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    No.31795 [Report] AS
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    (Incest, lesbian, birth, implied cannibalism, loli, pet trans f)
    The couch was crowded, but a lot of it was empty as well. Jillian was sitting on Barbie's lap, her nanny, although she felt more like family. Janet, Jillian's mom, who had been Barbie's nanny when she was younger, was cuddled up next to the rwo girls.

    As was tradition every year, the three were huddled on the couch to watch the video of Jillian's birth. Her older sister Macy was curled up on the floor at their feet.

    On the screen, filmed on her thirteenth birthday, Janet was sweating and pushing and screaming as her father, and father of the nearly born baby, stood by "fuuuuccckkkk!!! Dadddddyyyyy!!!!" the Janet on the screen was screaming as the crown of her first baby girl was emerging "ohhhmygoddaddyyy!!!"

    Janet on the couch, next to Barbie and Jillian, had her right hand pumping into her cunt as she mouthed the words along wirh her thirteen year old self "fuck! Daddy I'm cumming!!!" And she did. Like she always did. Like she had when her oldest daughter emerged from her body ten years ago to the day. Janet trembled and wanted to close her eyes and lean her head back, but she kept her eyes locked on the screen as she fisted herself and came nearly as hard as she had back then. Her daughter and the nanny moaning and whimpering right next to her barely registered in her mind.

    Jillian rocked her hips as she watched, transfixed as always, at the moment her big sister was born. Sitting on Barbie's lap, riding her nanny's surgically enhanced cock, Jillian knew her moment was about to come, and she would too. They all would. They always did.

    Janet had been Barbie's babysitter years ago, when Jillian and Macy were still toddlers. It was only a year ago that Barbie (although she went by Marie back then, before the DDD implants and the laser treatment and the general bimbofication at Jillian's request... Jillian wanted her bff to be a Barbie doll, and nobody argued) had moved in to be the live in nanny at fourteen years old. Janet kind of saw her as a little sister. Jillian saw her as a big sister, more than her actual sister, curled up on the floor.

    Two minutes after they had watched Janet cum while pushing Macy out of her body, and while Janet on the couch was still fisting herself, baby Jillian made her debut, and they all watched as teenage Janet came again only harder, splashing her daddy and her two babies/sisters with a fountain of squirt.

    Macy was watching wide eyed from the floor as her mom drenched the back of her head with a matching squirt from the couch.
    She didn't turn or speak, just kept humping her bare pussy on the heel of her foot under her and drooled.

    "Fuucccckkkk daaddddyyyy!!!" Janet screamed on the screen as she delivered her second daughter and trembled like she was being electrocuted.

    Even after ten years, Janet wasn't sure if she came so hard because she was one of the lucky women who orgasm during birth, or if was because the was already an incestuous pervert, and having little girls stretch her cunt already made her cum, just never Ike that.

    Jillian was working her skinny little hips faster, riding the dick deep and hard... when she saw her mother cumming on the screen, on her little two-seconds old face, and on her two-minutes old sister, as well as her mom right then and there squirting all over her sister's head, and the couch, and the coffee table... she couldn't hold back if she tried. The fact that Barbie wrapped her arms tighter around her and started pumping her full of cum at the same moment nearly made the birthday girl pass out.

    Macy was the only one still able to fully focus on the end of the video, seeing her and her little sister cradled on her ecstatic mommy's chest, as their daddy showered them all in a huge load of proud fatherly cum. She didn't fully understanding what it was or what it meant, but when the screen went black, she stopped grinding her pussy on her foot and mounted her mother's leg.

    "Ma!!! Maaa!" Macy moaned the closest thing to a word she knew, as she rubbed her needy little pussy on Janet's shin, hands wrapped behind the woman's knee.

    "Ohhh. Yes pet. Mommy will give you cummies." Janet always indulged both of her girls on their birthday. And while Macy couldn't say much, having been raised as a pet instead of a daugher, she definitely understood some words, especially cummies. She turned and put her face to the floor, raised her ass to her owner, and spread her knees.

    "Happy birthday, girls!" Janet sighed as she basked in the warmth of her powerful orgasms and lined up her toes with her firstborn daughter's needy little animal cunt.

    "Happy birthday mommy" Jillian murmured as she turned in Barbie's lap and snuggled into the teens squishy cleavage, still feeling the older girl's cock throbbing in her pre-teen cunnie. "Happy birthday Macy" she said as she extended her own foot to
    her twin sister, giving her little love pats on her butt while their older older sister pushed her toes into the pets drooling little pussy.

    "Ok kids, guests will be here soon. The caterers had better be spitting the roast by now, she went into labor almost an hour ago. Once I give Macy cummies" her pet moaned and pushed back harder onto her foot at the word "ngg.... you two better be ready to celebrate, ok?"

    Janet looked over at Jillian and Barbie and felt like her heart was melting all over again. And her pussy was begging for more.... so cute, the two of them. Jillian, freckly and pale, red hair in braids like the girl from the best restaurant chain, and Barbie, the sluttiest looking fifteen year old girl you could imagine. Well, maybe once she had a few loads of cum drying on her face... and in her hair... on her ridiculous big tits.... running down her leg, anyway, Janet loved all her girls, even her little animal slut who had started making the sexiest primal noises of lust and need while she pushed her ass back on mommy's foot.

    "Jillie-bean, before you go get cleaned up can you pass me the.... oh, goddamnit" she smirked as she looked at the coffee table in front of the couch "I squirted on the coke. Again. Doesn't matter!!! You kids have a line or two, but pass it here before you go. I feel like Macy isn't gonna let go anytime soon."
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    No.31796 [Report]
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    (Incest, lesbian, birth, implied cannibalism, loli, pet trans f)
    The couch was crowded, but a lot of it was empty as well. Jillian was sitting on Barbie's lap, her nanny, although she felt more like family. Janet, Jillian's mom, who had been Barbie's nanny when she was younger, was cuddled up next to the rwo girls.

    As was tradition every year, the three were huddled on the couch to watch the video of Jillian's birth. Her older sister Macy was curled up on the floor at their feet.

    On the screen, filmed on her thirteenth birthday, Janet was sweating and pushing and screaming as her father, and father of the nearly born baby, stood by "fuuuuccckkkk!!! Dadddddyyyyy!!!!" the Janet on the screen was screaming as the crown of her first baby girl was emerging "ohhhmygoddaddyyy!!!"

    Janet on the couch, next to Barbie and Jillian, had her right hand pumping into her cunt as she mouthed the words along wirh her thirteen year old self "fuck! Daddy I'm cumming!!!" And she did. Like she always did. Like she had when her oldest daughter emerged from her body ten years ago to the day. Janet trembled and wanted to close her eyes and lean her head back, but she kept her eyes locked on the screen as she fisted herself and came nearly as hard as she had back then. Her daughter and the nanny moaning and whimpering right next to her barely registered in her mind.

    Jillian rocked her hips as she watched, transfixed as always, at the moment her big sister was born. Sitting on Barbie's lap, riding her nanny's surgically enhanced cock, Jillian knew her moment was about to come, and she would too. They all would. They always did.

    Janet had been Barbie's babysitter years ago, when Jillian and Macy were still toddlers. It was only a year ago that Barbie (although she went by Marie back then, before the DDD implants and the laser treatment and the general bimbofication at Jillian's request... Jillian wanted her bff to be a Barbie doll, and nobody argued) had moved in to be the live in nanny at fourteen years old. Janet kind of saw her as a little sister. Jillian saw her as a big sister, more than her actual sister, curled up on the floor.

    Two minutes after they had watched Janet cum while pushing Macy out of her body, and while Janet on the couch was still fisting herself, baby Jillian made her debut, and they all watched as teenage Janet came again only harder, splashing her daddy and her two babies/sisters with a fountain of squirt.

    Macy was watching wide eyed from the floor as her mom drenched the back of her head with a matching squirt from the couch.
    She didn't turn or speak, just kept humping her bare pussy on the heel of her foot under her and drooled.

    "Fuucccckkkk daaddddyyyy!!!" Janet screamed on the screen as she delivered her second daughter and trembled like she was being electrocuted.

    Even after ten years, Janet wasn't sure if she came so hard because she was one of the lucky women who orgasm during birth, or if was because the was already an incestuous pervert, and having little girls stretch her cunt already made her cum, just never Ike that.

    Jillian was working her skinny little hips faster, riding the dick deep and hard... when she saw her mother cumming on the screen, on her little two-seconds old face, and on her two-minutes old sister, as well as her mom right then and there squirting all over her sister's head, and the couch, and the coffee table... she couldn't hold back if she tried. The fact that Barbie wrapped her arms tighter around her and started pumping her full of cum at the same moment nearly made the birthday girl pass out.

    Macy was the only one still able to fully focus on the end of the video, seeing her and her little sister cradled on her ecstatic mommy's chest, as their daddy showered them all in a huge load of proud fatherly cum. She didn't fully understanding what it was or what it meant, but when the screen went black, she stopped grinding her pussy on her foot and mounted her mother's leg.

    "Ma!!! Maaa!" Macy moaned the closest thing to a word she knew, as she rubbed her needy little pussy on Janet's shin, hands wrapped behind the woman's knee.

    "Ohhh. Yes pet. Mommy will give you cummies." Janet always indulged both of her girls on their birthday. And while Macy couldn't say much, having been raised as a pet instead of a daugher, she definitely understood some words, especially cummies. She turned and put her face to the floor, raised her ass to her owner, and spread her knees.

    "Happy birthday, girls!" Janet sighed as she basked in the warmth of her powerful orgasms and lined up her toes with her firstborn daughter's needy little animal cunt.

    "Happy birthday mommy" Jillian murmured as she turned in Barbie's lap and snuggled into the teens squishy cleavage, still feeling the older girl's cock throbbing in her pre-teen cunnie. "Happy birthday Macy" she said as she extended her own foot to
    her twin sister, giving her little love pats on her butt while their older older sister pushed her toes into the pets drooling little pussy.

    "Ok kids, guests will be here soon. The caterers had better be spitting the roast by now, she went into labor almost an hour ago. Once I give Macy cummies" her pet moaned and pushed back harder onto her foot at the word "ngg.... you two better be ready to celebrate, ok?"

    Janet looked over at Jillian and Barbie and felt like her heart was melting all over again. And her pussy was begging for more.... so cute, the two of them. Jillian, freckly and pale, red hair in braids like the girl from the best restaurant chain, and Barbie, the sluttiest looking fifteen year old girl you could imagine. Well, maybe once she had a few loads of cum drying on her face... and in her hair... on her ridiculous big tits.... running down her leg, anyway, Janet loved all her girls, even her little animal slut who had started making the sexiest primal noises of lust and need while she pushed her ass back on mommy's foot.

    "Jillie-bean, before you go get cleaned up can you pass me the.... oh, goddamnit" she smirked as she looked at the coffee table in front of the couch "I squirted on the coke. Again. Doesn't matter!!! You kids have a line or two, but pass it here before you go. I feel like Macy isn't gonna let go anytime soon."
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    No.31797 [Report]
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    Sorry for double posting. I'm just not used to how posting works here.
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    No.31798 [Report]
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    >>31795


    That's a lot of confusing information. Are you sure it's not written by an AI? ;)

    Allow me to give you a hint. Make some detailed notes to sketch your idea. After writing a first draft wait some days or longer. Then read your text as if you haven't seen it before. While doing so make notes about what you just read. At the end compare your first and second notes. If you do this honestly you'll be surprised about the many differences. Now it's time to fix them and write the next version. Repeat the procedure. Some day the discrepancies will be acceptable small and you got your final text.

    Good luck.
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    No.31813 [Report]
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    The information provided in the story was a bit confusing, but it was quite interesting.

    Also, was there a reason for why Macy was raised as a pet whilst Jilian wasn't?
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    No.31814 [Report]
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    >>31813
    Not AI at all (just over tired and over alcoholed), but I just had too many ideas that I forced into a very short story. And I didn't do as much proofreading or editing as I should have. I don't tend to do a lot of world building by exposition, so my writing can be like being thrown into a cold pond. It all totally made sense in my min's eye, but I failed to spell it out the way I had hoped to.

    I promise the idea is/was very hot and playful. I rushed it. I may revisit it and repost it more the way I imagined it.

    Thank you for your criticism (although it was ouchy, but not unwarranted)

    I have loved a lot of the stories here, but I don't think I'll ever go so in depth as Jenny's Piglet Cure or Training Tina, for a couple examples of longer stories.

    But who knows?
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    >>31813
    There were reasons. At first I toyed with the idea that it was tradition to snuff the firstborn girl, and then as I was writing I changed my mind. I went back and changed some things and diced it would be more fun if Macy was still there but not considered human. I though the twins' relationship as person and pet could be more interesting when it got to the next chapter. I actually imagined this starting with Jillian blowing out her candles at the party, but then I overcomplicated everything.

    I haven't written much guro to begin with, and this was only my 2nd go here. I think I had too much loli guro pent up in my mind and it tried to burst out all at once. Smh.
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