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K/V: Killer
Name: Kurt Harrison
Age: 17
Sex: M
Characteristics: 155 cm tall, weighs 86 kg, black hair, shaved face, and green eyes. He's wearing a grey shirt, cargo shorts, and camouflage boots. He's armed with a silenced 9mm semi-automatic and a butcher's knife.
Scene: He's sitting on one of the toilets in the girl's bathroom at his high school, waiting for whoever comes in. (You can decide if he just kills one, or several.)





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Ralph Holland sat in the seat of his car holding his dad's .500 S&W Magnum, looking at the weapon as he turned it over in his hands. Fear, resentment, lust, and just about every negative emotion he could think of clouded his mind and thoughts.

"Fucking stupid bitch," he muttered to himself.

Kaori, his high school crush and long-time close friend, his lovely Kaori Harada, occupied his thoughts. Her face, once the angelic figure in his fantasies when he masturbated, now only sent him into uncontrollable rage. Earlier that day he finally got up the courage to ask her out; not only did she flat out​ reject him, but told him that she was a lesbian and seeing someone. In the length of ten minutes his years of dreams and hopes came crashing down, and that drove him into a state of resentment that wouldn't be calmed until he had some form of retribution.

That's why he was sitting in his car out in front of her apartment with a gun. He was sitting there for at least thirty minutes, and he was sure he seen her peaking through the blinds a few times. He almost expected her to call the cops at some point, but, to his surprise, they never showed up.

After turning the gun over for half​ an hour, he opened a box of ammunition and stuffed as many bullets into the pockets of his cargo pants as he could carry. Then, holding the gun behind his back​, he stepped out of the car. He stuffed the gun into the back of his pants and pulled his long shirt over it to make sure it was well hidden, then walked up to Kaori's doorway.

Before he could knock, the door swung open and Kaori stood in the doorway.

"Ralph," she greeted, without much enthusiasm.

The eighteen-year-old​ Japanese girl gazed at Ralph nervously through her deep brown eyes as her shoulder-length bright-red hair flittered in the breeze. She was wearing a pink see-through t-shirt, which fully displayed the black bra and toned belly underneath, and black pants.

"Can I come in for a minute? I'd like to talk," he requested, nervously.

"Uhm, yeah, sure, alright... come on in." She stepped aside, allowing Ralph stepped over the threshold and into her apartment.

"Hi Ralph," another voice said as he walked in; a voice that was less nervous than Kaori's​.

"Hi Nor," Ralph weakly replied.

Kaori's roommate, Nora Hampton, better known as Nor, was standing by the entrance to the hallway. She was slightly curvy with wavy blonde hair nestled around a pudgy, innocent-looking​ face. Her outfit consisted of a white polo shirt that perfectly outlined her large breasts, brown shorts, and the nerdiest glasses.

Ralph knew that she had a liking for him. He thought she was attractive and, were it not for his fascination with Kaori, he probably would have asked her out years ago.

"How's it going, Ralphie?" Nora asked in her sweetest voice.

"Fine, I guess..." He muttered in response.

Nora's expression became one of concern, but before she could say anything, Kaori interrupted.

"So, what do you want to talk about?" She asked.

"I, uhm, you know..."

"Alright Kah, I'm going to be in the shower if you two need me," Nora interrupted hastily and rushed out of the living room. Neither Ralph nor Kaori paid much attention, as they were too focused on each other.

"So," Ralph shuffled his hands, "who's the lucky lady you're with, anyways?" He asked. "Do I know her?"

"No, you never met her, but she's very nice."

"Can you tell me where she lives?" He asked, with his malice intent seeping into his voice.

"Why?"

"I'd like to know where she lives," Ralph reiterated, a little more demanding than requesting this time.

"Can we change the subject?" Kaori let out another nervous laugh, one that displayed her concern.

"We can talk about something else after you tell me where that bitch lives," he demanded with an anger that sent chills down Kaori's spine.

"Leave if you're not going to change the subject! Why can't you just be fucking happy for me and not be a jealous self-entitled dick?" She snapped, and turned to walk away with teary eyes.

"I'm not going anywhere until you give me your girlfriend's name and address! Do it now!" Ralph bellowed.

"Get out now, I'm calling the cops!" She went to grab her phone from a table in the center of the living room.

In panic, Ralph pulled the gun from his pants, aimed, and pulled the trigger, just as Kaori started to dial the number. A crack of thunder filled the living room and blood and brain tissue sprayed the table; Kaori fell forward, sending her phone flying into the wall.

"What... what have I... what?" Ralph gasped, backing up slightly before slowly starting towards her.

When he reached her body he placed the gun on the floor and crouched down next to her.

"Kaori..." He muttered.

There was a hole in the back of her skull, and Ralph knew that she was gone, but that fact didn't stop him from turning her over so he could feel her heart. He didn't have to, however; a massive exit wound filled with mushy​ brain matter and shattered bone fragments occupied the center of her forehead, with a diameter from the top of her head to the bridge of her nose.

Ralph's stomach lurched, and he thought he was going to vomit. His mind seemed to fade in and out of reality, and he didn't notice someone else enter the living room.

(This is the part of the story concerning Kaori, I'll link to the full story when and if Asstr can stop being a pain. The full story contains three bonus snuffs alongside Kaori's.)
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