>>8744
There's probably some literature section on like every guro/'dark' forum (FetNoir, Dark Fetish Net, etc), but I've never much been to any of those, so I can't speak for the quality there. But /lit/ (including a pretty lengthy thread by yours truly, even if it's past the bump limit and I haven't got to updating in a bit) as well as some threads in /rp/ (the prompt-based short story ones, such as the stickied Killer/Victim and Finish Her and their derivatives; though the quality …fluctuates) is a good start There's also a relatively new subreddit of /r/deadlyerotica/. Just go and check out any of these, you're bound to find something.

Keep an eye on rhythm and phrasing–yes, rhythm isn't just for poetry–and try to make it so it could be interesting even if someone weren't reading it for the fetish content. Avoid onomatopoeia and excessive descriptions not related to the erotic or plot focus–aka don't spend more than a couple sentences describing someone's clothing unless it's integral to the fetish content or important to the plot. If someone's getting strangled with a belt or using it to escape from a peril, it's okay to describe the belt. Otherwise, something like "she was wearing a leather belt" is enough. It's infuriating to readers when they click on a story and it looks several paragraphs long, only to find that the first 4-5 paragraphs are describing perfectly ordinary clothing and only the last 2-3 have anything to do with the fetish. (Google "asstr bad curry" if you want an example of this kind of mistake.) Onomatopoeia is bad because the readers have to read each character instead of just recognizing most of the words, and because readers don't have any emotional associations with random strings of vowels. It's almost always much better to describe the sound than to repeat it. Say something like "Jen screamed shrilly," not "Jen screamed 'AAAAAAAH'." If you have to use it, keep it short: "Sally let out a soft 'uhhh' and collapsed to the floor.'" Long onomatopoeia can also break text width on some sites, or on phones. In general, it's just rude. You can do better.

Make sure to use enough punctuation. If in doubt, try reading it out loud, making sure to only pronounce the punctuation that is actually there. A comma is a connecting pause, em-dashes are a longer connecting pause, and parentheses are kind of a combination of the two (usually used when an inserted phrase would be distracting otherwise). These things are all for separating phrases, as well as clauses if a conjunction such as "and" is used. Commas are also for separating different items in a list. A period ends a sentence. It is a pause, but also means the pitch of the last syllable before it is usually lower, indicating resolution. A semicolon connects two things that could be independent sentence, but which have ideas that are very closely related; many people make the mistake of tying "independent clauses" together with a comma, but unless you use a conjunction like "and" or "but," you need to use a semicolon instead. Colons are for lists or summaries. Quotation marks are for dialog, quoting, or definitions or example

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Exactly what Eterya said.
As someone into elaborate torture machines, I find concise descriptions to be the battle to prioritize. It's been my greatest source of stress for good reason.

>>8731
LOL! yes, original Red Riding Hood is about a wolf eating a woman and pretending to be her then getting chopped up by a woodsman.

Read erotica to learn erotic language. Read crime (or action) thrillers to learn violence.

I don't recommend /lit/ as a primary resource because stories there so often fail at basic writing mechanics. Some are fine, but prefer professional (or at least proofread) stories.

I’ve written a reasonable amount of erotica, some of which has been guro-themed, and been told it’s good. So I’ll weigh in with my personal advice, but do bear in mind that this is in no way ‘official’. I don’t have any actual qualifications lol, all I know is what works for me. I’ll also avoid repeating the basic stuff others have said about grammar, tense, etc, but that is all vitally important to consider.

Writing guro is very similar to writing regular erotica. The specific acts being described are different, but the overall tone is still meant to be arousing. I find that in order to accomplish that, firstly, word choice is very important. You want your words to be very blunt, to the point where they shock the reader and give them that taboo thrill they’re looking for. You’d be surprised how many ‘adult’ stories still dance around the hardcore subjects with flowery language. People aren’t used to reading about others being intimate in explicit detail, so when they see a story like that, it’s exciting because it’s different. Also bear in mind that I don’t mean be vulgar (using ‘fuck’ and ‘cunt’ all over the place is, in my opinion, not very arousing; like when you get these women just screaming ‘fuck me’ over and over again in porn and it feels like it’s trying too hard). But be explicit and try to use evocative, visceral words. This is probably easier to do in guro than in regular erotica because you gain access to the whole lexicon of violent language, not just sexual language.

Second, another very important thing is to have a strong description of your characters’ internal feelings and monologues. This may be more personal preference, but I find that lots of erotica (both guro and not) falls into the trap of reading like a drawn-out grocery list of sexual or violent acts. It describes what one character does to another, but it ends up feeling flat and boring because we have no connection or interest in what’s happening. You don’t need a detailed plot or backstory, or even very 3-dimensional characters, but you do need an insight into what is going through their heads during the act. I think a story that only features a relatively brief sexual encounter, but delves into the emotions of the characters at each point, reads far better than a story that just goes on and on with who did what when. Again, guro works well for this because there are so many visceral emotions to draw on.

Thirdly, and closely related to the last point, consider who your pov character is. I think guro works well written in the 1st person, as that really lets you get into the mind of a character, but you can do 3rd person if you want to give insight into how both parties are feeling. Either way though, whoever the current pov character is, tailor the language and style to their role within the scene:

For example, consider a standard guro scene of a man violently raping and butchering a woman. If told from the woman’s point of view, it’s vital that you use emotive description to convey how truly awful it is for her. We should feel her pain. Describe in depth her fear, her feelings of helplessness, her shock and disbelief at what is being done to her, and the agony and shame she feels as her body is violated. Address the moment where she realises she is going to die, or at least, be left permanently crippled and deformed. If each wound being dealt to her is accompanied by thoughts like that, it makes the whole thing more impactful.

From the man’s point of view though, it’s the opposite. He is the aggressor, and the one enjoying himself. You should describe his glee, and the moments of thought and inspiration he has before each act. Is he going to cut her clit off with a knife? Why did he choose to do that and not something else? When describing the woman as seen though his eyes, use objectifying nouns and adjectives; as if you were describing a piece of meat or any other inanimate object.

That’s just one example, but hopefully you can see what I mean about fitting the language to the character and the scene.

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>>25143

It's ok to bump threads but please do it only once and not under other people's aliases, just as a courtesy to them. I know there are double posting issues on the site but posting two bumps, one under eevee's name and one under mine, isn't that.

We don't have a lot of mods and so we rely on you all to not create more work for us.

does "the void" count as faceless? ;)

>>18185
Nice find!! Can you send the sauce?

Gently in my sleep.

>>8557
This. In my own home.

To make it interesting and to force me away from taking a more direct way out lets say I am in a situation where I have to pick out an elaborate little more drawn out death I will list an order (some of course fictional).

#1 Eaten by a dragon after being played with in it's mouth for a while (chewing OK).
#2 castrated slowly (use of a scalpel across the scrotum to cut free the testicles individually) then penis cut off at base slowly and before I can bleed out disemboweled horizontally just below the belly button maybe while being fucked in the ass.
#3 castrated slowly (use of a scalpel across the scrotum and the cut free individually) then penis cut off at base slowly meanwhile fucked in the ass until I slowly bleed out. (Also wouldn't mind being fed my penis and at least one of my testicles, the other one my executor / master / mistress can eat, unless he / she wants them all which is fine too as long as they are not wasted on this occasion.
#4 disemboweled horizontally while being fucked in the ass (maybe carefully gutted so I can live a little longer, maybe even climax.
#5 in a suspended hogtie my genitals are tied off, left for a little while and my prostate massaged. While climaxing have my sliced genitals with sharp shears then be gutted vertically from bladder to heart, let my guts splatter to the floor.
#6 in a suspended hogtie I am pleasured and close to climax I am gutted vertically from bladder to heart, let my guts splatter to the floor while I am cumming.
#7 Sawn in half horizontally just below the  button with giant buzzsaw, while being pleasured (the saw can gut me right in half as I cum).
#8 Pike impalment using gravity technique up ass. Lowered on to the pike just before a climax so the pike causes climax rubbing along the prostate (pike should also not be extremely sharp at point for maximum pleasure going in but longer impalement). I should also be spit roasted on the pole and eaten when done.
#9 Eaten by large cat (Tiger the best) with something protective on the neck (try to get it to aim for belly or genitalia with some kind of musk).
#10 sliced in half with a body guillotine at time of climax, facing up.

To being willingly hanged for viewers like a volunteer, slowly choked by a rope into the fatal end. To die during hopelessly kicking, uncontrolled twitching and demonstrating of lethal convulsions. It tempts me a lot.

I luv the fantasy of being an indian warrior, and playing for a long time with a settler captive…..slow tortures, and pissing on his face while he begs!!!!!!!

Oh wow! Thanks for these new additions! They're awesome!

Thanks for translating and Sharing
So you have the Link to the original?
Or at least the pixiv Name of the author?

Would love to know where it came from.

Seems to be this one: http://m.4444v.cc/wapbook-33/

Looks Like a epic story of at least 21 chapters.
Unfortunarely google translation ist Not really understandable.
I really wish someone would translate it.

I just did the next few chapters and can say it may be the best story series around.

>>16187

Oh that's a nice find, thanks for that. Didn't think to do a search but it is indeed the same work.
Here's the pixiv that also has accompanying art already on /g/: hxxps://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=8140783

The first 12 chapters on the webnovel site are reposted as 10 "chapters" on pixiv. It's not uncommon for chinese accounts to repost or take credit for someone else's work there. As for the art, it's clearly stated in the first post that they're just illustrations for the story and not drawn by the account owner, though I don't see them on the webnovel site. I don't know enough internet chinese to figure out if that webnovel site is the one that originally hosted the story or if there are multiple legit hosts like people do for royalroad stories, nor do I have a clue where the original host for the illustrations are if any. That site doesn't let you copy text, so I'm looking for another one.

Anyway, google translate doesn't work well on it because it has a very native chinese feel with sentence structures that don't easily fit english, which also hurts translating. Thus the number of bad sentences in op.

First post was a full day, nap, all-nighter and a bit more; it's pretty tough for just about three chapters and not nearly enough in terms of content, but this reminded me to look into it again.
Thanks, and hopefully some more will go up soon.

That said, anyone able should have a go too. I'm a huge fan of content from other languages.

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Has anyone got the rest of the gallery?

Is there still a way to remove the sensors from these games?

>>24608
What do you mean with sensor? Only "plus" version has different type of peeper.

There used to be a way to remove the sensor pixels from the girls shit for each game.

>>24617
Momosa patch. Hmm i don't remember this patch for Nozokinin games. I'm not sure either.

anyone have ninja peep plus?

Ah shit are we doing an old fashioned nevada-an thread?

Freya leapt from her longship, sword in one hand and shield in the other. Daughter of the chieftain, standing at 5'7 and strong as any man, clad in shining maille with her golden hair tied up into a braid, trailing behind her in the wind, one would be hard-pressed to believe she was only 15 years old. If you looked closely enough, you could see past her battle-hardened muscles and see the youth in her features yet untouched by time, the lingering childishness in her eyes - naturally, most of her foes did not live long enough to make such observations.

A throng of shieldmaidens clambered out behind her and gathered around. On both sides, more men and women are jumping off longboats much like hers, brandishing an assortment of axes, spears and swords. It was a sight that could strike fear into every English peasant's heart: a Viking raid!

With a terrible warcry, the Vikings began to advance towards the nearby town of Bolton-on-Sea.

The town was quiet, not a soul in sight; but this was to be expected. Their arrival was hardly covert. With no walls to hide behind, the townsmen have likely barricaded themselves in the church or monastery. The Vikings split into groups, the largest following Freya's father, the chieftain, who would lead the siege. The rest spread out into the town, clearing out the perimeter, pillaging whatever valuables there were and capturing any poor sods too slow to hide, taking them home as slaves.

Freya gathered her shieldmaidens and headed west. One by one they cleared out houses and stripped them of everything of value, but there was scarcely anything to take: no coins, no silver, no seeds, no tools, no men cowering under tables or hiding behind cupboards; only crude pottery and cheap cutlery.

Something didn't feel quite right. It's almost as if they were prepared for us - as Freya stepped into a crossway, she heard a splash, a terrible sizzle, and the echoing, agonized screams of her shieldmaidens, as if all at once - a cauldron of boiling oil had been hurled at them from a nearby window!

Freya quickly recomposed herself from the shock and heat. Ifra had jumped in front of her with her shield at the last moment, leaving her unscathed, yet Ifra was now writhing on the ground, screaming and developing ghastly boils, much like most of her brethren; only six or seven shieldmaidens were still standing.

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People tell me it's a power thing but honestly the struggling is the part that gets me off the most. The rending flesh from bone as the prey is torn apart and swallowed bit by bit. The taste of raw meat and blood is enough to get me horny these days (especially), so I tend to eat a lot of the former.

It is SO wild. A total turn on. I always envision my wife is such a circumstance. To see her vored and her body's torso torn from her so that she's skinned but her body still in tact in its shape, then finally debreasted and destroyed. Awesome.

For me, its the concept. Both from the perspective of the predator and the prey, that a living thinking being is going to be food. Sustenance. Maybe a tasty treat. Especially in a consensual or semi consensual scenario.

The conflict between preserving another person - maybe a loved one's life and very existence - versus having them as a meal. Satisfying primal urges of being sated and having something tasty, or maybe some sexual pleasure for just a single time.

Or from the prey's perspective, to be willing (or unwilling but having no choice) to give up one's life for the fulfillment of another's very most basic needs and desires.

I don't enjoy the killing or the pain or the bloody gore that much (Although they can be kinky fetishes on their own, they are not what makes me love vore)

Even as far as domination is concerned, I most like when the prey has given up fighting and accepted its fate - as food.

An especially sexy part is taking the consensuality to the extreme. When the prey is more or less force feeding themselves to the predator that is either unwilling, or unable (due to injury, weakness, exhaustion or moral objections) to eat them.

"Oh you poor thing, you look starved. Here, have me, I will give you some strength."

I only like vore when it involves a penis.

I like to be the vore victim. Like the idea of being sexualy pleasured in the sexy dragon's mouth and as i am cumming the dragon eats me.

In recent years, it seems like “Kill the Above” threads have cluttered up this section; and I will admit to being largely responsible for most of it. So, I figured it would be prudent to try to gather these into as few threads as possible: three so far; one for teens and adults, one for children, and one for beasts/monsters.

Here’s the first thread.

Death Above

You have probably seen this enough times to know the gist of it, but I’ll explain for any newbies.

Poster 1 posts a character/characters and scenario.

Poster 2 writes a story in which Poster 1’s character is killed, based on Poster 1’s outline. Then Poster 2 creates their own character, and the next person repeats the process; and so on and so on.

Rules;

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Seems decent to me, and this is the right place for it. Go on ahead. Maybe I'll ask the head dev about getting a comprehensive summary of our formatting tools, or extending some ability to use html into posts.

No promises. Im busy, hes busy, and its probably a big ask.

Making decent guro is pretty hard in comparison to plain normal stuff so SFM or Honey Select is not that good

The best choice for pictures is Daz3D + ZBrush + Photoshop (or something similar for texture editing)
Daz3d has lots of content. Most of it can be found for free.
Photorealistic rendering will require Nvidia card with 8Gb or more memory. (but you can use 3delight as well with slightly less realistic results.)

You can try Clip Studio if you would like to try drawing 2d pictures in modern way. Clip studio is also useful as better photoshop replacement, which you can use to add text and special effect to your pictures

One of those is "Waste Management" by Anime Lover. You can read it on Nyou Fiction. It was based on my prompt and I'm still happy about that!