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(I don't know this character, but let's have a go.)

It was always a shame to have to put down an obedient pig, or would this one be considered a cow? Few that she knew of in the area ate foxes or wolves, but this one, called Liru, seemed more lean than fat with room for improvement.

"I'm going to eat you now."

She squealed and blushed and smiled, wrapping her arms around her legs before shyly opening her legs to reveal her pink pussy between her dark-skinned thighs.

"Not what I meant, but okay."

She watched the small creature before her remove her armor to reveal her monstrous form, and only then did she realize that the 'eat you' part was meant in the very literal meaning... and so she tried to run, or rather crawl, away, but the length and strength of the creature's tongue matched her body-mouth.

A prehensile, serpentine tongue shot out from between the massive maw, wrapping around Liru's leg and putting her right back to the creature. Her leg disappeared into the maw, and, for a moment, she thought it was just illusion, but then that maw, the dagger-sized teeth, closed, taking her leg off completely and leaving behind a clean stump; save for the gushing blood.

"First the master gets a bite, and now I get my turn!" The creature said happily, its arms snatching Liru's at the elbow and shoulder before her teeth sank into the meat of her bicep. This mouth's bite was not as powerful as the larger one, but it tore flesh from bone just as easily.

Liru screamed and tried to crawl away once more, but the creature, focused on its meal and chewing with both mouths, had a painfully strong grip on the arm and would not let go.

"Next leg! Bite down on my hand so you don't swallow your tongue." It shoved its hand from her elbow into Liru's mouth, gripping her lower jaw from the inside as the large mouth shot its tongue out once more, wrapping around her other leg and pulling it.

This time, when it bit, the foot and part of the leg was missed.

"Master! You missed a bit." The creature said and reached around with its foot to shove the bit of Liru's leg into its great maw. "There you go. Do you like it raw? I can preserve the torso and cook it later." It asked, and then turned to Liru's wide, horror-filled eyes. "Fresh it is! Next are the insides!"

It moved its other hand from Liru's shoulder to her forehead and, with a practiced technique, dislocated her jaw one way and then the next before twisting and ripping it down her front until it broke off from the rest of her body. It then offered this grisly meal to its great maw, to which it accepted, before digging both hands into Liru's throat, widening the wound and feasting on her insides beyond the skin.

The creature tore out her breasts, a lung, veins, the stomach, kidneys, and intestines, takes turns feeding the mouth on its head and the one in its body. Liru, seconds into this gorey feasting, was dead, her eyes hollow and empty as the creature continued to speak.



Is anyone else hungry? No? Just me? Okay.

Her kingdom has fallen, again, and her 100 subjects have been freed from whatever spell she had them under. Now, within her private chambers of the palace, you find Menace, on her knees with her hands tied behind her back, waiting for your judgement. Outside, past the balcony, you hear the roar of the group awaiting to hear has been done to the desert queen.

This is Menace from Queen's Blade. She's a revived queen of a desert nation that can use Egyptian curse magic of some kind, but not anymore with you looming over her like a vulture waiting for its meal. FINISH HER!
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