary wooden things, the kind Filch might stack in a broom closet. The contrast was almost laughable: brutal hemp fibers dangling above something so mundane. Ginny's fingers twitched against Harry's palm as the nooses swayed, their loops gaping like hungry mouths.

    Dumbledore cleared his throat. "We will begin with the drowning." His voice carried the same tone he used to announce pudding flavors at feasts. "Pansy, Terry—who among you wishes to go first?"

    Terry stepped forward.

    Terry's bare feet slapped against the glass as he climbed into the tank, his reflection warping beneath him like a funhouse mirror. The metal buckles clicked shut around his ankles with a sound that made Neville flinch three tables away. Terry tested them once—a sharp jerk upward that made the chains rattle—then exhaled through his nose when they held fast. "Comfy?" Pansy called from the sidelines, her voice dripping with false sweetness. Terry flipped her off just as the first trickle of water seeped in through hidden vents near the base.

    The liquid climbed faster than Harry expected. Within seconds, it lapped at Terry's calves, then his knees, the surface trembling with each tiny adjustment of his stance. By the time it reached his hips, Terry's breathing had gone shallow and rapid, his ribs expanding like bellows under skin gone goosefleshed from the chill. Someone in the back row started a slow clap—one, two—and it spread through the hall like a contagion, the rhythm syncing with the water's relentless rise.

    When it hit his collarbones, Terry tipped his head back instinctively, exposing the taut cords of his neck. His Adam's apple bobbed once, twice, before he screwed his eyes shut and held his breath. The water closed over his chin, his lips, the bridge of his nose—then finally, with a tiny glug, the top of his head vanished beneath the surface. Bubbles erupted from his nostrils in frantic bursts, then slowed, then stopped altogether. His fingers spasmed against the glass, leaving smears that fogged almost immediately.

    The silence in the hall thickened. Even Pansy had stopped fidgeting, her gaze locked on Terry's floating form. His hair fanned out like seaweed, drifting in the current from some invisible filter. His eyelids fluttered once—a last, desperate signal—before going still. At the four-minute mark, his bladder let go, a golden stream spiraling through the water like ink dropped in a jar. It dissipated slowly, staining the liquid around his thighs a faint, sickly yellow.

    Pansy sauntered forward, her hips swaying with deliberate languor, as if this were just another evening stroll through the Slytherin common room. The glass tank gleamed under the floating candlelight. She climed in without hesitation, the soles of her feet pressing flat against the cold bottom, toes curling slightly as the metal buckles snapped shut around her ankles.

    She didn’t test them.

    Instead, her hands drifted upward, fingers tracing the swell of her own breasts with the practiced ease of someone who knew exactly how she liked to be touched. Her palms circled her nipples, slow and teasing, until they stiffened into peaks. A sigh slipped from her lips—half pleasure, half challenge—as her other hand slid down her stomach, past the dip of her navel, to where her thighs met. The first brush of her fingers against her clit made her breath hitch, just once, before she settled into a rhythm that was anything but subtle.

    The water began to rise.

    It lapped at her ankles first, cold enough to make her toes curl, but Pansy didn’t pause. Her fingers worked in tight, deliberate circles, her hips rocking forward into her own touch as if she were chasing something only she could see. By the time the water reached her knees, her breath had gone ragged, her cheeks flushed pink under the weight of hundreds of watching eyes. Someone—probably a Gryffindor—muttered something about "disgusting," but Pansy only arched an eyebrow and twisted her wrist just so, her lips parting around a sound that was swallowed by the growing murmur of the crowd.

    The water climbed higher.

    It swallowed her thighs, her hips, the curve of her waist, but Pansy’s hands never stilled. If anything, she moved faster now, her fingers gliding slick and sure between her legs, her free hand pinching and rolling a nipple between thumb and forefinger. Her head tipped back when the water reached her ribs, her throat working as she swallowed hard, but her eyelids fluttered shut—not in fear, but in concentration. Like she was committing every sensation to memory.

    When it reached her collarbones, her rhythm stuttered for the first time. Her chest heaved, her lungs fighting for air that wouldn’t come, but her fingers kept moving, frantic now, her hips jerking in shallow, desperate thrusts. The water closed over her chin, her lips, the tip of her nose—and still, her hand stayed between her legs, working herself even as her body began to convulse bubbles start to erupted from her nostrils.

    Her eyes flew open—wide, startled—as if she hadn’t expected the end to come so soon. At minute eight a final, violent shudder wracked her body, her back arching against the glass, her fingers digging into her own flesh hard enough to leave crescent-shaped marks. Then, all at once, she went still. Her hands drifted away from her body, limp and lifeless, her hair floating around her face like a dark halo. Her lips parted slightly, as if she’d been caught mid-sigh. Her bladder let go in a sudden, golden rush that clouded the water around her thighs.

    The hall was silent.

    Even the Slytherins, usually so quick with a jeer or a jab, stared at the tank with something like awe. Or maybe it was envy. Pansy had died exactly as she’d lived—unapologetic, defiant, entirely on her own terms.

    Dumbledore cleared his throat, and the spell broke. “We will proceed,” he said, turning toward Mark and Daphne, “with the beheading.”

    "Who would you prefer to go first?" Dumbledore asked, his voice carrying that same mild curiosity he might use to inquire about tea preferences. The axe gleamed in his hand, its edge so sharp it seemed to split the very light around it.

    Mark swallowed visibly, his throat working like he was trying to dislodge something stuck there. He turned to Daphne, who was already studying him with that cool, unreadable gaze of hers—the one that made you feel like you were a specimen under glass.

    "After you," Mark said, attempting a gallant gesture with one hand that ended up looking more like an awkward half-wave.

    Daphne tilted her head, a slow, considering motion. "How generous," she murmured, and for a moment, Mark looked relieved—until she added, "But no. I think I'd rather watch you first." Her fingers trailed absently along her own collarbone, dipping lower in a lazy arc that made several Ravenclaws shift in their seats.

    Mark blinked. Then, with a shrug that seemed to say *well, fuck it*, he stepped forward. His bare feet made no sound against the flagstones as he approached the block—just the faint squeak of skin on polished wood as he knelt. He took a deep breath, exhaled through his nose, and laid his head down with the careful precision of someone arranging themselves for a nap.

    Dumbledore's shadow fell across him. The axe lifted, catching the candlelight in a fleeting silver streak—then fell with a wet *thunk*. Mark's head tumbled forward, rolling twice before coming to rest near the Hufflepuff table, his expression frozen in something that wasn't quite surprise. His body remained upright for a heartbeat, two, before toppling sideways, blood pulsing from his neck in rhythmic gouts that painted the flagstones in widening arcs.

    Daphne was already moving before the last spurt had tapered off. Her stride was unhurried, almost leisurely, as if she were strolling through the gardens at Greengrass Manor rather than walking toward her own execution. Halfway there, her right hand drifted between her thighs, fingers slipping easily through the slickness there. A few Slytherins whistled; Daphne merely smirked and increased the pressure, her breath hitching audibly when she circled her clit with deliberate precision.

    She didn't stop when she reached the block. Kneeling beside it, she guided her head into position with her free hand, her neck arching gracefully to accommodate the wood's curve. Her other hand never stilled, fingers working in tight, practiced motions that made her hips jerk involuntarily against nothing. "Whenever you're ready, Headmaster," she said, her voice remarkably steady despite the way her chest heaved with each rapid breath.

    Dumbledore adjusted his grip on the axe handle. The blade hovered for a fraction of a second—long enough for Daphne to bite her lower lip and press two fingers deep inside herself—before it flashed downward. Her head joined Mark's near the Hufflepuff table, lips still parted around a sound that never made it past her throat.

    What happened next drew gasps. Daphne's decapitated body stiffened, back bowing violently as blood fountained from her neck in a crimson spray. Her fingers—still buried knuckle-deep in her pussy—curled inward, her hips bucking wildly against her own hand. For ten agonizing seconds, her body convulsed, thighs trembling with the force of whatever final release had overtaken her nervous system. Then, with a suddenness that made several students jump, she collapsed sideways, her fingers still in her pussy. A last, feeble spurt of blood dribbled from her neck before the flow slowed to a trickle.

    The silence in the hall was palpable.

    "And now," Dumbledore announced, brushing a fleck of blood from his sleeve with the same absentmindedness one might dismiss a crumb, "the hanging." He turned to the remaining trio—Hermione, Ginny, Harry—with a polite nod. "Would you care to determine the order among yourselves?"

    Hermione’s fingers trembled as she tucked a loose curl behind her ear—a nervous habit she’d never quite shaken. She turned to Harry and Ginny, her lips pressed into a thin line. "I'd like to go first," she said, her voice steadier than her hands. There was no plea in it, just quiet resolve, as if she’d calculated the odds and decided this was the most logical order of operations.

    Harry opened his mouth—to protest, to offer himself instead—but Ginny squeezed his wrist, a silent *let her*. He exhaled through his nose and nodded. Ginny mirrored the gesture, her freckles standing out starkly against her pale skin. "Alright," Harry said, and the word felt like gravel in his throat.

    Hermione's bare feet left damp footprints on the flagstones as she approached the stool—little half-moon crescents that evaporated almost instantly in the charged air of the Great Hall. The stool wobbled slightly under her weight, its uneven legs betraying its age, but she adjusted her stance without fuss. Her chin lifted, exposing the delicate column of her throat, and Harry caught the faintest tremor in her bottom lip before she pressed them together.

    Dumbledore stepped forward, the noose dangling from his fingers like a grotesque pendulum. The rope smelled of hemp and something darker, earthier—the scent of old barns and damp cellars. He looped it around her neck with the same care one might use to tie a school tie, the coarse fibers brushing the tender skin behind her ears. Hermione didn’t flinch. When he tightened the knot at her nape, her breath hitched, just once, before she exhaled through her nose and squared her shoulders.

    Behind her back, her wrists crossed neatly, the bones pressing together as Dumbledore secured them with a length of twine. The binding wasn’t cruel—just firm enough to hold, the knot tucked where her fingers couldn’t pick at it. Someone in the crowd coughed; the sound echoed like a gunshot in the hushed hall.

    Ginny watched Hermione’s toes curl against the stool’s edge—pale and perfect, the nails unpainted. A far cry from Pansy’s lacquered elegance or Daphne’s deliberate provocations. This was just Hermione: unadorned, unwavering, and utterly herself even now. The stool creaked as she shifted her weight, and for a wild second, Ginny thought she might say something—a last spell, a quotation, some final scrap of book-smart wisdom. But Hermione only swallowed, the noose bobbing with the motion, and waited.

    The stool toppled with a clatter that seemed absurdly loud in the hushed hall. Hermione dropped—just a few centimeters, barely enough to make the rope creak—but the sudden jerk of her body was immediate. Her toes pointed, then flexed, her calves tensing into rigid cords as the noose bit into the soft skin of her throat. For a heartbeat, she hung there, perfectly still, her face frozen in something like surprise. Then her legs kicked out wildly, her hips bucking in frantic, uncoordinated spasms as her lungs fought for air that wouldn’t come.

    Her movements were chaotic at first—desperate, flailing things that sent her twisting sideways before the rope’s tension snapped her back into alignment. Her knees knocked together, her thighs rubbing slickly as her body convulsed against the inevitable. The noose tightened with every jerk, the hemp fibers digging deeper into her flesh until a thin trickle of blood welled up beneath the rope. Five minutes in, her kicks lost their vigor, her legs trembling now instead of thrashing, her toes curling inward like a child’s fingers grasping at nothing.

    At minute seven, her entire body seized—back arching violently, shoulders straining against the bindings at her wrists—as a shudder ran through her from scalp to soles. Her thighs glistened suddenly, the unmistakable sheen of arousal streaking down her inner legs in thin, transparent rivulets. A collective murmur rippled through the hall; someone near the back row muttered something about "filthy Mudblood," but it was half-hearted, drowned out by the rasp of Hermione’s choked breaths and the creak of the rope above her.

    Thirty seconds later, her body went limp. Her head lolled forward, her curls obscuring her face as her urine pattered onto the flagstones below, the sound almost musical against the silence. The puddle spread slowly, reflecting the floating candles in distorted, wavering lights.

    Harry’s cock twitched against his thigh, stiffening fully as Hermione’s legs gave one final, feeble twitch. He didn’t mean to look—didn’t want to—but his gaze snagged on the way her nipples had hardened in the cool air, the way her ribs flared with each aborted breath. Ginny’s fingers brushed his wrist, her touch featherlight. "You seem to be getting quite aroused by Hermione’s wriggling," she murmured, her voice low enough that only he could hear. There was no judgment in it, just quiet observation.

    Harry swallowed. "Yeah, I know." His throat felt raw. "I can’t help it. I’m sorry."

    Ginny’s thumb traced the inside of his palm, her skin warm against his. "You don’t need to be sorry," she said. Her breath hitched—just slightly—as Hermione’s body swayed gently in the noose, her toes brushing the edge of her own piss puddle. "I feel the same way. My pussy is soaking wet."

    Harry exhaled through his nose, his pulse hammering in his throat. He didn’t trust himself to speak, so he just nodded.

    Ginny’s fingers tightened around his. "Do you want to go next," she murmured, "or should I?"

    Harry’s gaze flicked to the remaining stools, then back to Ginny’s face. Freckles. Always freckles. "I’m fine with either," he said. "You decide."

    Ginny’s lips curved—not quite a smile, but something close. "Good," she said. "Then I’ll be next. And you can enjoy my hanging too."

    "All right," Harry said.

    They didn’t look away from Hermione. Not once. Her toes brushed the edge of her own piss puddle, the motion sending tiny ripples through the yellow liquid. The rope creaked softly above her, a sound like an old tree bending in the wind.

    Ginny stepped forward.
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    Ginny stepped forward.

    Ginny's stool wobbled as she stepped onto it—just once, a brief unsteadiness that made her freeze for half a second before she found her balance. The wood was smoother than she'd expected, worn down by generations of students. Absurdly, she wondered if this very stool had once held Flitwick during some long-ago Charms demonstration. The thought almost made her laugh, but the noose brushed the back of her neck like a spider's thread, and the impulse died.

    Dumbledore's fingers were dry and cool as he adjusted the rope. It settled against her throat with deceptive gentleness, the coarse fibers catching on the fine hairs at her nape. When he cinched the knot, Ginny felt it press against her carotid artery—a steady, insistent pressure that made her pulse flutter visibly beneath her skin. Behind her back, her wrists crossed automatically, the bones aligning as Dumbledore bound them with twine that smelled faintly of hay. The knot binding wasn’t cruel—just firm enough to hold, the knot tucked where her fingers couldn’t pick at it.

    She didn't wait for the kick. Ginny inhaled deeply—filling her lungs with the scent of candle wax and iron and the metallic tang of Daphne's blood still drying on the flagstones—then hooked her toes over the stool's edge and shoved. The wood toppled with a clatter that echoed off the vaulted ceiling, but Ginny barely heard it. The drop was short, brutally so, just enough to snap her head back as the noose jerked taut. Her vision whited out for a second, her trachea collapsing under the sudden pressure, and when her sight returned, the Great Hall swam in and out of focus like she was viewing it through warped glass.

    Her legs kicked automatically, her bare feet scissoring through empty air in frantic, uncoordinated motions. The muscles in her thighs stood out in sharp relief, quivering with the strain as she twisted against the rope's inexorable hold. Every thrash tightened the noose further, the hemp fibers biting into her windpipe until her breaths came in wet, ragged gasps that did nothing to fill her burning lungs. Six minutes in, her movements lost their violence, her kicks slowing to weak, spasmodic jerks that made her hips roll obscenely with each aborted motion.

    Harry couldn't look away. Ginny's body was a study in tension—her shoulders straining against the bindings, her ribs flaring with each futile attempt at breath, the tendons in her neck standing out like cables under skin gone mottled and red. At minute eight, her entire body seized, her spine arching violently as a shudder ran through her from scalp to toes. Her thighs trembled—then parted slightly—as a slick, glistening trail of arousal trickled down her inner legs to drip onto the stones below. The scent of it—musky and warm and unmistakably Ginny—hit Harry like a physical blow, his cock twitching against his thigh in response.

    Her final minute was agony. Ginny's body jerked in sporadic, uncoordinated twitches, her heels drumming against nothing as her oxygen-starved brain fired its last, desperate signals. When the last spasm passed—leaving her limp and swaying gently in the noose—her bladder released in a sudden, golden stream that pattered onto the flagstones beneath her. The sound was obscenely intimate, like rain on a tin roof, and Harry's erection throbbed in time with each droplet's impact.

    Hermione's death had been clinical, almost scholarly in its precision. Ginny's was raw, visceral—a performance stripped of pretense or restraint. Harry's breath came faster now, his pulse hammering in his throat as he watched her toes—still twitching faintly—brush the edges of her own piss puddle. The rope creaked softly above her, the sound incongruously gentle given the violence of her last moments. Somewhere to his left, Lavender Brown giggled nervously; Harry barely heard her. His entire world had narrowed to the way Ginny's wetness glistened on her thighs, the way her nipples had hardened in the cool air, the way her—

    "Mr. Potter," Dumbledore said, and Harry started, blinking as if emerging from a trance. The headmaster's eyes twinkled behind his spectacles. "Whenever you're ready."

    Harry's stool wobbled as he stepped onto it—just once, a brief hesitation that made his stomach lurch before he found his balance. The noose settled against his throat with unexpected softness, the rope's rough texture contrasting with Dumbledore's gentle hands as the headmaster adjusted the knot. It rested just below his Adam's apple, pressing into the hollow where Ginny had kissed him last winter behind the greenhouses.

    His wrists crossed automatically behind his back, the bones aligning as Dumbledore bound them with twine that smelled faintly of broom polish and lemon drops. The binding wasn't tight enough to hurt—just firm enough to hold, the knot tucked where his fingers couldn't pick at it. Someone in the crowd coughed; the sound echoed oddly in Harry's ears, distant and muffled as if heard through water.

    Harry inhaled sharply—filling his lungs with the scent of Ginny's arousal still hanging in the air—then Dumbledore kick the stool under his feets away. The wood toppled with a clatter that seemed absurdly loud, but Harry barely heard it. The drop was short, brutally so, just enough to snap his head forward as the noose jerked taut. His vision exploded into stars, his windpipe collapsing under the sudden pressure, and when his sight returned, the Great Hall swam in and out of focus like a poorly developed photograph.

    His legs kicked instinctively, his bare feet pedaling through empty air in frantic, uncoordinated motions. The muscles in his thighs burned with the strain as he twisted against the rope's inexorable hold, his erection bobbing obscenely with each jerky movement. Every thrash tightened the noose further, the rough fibers sawing into his trachea until his breaths came in wet, ragged gasps that did nothing to cool his burning lungs.

    Eight minutes in, his movements lost their violence, his kicks slowing to weak, spasmodic jerks that made his hips roll obscenely with each aborted thrust. The rope had bitten deep into his flesh now. His pulse hammered visibly in his throat—a frantic, fluttering thing—each beat sending fresh pain radiating through his neck and shoulders.

    At minute ten, Harry's entire body seized, his spine arching violently as a shudder ran through him from scalp to toes. His cock twitched—once, twice—before erupting in thick, pearlescent spurts that arced through the air and spattered across the flagstones below. The scent of his release—musky and warm and unmistakably male—mingled with the sharper odor of Ginny's fluids still drying on the stones.

    His final moments were quiet. Harry's body jerked in sporadic, uncoordinated twitches, his heels drumming weakly against nothing as his oxygen-starved brain fired its last, desperate signals. When the last spasm passed—leaving him limp and swaying gently in the noose—his bladder released in a sudden, golden stream that pattered onto the stones beneath him. The sound was obscenely intimate, like rain on canvas, and somewhere in the fading haze of his consciousness, Harry thought he heard Ginny laughing—that bright, breathless laugh she'd reserved for their stolen moments in the broom cupboard.

    The rope creaked softly above him, the sound incongruously gentle given the violence of his last moments. His toes—still twitching faintly—brushed the edges of his own piss puddle, the motion sending tiny ripples through the yellow liquid. His head lolled forward, his glasses slipping down his nose to dangle precariously from one ear, the lenses reflecting the floating candles in distorted, wavering lights.

    The silence that followed Harry’s final twitch was thick, almost gelatinous—as if the air itself had congealed around the spectacle. Then, like a dam breaking, the applause began. Not polite, scattered clapping, but a roaring tide of approval that shook the floating candles in their brackets. The Hufflepuffs pounded their goblets on the tables, Ravenclaws stood to offer slow, mocking bows, and the Slytherins whistled through their teeth, their eyes bright with something between admiration and hunger. Only a handful of Gryffindors remained seated, their expressions unreadable.

    Dumbledore stepped forward, his robes brushing against the pooled fluids beneath the hanging bodies. He surveyed the aftermath with the same detached curiosity one might reserve for an interesting potion reaction. "A most satisfactory culling," he announced, his voice carrying effortlessly over the din. "The Goblet has, as always, chosen wisely." His gaze lingered on Harry’s swaying form—the slack jaw, the urine-dampened toes—before turning to address the hall at large. "Let this serve as a reminder of the precision of our traditions. These seven have honored Hogwarts with their compliance."

    The applause died unevenly, pockets of students trailing off as others continued clapping with feverish enthusiasm. Near the Slytherin table, Blaise Zabini leaned back in his seat, fingers steepled under his chin as he studied the three hanging bodies with clinical interest. "Interesting how Potter lasted longest," he mused to no one in particular. "Guess the Chosen One had more fight in him after all."
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    I'm sorry I've to say this, but this story was boring to me. With all the repetitions it seems to me it would be better placed at the AI-board. And like the first version it gives no real explanation ‒ beside "tradition" ‒ for what reason the executions take place.

    There is still plenty room for improvements.
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    The first thing you’d notice about Minerva McGonagall wasn’t her stern expression or the sharp way her robes fell in perfect, unyielding lines. It was her hands. Long fingers, pale as parchment, with knuckles that clicked faintly when she flexed them. She had a habit of tapping them against her thigh in precise, measured rhythms, like she was counting down to something none of us could see.

    Breakfast in the Great Hall was always loud, but that morning, the noise felt thicker, like the air itself was pressing against my eardrums. Draco Malfoy was laughing too loudly at something Pansy Parkinson said, his voice cutting through the chatter like a knife. Across the table, Luna Lovegood stirred her tea absently, her gaze fixed somewhere beyond the enchanted ceiling, as if she already knew what was coming.

    The platters of food vanished all at once, leaving the long wooden tables bare. That was when McGonagall stood. The room didn’t go silent so much as it *stilled*, the way a beast holds its breath before the kill. Her hands rested on the podium, those fingers splayed wide. She didn’t need to raise her voice.

    “The Meat Lottery for tonight’s banquet,” she said, and the word landed like a stone in a pond. A ripple went through the students, shoulders tightening, eyes darting. Next to me, Ginny Weasley exhaled sharply through her nose, her fingers digging into the table’s edge. McGonagall’s lips thinned. “As is tradition, seven names will be drawn. Those selected will report to the center of the hall immediately following the announcement.” She reached into the pocket of her robes, and the rustle of the parchment was obscenely loud.

    The first name slipped from her tongue like a curse. “Daphne Greengrass.” A choked gasp from the Slytherin table, then silence. Daphne stood mechanically, her face blank as polished marble. Next was Luna Lovegood, who blinked once, then smiled faintly, as if she’d been expecting it. Hannah Abbott burst into tears before her name finished echoing, her sobs muffled by her hands.

    Draco Malfoy’s name came fourth. His smirk faltered, then twisted into something ugly. “You can’t, ” he started, but McGonagall’s glare severed the protest midair. His throat worked, Adam’s apple bobbing. Ginny was fifth. She didn’t move at first, just sat there, her freckles standing stark against suddenly pale skin. Then, with deliberate slowness, she pushed back her chair. The legs screeched against the floor.

    When “Harry Potter” left McGonagall’s mouth, the hall erupted. Shouts, protests, Ron Weasley lunged to his feet, face purple. But Harry? He just closed his eyes, like he’d known. Like he’d always known. And then, then it was my turn. “Hermione Granger.” My own name sounded foreign, distant. The air left my lungs in a rush. Around me, students edged away, as if death might be contagious.

    We gathered in the center, seven doomed souls. The stone floor was cold under my shoes, colder still when McGonagall’s voice cut through the murmurs. “Disrobe.” Simple. Final. Daphne moved first, her fingers trembling as she unbuttoned her blouse. The fabric slid off her shoulders, pooling at her feet like shed skin. Luna hummed as she undid her cardigan, as if this were just another oddity. Hannah sobbed openly, fumbling with her skirt’s clasp until it fell, revealing pale thighs slick with terrified sweat.

    Draco’s hands shook when he unbuckled his belt. His trousers hit the ground with a thud, and for the first time, he looked small. Ginny’s freckles stood out like constellations as she yanked her jumper over her head, her breasts heaving with panicked breaths. Harry stripped methodically, folding his clothes into a neat pile, like it mattered. Like any of it mattered now.

    My fingers felt numb. My tie came loose first, then the buttons of my shirt. The fabric clung, resisting, as if it knew what awaited me. When I pushed my skirt down, the air kissed my bare skin, a cruel mockery of intimacy. Socks last. The floor was icy. Around me, the others stood naked, exposed in every way possible. Daphne’s nipples pebbled in the chill.

    Draco's laughed. "Never thought I'd see the Golden Trio's underwear,".

    McGonagall’s gaze swept over us, clinical. “Proceed.” The word slithered into my bones. The stools waited, nooses swaying gently overhead.

    Daphne climbed first, her movements stiff as a marionette’s. The stool wobbled when she stepped onto it. McGonagall approached, the rough hemp of the noose rasping against Daphne’s throat as she tightened it. Daphne’s breath hitched. Then McGonagall seized her wrists, binding them behind her back with a length of coarse rope. The knots were efficient, practiced. Daphne’s fingers flexed once, twice, before going limp.

    Luna went next. She tilted her head, studying the noose like it was a fascinating specimen. McGonagall looped it around her neck, and Luna sighed, as if this were simply another curiosity. Her hands were bound without ceremony. She wiggled her fingers, testing the give, then smiled beatifically at nothing at all.

    Hannah collapsed before she reached the stool. McGonagall’s patience didn’t waver. She hauled Hannah upright by the elbow, fingers digging into flesh. The noose bit into Hannah’s throat when McGonagall jerked it taut. Hannah’s sobs turned to whimpers as her wrists were secured, the rope chafing raw skin.

    Draco spat curses as he mounted his stool, but his bravado crumbled when McGonagall’s fingers brushed his nape. The noose settled against his Adam’s apple. He swallowed convulsively. McGonagall ignored it, trussing his hands with the same detached precision.

    Ginny’s stool scraped against the stone when she stepped up. She didn’t look at any of us. McGonagall adjusted the noose, her fingers lingering for a heartbeat too long on Ginny’s pulse point. Then she cinched the rope around Ginny’s wrists, yanking until Ginny gasped. The sound was swallowed by the watching crowd.

    Harry’s stool creaked under his weight. His eyes were closed when McGonagall slipped the noose over his head. She hesitated, just for a second, before tightening it. His hands were already behind his back when she bound them, his fingers curled into fists.

    Then it was my turn. The stool was cold under my feet. McGonagall’s breath ghosted over my cheek as she fitted the noose, the rough fibers scraping my skin. Her hands were steady when she wrenched my arms back, the rope biting into my wrists. I could feel the eyes of the hall pressing against me, hungry.

    McGonagall stepped back to Daphne. The silence was absolute.

    Then her foot lashed out, sharp and precise. The stool clattered away. Daphne dropped. The rope snapped taut. A wet crack, not loud, but unmistakable, cut through the air. Daphne's body jerked, her toes splaying wide before curling inward like a bird's talons. Her legs pistoned wildly, bare heels drumming against nothing. The noose creaked with each frantic twist.

    Her face darkened first. Not red, purple, then blue. Veins bulged at her temples. Her mouth gaped, tongue swelling between teeth. A high, wet whine escaped her throat. Her thighs slapped together, then flew apart in desperate, spasming kicks. Below, a puddle spread between her feet, not yet urine, just terror sweat pooling on stone.

    At six minutes, her movements turned sluggish. Her toes twitched erratically, like a puppet with half-cut strings. At seven, her spine arched violently. A shudder ran through her, not pain, but something else. Her thighs trembled, then clamped tight. Clear fluid streaked down her inner legs, dripping to join the mess below. Her mouth stretched in a silent, grotesque parody of pleasure.

    Then stillness. Only the faint sway of the rope. At eight minutes, her bladder released in a sudden rush. The sound of liquid hitting stone echoed obscenely in the silent hall. Her head lolled, chin resting on her collarbone. A final tremor rippled through her limbs, then nothing.

    The applause started slow. A single pair of hands clapping, methodical, almost bored. Then more joined. By the time it swelled to a roar, it was deafening. Whistles cut through the noise. Someone shouted, "Next!"

    McGonagall didn't react. She just turned to Luna, who was already humming under her breath, her toes curling against the stool's edge. Luna blinked up at it, then at McGonagall, her eyes wide and unblinking. "Do you think it'll tickle?" she asked, her voice dreamy. Then, with a sharp jerk, McGonagall kicked the stool away.

    Luna dropped with a gasp, her legs bicycling wildly. Unlike Daphne, she didn't thrash violently. Her movements were almost graceful, her toes pointed like a dancer's. Her neck arched, the rope digging into her pale skin, but her face stayed strangely serene and she didn't scream. Just giggled, a wet, bubbling sound.

    At four minutes, her kicks slowed. Her thighs trembled, then parted with a shudder. A thin trickle of fluid traced down her inner thighs, glistening in the torchlight. Her breath hitched, then stuttered. At five minutes, her back arched sharply, her toes curling inward. A choked moan escaped her, her body convulsing as warmth spilled down her legs. The crowd roared, someone wolf-whistling. Luna's eyelids fluttered, her lips parting in a silent sigh.

    At six minutes, she went limp. Her head lolled forward, golden hair obscuring her face. A final twitch ran through her, then her bladder released in a sudden gush, splattering the stone below. The applause surged again, fists pounding tables. Luna swung gently, her bare feet swaying inches above the puddle she'd left behind. The noose creaked. The crowd cheered. The next stool waited.

    Hannah Abbott was already crying when McGonagall approached her. Tears streaked her cheeks, her chest heaving with ragged sobs. Her stool wobbled dangerously. "Please," she whispered, but McGonagall's doesn´t answer.

    When McGonagall kicked the stool away, Hannah's scream was cut short by the jerk of the rope. Her legs kicked wildly, her bare heels drumming against the air. Unlike Luna, there was no grace to her thrashing, just raw, panicked terror. Her face purpled quickly, spit foaming at the corners of her mouth. Her thighs slapped together violently, then flew apart in frantic, uncoordinated spasms. A wet stain spread down her inner thighs before the first minute had passed.

    At three and a half minutes, her movements grew sluggish, her kicks weakening to feeble twitches. Her breaths came in wet, shuddering gasps, her chest rising and falling erratically. At four minutes, her spine arched sharply, her toes curling inward. A thin, keening moan escaped her as warmth gushed down her legs, dripping onto the stone below. The crowd erupted into cheers, someone shouting, "Look at her go!" Hannah's eyelids fluttered, her body shuddering through the last waves of forced pleasure.

    By five minutes, it was over. Her body jerked once, violently, then sagged. A final stream of urine pattered onto the floor, mingling with the other fluids. Her head tipped forward, her chin resting against her chest. The applause was deafening. McGonagall didn't glance at her. She was already turning toward Draco.

    Draco Malfoy stood straighter than the others had, his chin lifted in defiance. His pale skin gleamed under the floating candles, his muscles taut with tension. When McGonagall approached, he sneered, though his lips trembled slightly. "You won't get the satisfaction of seeing me beg," he spat. McGonagall said nothing.
    The stool wobbled beneath him as he shifted, his bare toes gripping the edge for balance. His cock twitched against his thigh, half-hard despite his bravado. The crowd murmured, a few snickers rising from the Slytherin table. McGonagall foot lashed out. The stool clattered away. Draco dropped with a choked gasp, his legs flailing wildly. Unlike the girls, he fought with vicious, thrashing kicks, his heels striking the air like a spooked stallion. His face darkened quickly, his lips peeling back in a silent snarl. His cock stiffened fully as his body jerked against the rope, veins bulging along his neck.

    At seven minutes, his movements grew sluggish, his kicks weakening to feeble twitches. His breaths came in wet, shuddering gasps. At eight and a half minutes, his spine arched violently. A choked groan tore from his throat as his cock pulsed, thick ropes of semen arcing through the air before splattering onto the stone below. The crowd roared, someone whistling sharply. Draco's body convulsed, his toes curling inward as pleasure and agony twisted his features.

    At nine minutes, he went limp. His bladder released in a sudden gush, piss splattering beneath him. His head lolled forward, platinum hair obscuring his face. The applause erupted, louder than before, fists pounding tables in approval. McGonagall didn't react. She simply turned toward Ginny, whose stool waited, silent and inevitable.

    Ginny didn't cry. Didn't beg. She stood straighter than I'd ever seen her, her freckled shoulders squared. Her bare chest rose and fell too fast, betraying the fear her face refused to show.

    McGonagall stepped back. For a heartbeat, nothing moved. Then her foot lashed out. The stool toppled with a clatter. Ginny dropped. The rope snapped taut. A wet crack echoed, vertebrae protesting, not breaking. Ginny's legs pistoned wildly, her bare heels drumming against air. Unlike Draco, she didn't thrash with fury. Her movements were sharp, precise, like she was fighting an invisible opponent. Her face darkened fast, lips parting around choked, soundless gasps.

    At six and a half minutes, her kicks faltered. Her thighs trembled, then slammed together violently. A shudder wracked her frame. At seven and a half, her spine arched like a drawn bow. A thin, keening moan tore from her throat as warmth gushed down her inner thighs, dripping onto the stone below. The crowd roared. Someone shouted, "That's a Weasley for you!" Ginny's body convulsed, her toes curling inward as pleasure and death twisted together in her final moments.

    At eight and a half minutes, it was over. A final jerk, then stillness. Her bladder emptied in a sudden rush, urine pattering onto the growing puddle beneath her. The applause was deafening, students stomping their feet, whistles cutting through the din. Ginny swayed gently, her flame-red hair obscuring her face, her bare feet dangling inches above her own waste. McGonagall didn't glance at her. She was already moving toward Harry, whose stool waited, silent and patient as a grave.

    Harry breathing was steady, his green eyes fixed on some distant point beyond the hall’s enchanted ceiling as McGonagall approached him. The Boy Who Lived, the Chosen One, now just another name on the list. His cock hung limp between his thighs, but the crowd’s hungry stares made his skin prickle. The stool creaked beneath his bare feet.

    McGonagalls kick was swift, clinical. The stool clattered away, and Harry dropped. The rope snapped taut with a sickening jerk. His legs pistoned wildly, muscles corded with panic, his toes splaying wide before curling inward. Unlike Ginny’s controlled thrashing or Draco’s furious kicks, Harry’s movements were erratic, desperate. The crowd roared as his face darkened, veins bulging at his temples. His mouth gaped, tongue swelling between clenched teeth.

    At eight and a half minutes, his kicks weakened to feeble twitches. His breath came in wet, shuddering gasps, his chest rising and falling in uneven hitches. At nine minutes, his spine arched violently. A choked groan tore from his throat as his cock jerked, spurting thick ropes of semen into the air. The crowd erupted, cheers, whistles, someone howling, "Potter’s last gift!" His body convulsed, pleasure and agony twisting his features as the last of his seed splattered onto the stone below.

    By ten minutes, it was over. A final, violent twitch, then stillness. His bladder released in a sudden gush, piss splattering beneath his swaying feet. The applause was deafening, students stomping, tables rattling under pounding fists. Harry hung limp, his glasses askew, his dark hair obscuring his half-lidded eyes. The Boy Who Lived, dead at last. The crowd’s roar swallowed the sound of McGonagall’s footsteps as she turned toward me.

    The last stool waited.

    My pulse hammered against the rope, a trapped bird frantic against my skin. The hall held its breath. Seven hundred pairs of eyes feasted on my nakedness, my terror, my inevitable end.

    The foot of McGonagall lashed out. The stool clattered away.

    The drop was short, brutal. The rope jerked taut, snapping my head back. Pain exploded through my neck, white-hot and blinding. My legs pistoned wildly, toes splayed like starfish, heels drumming against air. The noose creaked with each frantic twist, the sound drowning out my choked gasps. My vision tunneled, the edges bleeding black. Spit dribbled down my chin, swinging in glistening strands with each convulsion.

    At five minutes, my kicks grew sluggish, my thighs trembling violently before slapping together. The crowd roared, a cacophony of cheers and stomping feet. My lungs burned, my throat a ruined column of fire. At six minutes, my spine arched without my consent, a final, vicious spasm wracking my body. Heat flooded my core, gushing down my inner thighs in slick rivulets. The applause crescendoed, someone shrieking, “Look at Granger go!” My body betrayed me one last time, convulsing around waves of forced pleasure as darkness swallowed my vision.

    At seven minutes, it was over. A final twitch, then stillness. My bladder released in a sudden rush, warmth splattering the stones below. The roar of the crowd was the last thing I heard, deafening, ravenous, triumphant, before the silence took me.

    The applause didn’t stop. Not even when my body swayed gently, my toes brushing the puddle I’d left behind.
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    >>30495

    Once more boring.
    No inspiration.
    Everything repeating.
    The most annoying are the 21 (in words: twenty-one) time specifications.

    The whole story can be condensed into a few lines. I took a look at the fates of Daphne Greengrass (DG), Luna Lovegood (LL), Hannah Abbott (HA), Draco Malfoy (DM), Ginny Weasley (GW), Harry Potter (HP) and Hermione Granger (HG) and conflated them. Just read the bold lines, in between are only the lists of references.
    Have fun.

    The executions started with McGonagall kicking …
    ​ ​ ​ LL: Then, with a sharp jerk, McGonagall kicked the stool away.
    ​ ​ ​ HA: When McGonagall kicked the stool away, …
    ​ ​ ​ HP: McGonagalls kick was swift, clinical.
    … or allowing her foot to lash out.
    ​ ​ ​ DG: Then her foot lashed out, sharp and precise.
    ​ ​ ​ DM: McGonagall foot lashed out.
    ​ ​ ​ GW: Then her foot lashed out.
    ​ ​ ​ HG: The foot of McGonagall lashed out.
    While the stools clattered away …
    ​ ​ ​ DG: The stool clattered away.
    ​ ​ ​ DM: The stool clattered away.
    ​ ​ ​ GW: The stool toppled with a clatter.
    ​ ​ ​ HP: The stool clattered away,
    ​ ​ ​ HG: The stool clattered away.
    … the sacrifices enjoyed their drop.
    ​ ​ ​ DG: Daphne dropped.
    ​ ​ ​ LL: Luna dropped with a gasp, her legs bicycling wildly.
    ​ ​ ​ DM: Draco dropped with a choked gasp, his legs flailing wildly.
    ​ ​ ​ GW: Ginny dropped.
    ​ ​ ​ HP: and Harry dropped.
    The ropes snapped taut …
    ​ ​ ​ DG: The rope snapped taut.
    ​ ​ ​ GW: The rope snapped taut.
    ​ ​ ​ HP: The rope snapped taut with a sickening jerk.
    ​ ​ ​ HG: The rope jerked taut, snapping my head back.
    … and creaked …
    ​ ​ ​ DG: The noose creaked with each frantic twist.
    ​ ​ ​ LL: The noose creaked.
    ​ ​ ​ HG: The noose creaked with each frantic twist, the sound drowning out my choked gasps.
    … or cracked wet.
    ​ ​ ​ DG: A wet crack, not loud, but unmistakable, cut through the air.
    ​ ​ ​ GW: A wet crack echoed, vertebrae protesting, not breaking.
    The victims' faces darkened and colored …
    ​ ​ ​ DG: Her face darkened first. Not red, purple, then blue.
    ​ ​ ​ HA: Her face purpled quickly, spit foaming at the corners of her mouth.
    ​ ​ ​ DM: His face darkened quickly, his lips peeling back in a silent snarl.
    ​ ​ ​ GW: Her face darkened fast, lips parting around choked, soundless gasps.
    ​ ​ ​ HP: The crowd roared as his face darkened, veins bulging at his temples.
    … and the hanged pupils began to breath in gasps, their chests rising and falling.
    ​ ​ ​ LL: Her breath hitched, then stuttered.
    ​ ​ ​ HA: Her breaths came in wet, shuddering gasps, her chest rising and falling erratically.
    ​ ​ ​ DM: His breaths came in wet, shuddering gasps.
    ​ ​ ​ HP: His breath came in wet, shuddering gasps, his chest rising and falling in uneven hitches.
    While the boys moved unlike the others …
    ​ ​ ​ DM: Unlike the girls, he fought with vicious, thrashing kicks, his heels striking the air like a spooked stallion.
    ​ ​ ​ HP: Unlike Ginny’s controlled thrashing or Draco’s furious kicks, Harry’s movements were erratic, desperate.
    … did all the girls a workout with their thighs …
    ​ ​ ​ DG: Her thighs slapped together, then flew apart in desperate, spasming kicks.
    ​ ​ ​ DG: Her thighs trembled, then clamped tight.
    ​ ​ ​ LL: Her thighs trembled, then parted with a shudder.
    ​ ​ ​ HA: Her thighs slapped together violently, then flew apart in frantic, uncoordinated spasms.
    ​ ​ ​ GW: Her thighs trembled, then slammed together violently.
    ​ ​ ​ HG: At five minutes, my kicks grew sluggish, my thighs trembling violently before slapping together.
    … before they caused their lovejuices to flow.
    ​ ​ ​ DG: Clear fluid streaked down her inner legs, dripping to join the mess below.
    ​ ​ ​ LL: A thin trickle of fluid traced down her inner thighs, glistening in the torchlight.
    ​ ​ ​ LL: as warmth spilled down her legs.
    ​ ​ ​ HA: A wet stain spread down her inner thighs before the first minute had passed.
    ​ ​ ​ HA: as warmth gushed down her legs, dripping onto the stone below.
    ​ ​ ​ GW: as warmth gushed down her inner thighs, dripping onto the stone below.
    ​ ​ ​ HG: Heat flooded my core, gushing down my inner thighs in slick rivulets.
    The Meat Lottery Winners got a bit tired, their kicks weakening to feeble twitches, …
    ​ ​ ​ HA: At three and a half minutes, her movements grew sluggish, her kicks weakening to feeble twitches.
    ​ ​ ​ DM: At seven minutes, his movements grew sluggish, his kicks weakening to feeble twitches.
    ​ ​ ​ HP: At eight and a half minutes, his kicks weakened to feeble twitches.
    … but they revived themself with arched spines.
    ​ ​ ​ DG: At seven, her spine arched violently.
    ​ ​ ​ LL: At five minutes, her back arched sharply,
    ​ ​ ​ HA: At four minutes, her spine arched sharply,
    ​ ​ ​ DM: At eight and a half minutes, his spine arched violently.
    ​ ​ ​ GW: At seven and a half, her spine arched like a drawn bow.
    ​ ​ ​ HP: At nine minutes, his spine arched violently.
    ​ ​ ​ HG: At six minutes, my spine arched without my consent, a final, vicious spasm wracking my body.
    While moans escaped their throats …
    ​ ​ ​ DG: A high, wet whine escaped her throat.
    ​ ​ ​ LL: A choked moan escaped her,
    ​ ​ ​ HA: A thin, keening moan escaped her
    ​ ​ ​ DM: A choked groan tore from his throat
    ​ ​ ​ GW: A thin, keening moan tore from her throat
    ​ ​ ​ HP: A choked groan tore from his throat as his cock jerked, spurting thick ropes of semen into the air.
    … and with toes curling inward …
    ​ ​ ​ DG: Daphne's body jerked, her toes splaying wide before curling inward like a bird's talons.
    ​ ​ ​ LL: her toes curling inward.
    ​ ​ ​ HA: her toes curling inward.
    ​ ​ ​ DM: Draco's body convulsed, his toes curling inward as pleasure and agony twisted his features.
    ​ ​ ​ GW: Someone shouted, "That's a Weasley for you!" Ginny's body convulsed, her toes curling inward
    ​ ​ ​ HP: His legs pistoned wildly, muscles corded with panic, his toes splaying wide before curling inward.
    … they experienced forced pleasure.
    ​ ​ ​ DG: A shudder ran through her, not pain, but something else.
    ​ ​ ​ DG: Her mouth stretched in a silent, grotesque parody of pleasure.
    ​ ​ ​ LL: her body convulsing
    ​ ​ ​ HA: Hannah's eyelids fluttered, her body shuddering through the last waves of forced pleasure.
    ​ ​ ​ DM: as his cock pulsed, thick ropes of semen arcing through the air before splattering onto the stone below.
    ​ ​ ​ GW: A shudder wracked her frame.
    ​ ​ ​ GW: as pleasure and death twisted together in her final moments.
    ​ ​ ​ HP: His body convulsed, pleasure and agony twisting his features as the last of his seed splattered onto the stone below.
    ​ ​ ​ HG: My body betrayed me one last time, convulsing around waves of forced pleasure as darkness swallowed my vision.
    Sooner or later it was over …
    ​ ​ ​ LL: At six minutes, she went limp.
    ​ ​ ​ HA: By five minutes, it was over.
    ​ ​ ​ DM: At nine minutes, he went limp.
    ​ ​ ​ GW: At eight and a half minutes, it was over.
    ​ ​ ​ HP: By ten minutes, it was over.
    ​ ​ ​ HG: At seven minutes, it was over.
    … and a final twitch was followed by stillness.
    ​ ​ ​ DG: A final tremor rippled through her limbs, then nothing.
    ​ ​ ​ LL: A final twitch ran through her,
    ​ ​ ​ GW: A final jerk, then stillness.
    ​ ​ ​ HP: A final, violent twitch, then stillness.
    ​ ​ ​ HG: A final twitch, then stillness.
    The bladders released in a sudden gush, urine splattering below.
    ​ ​ ​ DG: At eight minutes, her bladder released in a sudden rush.
    ​ ​ ​ LL: then her bladder released in a sudden gush, splattering the stone below.
    ​ ​ ​ HA: A final stream of urine pattered onto the floor, mingling with the other fluids.
    ​ ​ ​ DM: His bladder released in a sudden gush, piss splattering beneath him.
    ​ ​ ​ GW: Her bladder emptied in a sudden rush, urine pattering onto the growing puddle beneath her.
    ​ ​ ​ HP: His bladder released in a sudden gush, piss splattering beneath his swaying feet.
    ​ ​ ​ HG: My bladder released in a sudden rush, warmth splattering the stones below.
    The heads lolled forward, …
    ​ ​ ​ DG: Her head lolled, chin resting on her collarbone.
    ​ ​ ​ LL: Her head lolled forward,
    ​ ​ ​ HA: Her head tipped forward, her chin resting against her chest.
    ​ ​ ​ DM: His head lolled forward,
    … hair obscuring faces.
    ​ ​ ​ LL: golden hair obscuring her face.
    ​ ​ ​ DM: platinum hair obscuring his face.
    ​ ​ ​ GW: Ginny swayed gently, her flame-red hair obscuring her face, …
    ​ ​ ​ HP: Harry hung limp, his glasses askew, his dark hair obscuring his half-lidded eyes.
    The crowd roared, the applause was deafening …
    ​ ​ ​ DG: By the time it swelled to a roar, it was deafening.
    ​ ​ ​ LL: The crowd roared,
    ​ ​ ​ HA: The applause was deafening.
    ​ ​ ​ DM: The crowd roared,
    ​ ​ ​ GW: The applause was deafening, students stomping their feet,
    ​ ​ ​ HP: The crowd erupted, cheers,
    ​ ​ ​ HP: The applause was deafening, students stomping, tables rattling under pounding fists.
    ​ ​ ​ HP: The crowd’s roar swallowed the sound of McGonagall’s footsteps as she turned toward me.
    ​ ​ ​ HG: The applause crescendoed, someone shrieking, “Look at Granger go!”
    ​ ​ ​ HG: The roar of the crowd was the last thing I heard, deafening, ravenous, triumphant, …
    … and further enhance by whistles.
    ​ ​ ​ DG: Whistles cut through the noise.
    ​ ​ ​ LL: someone wolf-whistling.
    ​ ​ ​ DM: someone whistling sharply.
    ​ ​ ​ GW: whistles cutting through the din.
    ​ ​ ​ HP: whistles, someone howling, "Potter’s last gift!"
    The next stool waited.
    ​ ​ ​ LL: The next stool waited.
    ​ ​ ​ DM: She simply turned toward Ginny, whose stool waited, silent and inevitable.
    ​ ​ ​ GW: She was already moving toward Harry, whose stool waited, silent and patient as a grave.
    ​ ​ ​ HG: The last stool waited.

    I want to point out that this is a totally handmade work with no support of AI at all.

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