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No.3355 [Report] AS
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I saw on another board someone asking if there was a globalized fetish thread on Gurochan, and so after looking and not finding anything, I'm starting one right here.

Long story short: post whatever (now guro-friendly) fantasies you'd like to imagine happening on a worldwide scale. All women now = food for some reason, an alien army shows up to maim/convert the Eath's population, etc, whatever you can think of.
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For mysterious reason, the men become unable to transmit their Y chromosome, which mean that from a certain point, only baby girls are birthed. The number of male slowly decrease and despite the heroic effort of the last remaining potent men, the demographic start collapsing.
To survive, the humanity have to find a way to reproduce without male in short delays. Cloning is considered but there is a major problem. It's horribly expensive if you want good result. Reproducing only through cloning would ask way to much effort to the society to be sustainable.
Gladly, some scientist discover a new drug that change the way a woman ovum are working. Those altered eggs are able to fuse with an other ovum to become a baby. Yes! The human kind is saved.
But wait, ovum are still unable to move by themselves, are they? So even with this drug, you still need a complex and intrusive medical procedure to get a woman pregnant. We just don't have enough doctor to stabilize demography this way.

People imagine many solution to make the procedure more simple but fail one after the other and the number of human on the earth keep getting lower. This despite the frantic efforts of the few remaining males, disregarding their own safety and not counting hours to slow down the decline of the hommo sapiens.
But finally, someone come up with the Solution. In front of the congress, a young woman proudly explain to her audience how she managed to impregnate her girlfriend without needing any tool or external help except the ovum modifying drug. By her side, stand the living proof of what she is saying: a second young woman looking quite intimidated and heavily pregnant.
How was it done? Well quite simply. The two girl are into hardcore sex since a certain time and love stretching their pussy with unreasonably big object.
The atmosphere become more heavy with each of her world but the future “father” keep on her tale.
She have been a bit to greedy once or twice in her “games” and caused her reproductive system to fully prolapse out of her. And from this point, impregnating her love was straight-forward! She just inserted the end of her pink socks in the cervix of her loved one and milked her own inside-out reproductive system to get her ovums in her love.
Easy as pie with the adequate training.
Except the girl you just finished her speech, everyone in the room look mortified.


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One morning in the very near future, all women around the world wake up cured of any and all diseases, both physical and mental.

And it takes a while for women to realize it, but they've also been rendered largely indestructible - any parts of their bodies damaged after this global change will regenerate completely within 24 hours, as long as at least a single ounce of the woman's body is left intact.

The unfortunate cost of this sudden and explained healthiness and near-indestructibility is that every woman is now made of food. Women still appear perfectly normal - exactly the same they did before the change happened - but cut into any woman and you'll find that her insides have been replaced with strawberry preserves, or roast beef and gravy, or angel food cake, or cucumber flesh, or damned near any other semi-solid food product you can imagine.

How women still retain their shape and structural integrity without bones or muscles (or can speak or even think without lungs or a brain) is still a complete mystery, but, for the time being, every woman reacts in her own personal way to being turned into a walking buffet item.
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For some reason, I've had a thing for all women suddenly starting to melt at the same time without warning.

Sometimes it happens fast, sometimes it happens slow, sometimes women survive their melting and retain their consciousness afterwards and sometimes they don't - all that matters is the panicked gurgling as they all begin to melt within their clothing without the ability to stop the horror....
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you can stop your aging at whatever stage of your life you want, but no one's body ages past 21. everyone still lives a normal lifespan of 80-90 years or whatever but everyone looks 21 or younger on the outside. some people choose to stop aging at 17 or 14 or 8.
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Hell on Earth, Utopias, Humanity reaches True Godhood.

The creation of infinite dimensions that each expand infinitely in all directions, and infinite more that are limited in size. Some have life everywhere, some are are lifeless. War, peace, everything in between.

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Sticking with the globe, the worst 98% of humanity dies on the same day, some agonizingly over hours while others drop dead instantly. The last 1 in 50 all have technological super powers and clean up the planet, build flying city-fortresses. There are still natural disasters and some of the worst people survived, mutating into abominations.
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No.7824 [Report] AS
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Hi Gurochan!

This is my first ever work in English. Please tell me if you enjoyed it and how I can improve on it! Most of the stories here will be somewhat short, and they'll revolve around the untimely demise of doe-eyed damsels. ^^

All stories and characters are purely fictional, and should not be emulated in real life~

Aki


Amanda



It was six in the morning, the orange hued rays brought warmth to a new beautiful day as the sun was just starting to rise. Amanda was just finishing off her breakfast, ready to kick off another day at work.


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No.7877 [Report]
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The rating system is unneccessary.
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No.7880 [Report]
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That was fun!
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No.7964 [Report]
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I like the rating system
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>>7875
Thank you for the compliment! I will try to be more descriptive in the next story~

>>7877
I guess so, but please let me have a little bit of fun with it.
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No.8975 [Report]
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Bump in hope of an update
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No.8889 [Report] AS
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this is the ultimate D/S. Stories were bad people are tortured by good revengeful ones" are boring.

More poor, weak, innocent the victim is, the better
morre rich, strong, perverse the dom is, the better.
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No.8943 [Report]
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Definitely!
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No.8954 [Report]
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IMO, even more ultimate is a combination of
evil - wealthy - muscular - beautiful - arrogant
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kind - poor - skinny - ugly - shy
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No.8955 [Report]
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I think this is most common BDSM story type and main fantasy of many women. like story "57 shades of grey" and many other clones.

It is extremely rare to encounter story where strong is dominated by weak.
except maybe in manga.
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No.8956 [Report]
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You may say that, but, personnaly, I had NEVER find a story were the dominant use explicitly her wealth as a weapon of humiliation. Nor than a mix between money and muscles (strong in wealth, strong in health).

Except one time, in "a quickie for suzy", an ASSTR story, and on some of stories of dark real of Polaris.

But I desperatly seek for other like that.
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>>8956
I wonder how you are even supposed to use wealth as weapon?
most stories are just about rich assholes who can do whatever they like and get unpunished or sadists who get along with masochistic women.

If you see story which focuses on how sadist is using his resources to ruin life for some poor homeless girl (as if her life can be ruined any more) by hiring some thugs to rape her then yes this is not common story.
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No.8908 [Report] AS
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You're probably seeing all those tags and wonder: "How the fuck does he cram all these fetishes into one story?"

Well, I've lurked for several years now, and written down my depraved fantasies (which is the only thing they are! Fantasies!), and as I did, I noticed that they became darker with each instance.

Thus, I decided to try and write a story that combined my many fetishes. Some of the tags will appear later on. Aside from the ones listed on top, I'll include more, but I'll put them on top of the reply which contains them.

The one thing I'll never include is rape, which is kind of funny to me, as there is so much unpleasantness contained here..

Have fun reading, I hope you're enjoying reading my story as much I as I did writing it.

Cheers!



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No.8925 [Report]
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Chapter 2 - Morning Piss

Right behind the door, in the middle of the hallway was a large screen, set up specifically for me to inspect each class and student, giving me not only access to every single file about them, but also live-feed from class-, bath-, changing-rooms and the gym.

I could've hidden it somewhere for the sake of the small-town-illusion that turned me on so much, but an even bigger turn-on was the thought of the young children walking by it every day.

Them seeing the symbol of their waiting demise every day, as they entered a place that should actually be giving them shelter made my dick throb with sadistic pleasure.

I used the screen to scroll through the classes.

Lusting after something a little older, I went for classes 11, with the girls being between 16 and 17.

I didn't want to pinpoint an exact victim, as the classes were carefully selected to provide an equal share of diversity for me.

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No.8927 [Report]
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2 bad this isn't a manga.... ;)
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Chapter 3 - Punishment and Rewards

Turning around, I smiled at her, as her hands were roaming her piss-covered flesh, as if to replicate my presence, while her boyfriend had actually reached over and caressed her wet shoulder while stroking his dick.

“Good girl”, I said and proceeded to the closet next to the blackboard.
Every classroom had a room like this, all of them equipped with basic tools for pleasure and pain.

As I was deciding on the girls fate, I could hear the moaning of the entire class behind my back, with sounds of rubbing and squishing and the smell of young pussyjuice and pre-cum filling the air.
Finally, I re-emerged with a large baseball-bat, a sight greeted with loud Ooohs and Uuuuhs.

Cynthia was practically screaming with delight as she saw it and rubbed her piss-covered body even more roughly, while her boyfriend's mouth hung open, eyes wide with terror.

Throwing it toward the class, I shouted: “Whoever gets to the bat first can punish that useless cunt over there as much as he or she wants, and if that girl dies in the process, her killer is given the special opportunity to visit my dog kennel. And my boys are just starving for some meat right now!”

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No.8941 [Report]
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Well, I expected something different from the tags and description since I like consensual stuff, but it is not exactly what I expected.

First it was pretty boring to read description of that utopia and it woud be much better to reveal this along with the action than dedicate entire chapter to bureaucratic nuances.
Also if you implant chips and control people or they follow orders it is not consensual anymore this is mostly rape if you claim to be one in control.

Of course it is your fantasy, but your description is not very acurate.
I woud say that you main fetish is politic and ruling LOL because you spend most of the time on that stuff.
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No.8946 [Report]
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So wonderfully perverse. I hope you continue.
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This is a new game I came up with thanks to Killer and Victim.

(Image only marginally related.)

It's simple: The person above sets up a scene in which a girl is either masturbating or having sex with someone. You then describe a scene in which a killer stumbles on their love-making session and crashes their party by killing everyone involved. Then set up your own scenario for the next person.

I'll get us started.

Victims: 3

Name: Nicole Perkins
Age: 17
Sex: F

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>>1963

In place of putting my own here, just roll with this post.
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No.2072 [Report]
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bump, someone continue this please
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No.2082 [Report]
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>>2072

I'm the anon who did that last story for Pussy Shooter. I'll cover the next story if nobody else does. I just feel odd, eating the whole cake y'kno
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I have walked in on Ms. Millers giving her, uh, raunchy, after school session with one of the students every time she took over for Mr. Wilson. This time she was standing over a pink-haired girl of 16 or 17, who was eagerly lapping at the teacher's pussy while Ms. Miller softly stroked her hair. Both girls' shirts were wide open with their tits hanging out.

The other times I either overlooked the incident or blackmailed Ms. Miller and, depending on the gender, her student. Unfortunately a lot has changed since the last time; the new rules require immediate execution for sexual activity on school grounds, and all Enforcers are required to wear a bodycam. So, as much as I hated to, I wouldn't risk the consequences.

I drew my gun from its holster and set it to automatic. Because she might be able to talk me out of it, I fire several rounds into her upper torso before a single word could be uttered. She let out a sharp gasp as the bullets penetrated her breasts and tore holes in her lungs, then she staggered backwards before collapsing to the floor with an expression of absolute pain on her face.

The younger girl screamed in confusion at the sight of Ms. Millers' ruined chest. She tried to say something, but only spat up blood. She continued to regurgitate blood with each attempt to breath or talk, as her lungs quickly filled up.

In her panic the teen attempted to make a run for it, but a piece of cloth wrapped around her arms caused her to lose balance and fall to the floor; her head landed between Ms. Millers' legs just as the teacher's bladder expelled a torrent of piss, soaking the girl's hair.

Before she could get up I placed the gun a few inches from the back of her head and placed six bullets into her brain. Her body twitched and her own torrent of piss seeped out from between her legs and created a steadily-growing puddle.

I looked over their dead bodies, took out my smartphone and snapped a few pics for personal use later, then contacted the clean up crew.

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I'm the anonymous who posted the above. I noticed that I made some mistakes in my prompt and I'm posting a corrected version.

Victims: 3

Name: Amanda Walker
Age: 17
Sex: F
Appearance: See pic (left girl)

Name: Christina Walker
Age: 12
Sex: F
Appearance: See pic (middle girl)

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No.8397 [Report] AS
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Well, this could probably needs a little more time, but here it is. Let me know what you think!

disclaimer: This story is entirely fictional, along with all characters and events described in it. Any resemblance with real life is just a coincidence. Harming another human being is wrong and in no way I am trying to convey the opposite. Please, don't do anything like this!



I was waiting behind the counter when I first saw him coming. He was walking confidently towards me with a big smile on his face, and I hesitated for just a minute, looking at the other girls around me. No one moved, so I stepped up behind the counter, as we were supposed to do.

He stopped on the other side, laying his briefcase on the countertop. His eyes were locked on mine as he smiled, and soon I was trembling. He was at least 6 feet 5” tall and wide as a door, but what stroke me the most was his skin. It was so black that it seemed to be shining under the lights.

Looking into his eyes, I smiled as I dried my sweaty hand on my apron.

“Hello Sir, and welcome to XXXpresso. My name is Roanne, how may I serve you today?” I said to him.

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No.8421 [Report]
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Good job.
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No.8432 [Report]
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To be honest, I might like it better without the last paragraph--having it cut out mid sentence gives it a note of finality imo
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No.8785 [Report]
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Bump!
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No.8868 [Report]
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Brilliant.

I hope you never stop writing.
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No.8907 [Report]
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Glad to know that people liked this one. Hopefully I will have the next one in a couple of weeks, but for now I am completely stuck...
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No.3391 [Report] AS
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I'm thinking of killing myself but what if instead I donated my body to one of you, to torture for as much as you'd like until giving me my end?
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No.3746 [Report]
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>>3730
Yep...
It's hard. How am I supposed to find a girlfriend who will let me drink her blood?
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No.4517 [Report]
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[email protected]

Not interested in the snuff, but I'd be open to the torture part. That goes for anyone not just OP (who I assume is gone by now).

I'm mostly interested in a girl who practices self harm. I'd like to encourage that sort of behavior.
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>>3399
If it's consensual, it's legal.
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>>4524
Nooot entirely true actually.
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>>3391
Back when I had my own place I talked to a handful of people interested in this kind of thing. Unfortunately most weren't my type (all but two were men over 40) and the one I was really interested in killing was the one I successfully talked out of a suicide attempt and we ended up in a relationship for a while which was nice but several steps down from living out my biggest fantasy. Now I'm sharing a flat so it's totally impossible for me to do something like this even if I was still interested.

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Be very careful sharing things like email addresses in this context. Even if most of you are only interested in talking, it would be very easy to argue that you were actually looking to accept super serious poster's offer which could land you in hot water legally or just cause a lot of trouble in your every day lives if people linked it to you.

>>4524
In most places its still murder even with consent.

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No.15085 [Report] AS
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Wendy killed
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No.15096 [Report]
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Who made this cause I want to see if they will make more.
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No.15097 [Report]
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Please sir, I want some more.
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No.15098 [Report]
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Please sir, I want some more.
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Lucy Heartfilia and Celestial Spirits Aries, Virgo, and Aquarius.
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No.15894 [Report]
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Awesome work;) more please.
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No.4320 [Report] AS
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(I am not sure if this is the right place, but /req seemed like the wrong choice).

I am about to finish a new story, and I would like a little help proof reading it. If anyone would like to help, the tags are M/f, MMM+/f, F/f, cons, first, anal, throating, bukkake, lesbian, impalement, snuff.

I am interested in knowing what you think to see if I can change something to improve it. Keep in mind that this time its not one of the dark stories I usually write (note the consensual tag).

If you want to help, let me know and we can get in touch.
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>>4321
Thanks! I prefer to do it over email if you can (its a bit quicker for me). If you want to let me know and I will give you my address.

>>4322
Thanks man, I sent you an email a minute ago.

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Glad you like them! This one will be completely consensual (someone told me I didn't do enough of those on my last stories so this one will have to make it up).
As for a site, I don't have one yet. I wanted to make a site were I could upload some pictures I also have (reference for the stories) but its not easy. I am looking into uploading them to ASSTR in the meantime.
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I am still looking for someone, so if you are interested and you liked my stories, let me know!
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>>4324
If we discussed in a private IRC chat you could send me a Google Drive link so I can read through in one tab and give you my thoughts in another.

Also, what's all this about people complaining about non-con? all I see in /lit/ is cons!
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>>4328
Thanks for the offer. Unfortunately I ran out of time to work on the story so I decided to post it as is, otherwise it would just ended up unfinished for ever. It shouldn't be to bad to read, so if you have time I would still like your opinion.

Its called XXXpresso!
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Soooo what happened to Eficient? Did he get his website up yet?
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Awakened by a splash of cold water, Julie took a moment to get her bearings. Her wrists were fastened by leather straps attached somewhere above her, pulling her hands out and high over her head, and her ankles were similarly strapped to the floor, granting her no wiggle room. And she was naked. These were the first things she noted as she clawed her way up to consciousness. Then she recalled how the previous night had ended.

She had just pulled up outside her house after a long night of work at Planet Fitness, and she had wondered at the dark van parked next door, but hadn't paid it enough attention. Had she been more cautious, perhaps she wouldn't have been caught off guard when a shadowy figure cloaked in black appeared from behind a bush and shoved a rag in her face. She had tried to struggle, but her attacker had been twice her size, and the element of surprise had yielded the advantage. Her body was enveloped by powerful arms, she couldn't get an angle to free herself, and the fumes from the rag had quickly put her to sleep.

Horror dawned as the peacefulness of sleep faded and Julie realized whatever was in store would not be pleasant. A man stood before her, stocky and tall, and in his hands he held the bucket with which he had just doused her. The water was freezing, and the temperature in the room was far below comfortable.

"Ah, you're awake, good. Now we can begin."

"Yeah, I'm awake, I'm soaking wet and freezing. What the fuck?"

"Yes, you do look cold." Julie realized she was shivering, although whether it was from fear or frost she could not be sure. The man reached out and flicked one of her nipples, which were hard as bullets. "I have the air in this room set to thirty degrees."

Julie was now noticing her surroundings for the first time. The room was more like a cell, with a low ceiling and steel walls on all sides. A reinforced steel door was bolted shut on the far side, and to her left was a stainless steel table with an array of pernicious devices spread out on top of it. Below her was a drain, and there were a few curious contraptions scattered here and there, whose functions Julie could only guess. She had a bad feeling she would learn what some of them do soon enough.

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Do you have more stories somewhere, bloodlust?
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No.5570 [Report]
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I'll post something new shortly. It's not exactly new, it's partly an old story, but I recently rewrote a lot of it.
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Great story!
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This story is awesome! Hope we get similar stuff!
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still my favorite story :3
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Hey! I'm back or whatever... lets get back into it :D


This is a new girl I just doodled up a couple days ago, doesn't have a name yet but I plan for her to be an opposing commander against Ayda, the green haired girl you may remember from my old work.

Oh, in case something is to happen to Gurochan again, you can find my pixiv gallery here: http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=19959078
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>>15531
A CUTE
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I do take commissions every now n then. If you ever wanna see if I'm open or not, my email is [email protected]

I'll check in every couple days or so.

Just a couple nono-s off the top of my head would be scat, underage, internal organs.
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Poor Ayda, just a stain on the concrete now ;p
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https://discord.gg/vN37Hrq

A discord board for guro and snuff and things like that.

Your art is awesome and I think you'll enjoy it there ;)
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>>15613
Oh, wow. So many sub channels :o

ANYWAY! If anyone is interested in a commission or just chatting, hit me up here on discord: Neptune Estate #8814
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Christening the Lab



It was to be a great day, I knew it. My torture lab was fully completed and begging to be used. A true work of greatness; a wall-full of tools, a restraint system for multiple victims, and some other cleverly engineered agents of torture. It was completely 21st century, down to the "science lab" smell.

And of course, some victims for celebration. I had wasted no time making a Tinder account and cleaning up nicely, so as to attract only the most beautiful of women. A "test" date with each proved they had great personalities, too. And now I had them all to myself!

"Good morning ladies!" I said gleefully as I entered the lab, turning on the main lights.

They didn't look happy as they looked up, just realizing they hadn't been alone. Their bad feelings had just been confirmed as they looked around at the horror that was my lab, not to mention being bound and nude.

"I must say, it's an honor being here with you. I'm not self-conscious, but wow! You fine ladies really found me worth the time of day!"

"What the hell IS this?? What the fuck do you want?!" One of them shouted.

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That's gotta be the best compliment I've received so far, haha! Thanks guys, I expect to be uploading more in the near future (said every writer EVER) because these stories are a form of indulgence for myself as well. Glad to see I have at least a few readers :)
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Love it! Really like how the girls were first mutilated before being disposed of!
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As much as this was in line with my fetishes, I just couldn't get off to this. It's supremely well written and fun to read but...

Normally I get myself wet by putting myself into the place of the victim and imagining thee torment being done to me instead of them but I think this one was too well done. The torture was too much for even me to enjoy; please write more like it. This was an absolute treat to read.
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Thanks for bumps guys, I'm glad to see people appreciate this story!

No guarantee I'll be writing more but I'll be staying active on the forum!
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HOLLYHELL after patched and modify my phone's system I finally made this step◐u◐ I'm really about cring for POST things actually in THIS board,, If someone had the same problem as I had,I'd like to share my own solution with U!
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Thank u for advising.
The purpose why I save the missing files is that I wanted to post them all at a time,insead of one by one like before.I thought it could be slightly surprising if gurochaneeses see me upload pile of pics when wake up ◐u◐
Actually I have a cloud disk account already,but I just forgot it till I saw your comment.
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Well I don't know if you'll make more gas masked girls but I would love to see more girls in masks getting killed.
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Accidentally found my shiets did during my primary school time.
What an intelligent Kid I was ohhh
BTW the cn letters below the corner of the paper are my name,just ignore them
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https://discordapp.com/invite/RtDKcgG

You sir or mam artist are awesome and invited to join a Discord board for guro and snuff and things like that.

It is fast growing and contains many artists and fans.

And YOU are invited!
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I've been letting this down lately... But i had swear to write a story for every grimm fairy tale! This one was more than just well suited for it! I never read a fairy tale with this many vore and dolcett elements like in "brother and sister" :police: //www.grimmstories.com/en/grimm_fairy-tales/the_brother_and_sister . Well i also look forward for Rapunzel;)


Like alwals: The prey is a little bit older as in the original!

011 The Sister and the other Sister.
(You really believe you will see boy meat just because in the fairy tale it’s brother and sister? You are naive!)

The big sister takes her younger sisters hand and said. “We have to run away! Our stepmother beats us every day. She feed us with hart bread and water… even the dog get better food! If our mother knows… We can’t stay! There is a whole world open for us.” The two red heads looked lovely even in the poor garb they had to wear. So, they went out into the big world. It’s not easy to find a new home. The had to walk Barefoot and in torn clothes. But they even endured rain and cold. Because they only had each other. After a very long day, they climb a tree and slept immediately. This difficult their journey was!

The next morning… After the long last day, naturally the sisters got hungry and thirsty. The older sister was braver but not as clever as her younger sister. Still, she always looked after her little sister. That’s why she is determined to found a brook. She wanted to protect her sister, on any way possible. But they not had known, her stepmother was an evil witch! (one of the kind, that doesn’t eat girls! The very evil kind!) She cursed every brook in the woods.

The big Sister fast found a nice brook with clean water. But the little sister heard. "Her a snake will be who drinks of me, who drinks of me a snake will be!" (Yes, the water could rhyme.)

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DeviantArt: http://cuteandhurting.deviantart.com/gallery/60162034/Turning-to-Stone-Random-Petrification-Stori

HentaiFoundry: http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/CuteAndHurting/21698/Turning-to-Stone-Random-Petrification-Stories

Renamed of Turning to Stone, Random Petrification Stories, so be more generic.

Bunch of stories. Girls getting turned to stone, sex toys, furniture, food... out of system of other stories. Usually results in a bad way to live forever.

Magic Exists and It Can Be Petrifying



Everybody loves magic tricks. Young and old, boys and girls. There was a summer magic event at a Japanese town, where little Amy, or Eimi, had fun watching various magicians doing magic tricks. Unfortunately, she had to be back home until 5 PM, because her parents were worried about her 12 year old daughter. 'This is such a bother...' She thought at 3 PM as she was walking home, which was in another, smaller town. Her parents didn't know she would go to that magic show. She lied about that because they'd never let her go otherwise. 'My friends said they would be there...' But it turned out that they didn’t lie to their parents, so they weren't allowed to go. 'But it was so much fun! There were so many magicians!'

As she was walking through a suburb, nobody was there. They were either in town, or at work, or home having lunch or afternoon nap. But then she stumbled across a girl her age who was happily heading towards the town.

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WARNING: No sexual content.

Vacuum Fairy



Vaky is a fairy. She likes to clean people’s homes when they aren’t at home. Many homes have lately been cleaned mysteriously, nobody knowing there’s a good fairy with good intentions doing that to them. Even witches and wizards didn’t know that little Vaky existed!

Vaky would always carry her little vacuum cleaner with her.

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“Nina!” Yelled Ana with tears in her eyes. Ana was a 12 year old Bosnian blondie from Sarajevo. She was running away from someone.
“Ana!” Said Nina. Nina was a chin-length brunette and Ana’s classmate.
“Nina, please help me!”

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Watching Filthy Frank, I got an inspiration.

It's just a prank, sis



In magic high schools, including our Academy of Magic of Japan, students are encouraged to do any type of magic to each other. Naturally, there are even pranksters who do magical pranks to people, bringing them discomfort, pain, death or even long term or eternal imprisonment (turning to stone and similar). And then they put it up on their social media for laughs. Why do wizards to bad magic things? Because magic is highly addicting and so is being mean. Just like most of you are good people who eat animal products, wizards are good people who sometimes do bad magic things to others.

Main reason for the encouragement to do bad magic to each other is to motivate magic students to learn protection against magic. After all, “normal” people don’t believe in magic, most of them can’t even do it, and worst yet, they are completely helpless against enormous powers of magic.

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A famous YT prankster called Saito has brown spiky hair and does magical pranks. He is mostly known as a magician, and some even say his victims are actually actors. But what do YT people even know? In reality, he really does magic pranks.

It was a rainy spring day in a suburb that was mainly inhabited by magic highschoolers. It was basically a high school dorm, but with houses and apartments instead.

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Do you think you can do a story where a guy gets petrified and feels like he's cumming forever?
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I honestly don't know. I don't have any inspiration on that.
BUT I do have an idea on having those 2 pranksters prank a femboi or a trap into gettin petrified while sucking their dick. I might write that one.
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Petrifying Dental Surgery



Our story starts with several middle schoolers, of a witches and wizards girls’ school, waiting in the dentist waiting room, accompanied by a teacher. A week ago the whole class had to have a dentist check, and 4 of them turned out to have bad teeth. One of them was an anxious cute brunette Nadoka. She was scared of dentists… though they all were. But she was even more scared, so she decided to go last, even though that should have only prolonged her misery.

Of course, she was scared of dentists because she had had a tooth that needed fixing just a year ago. She would still remember the sound, the smell, the taste, the moments of pain… She didn’t want to go through that again.

Worse yet, this clinic had very special ways of calming people. If you would twitch or make a sound, the dental chair would quickly turn you to a stone statue. It’s simple sealing, and just as we described in earlier magical stories – it’s irreversible. Soul, thanks to its special physics, binds to the smallest particles of the statue material. So no one can unbind it anymore, not even by breaking or changing the material.

And when her first classmate went in, she would once again be reminded of the sound cruelly awaiting for her. But there was no screaming, or any type of speaking at all. When she was done, she came out being… normal. Same happened with the second classmate. They both told Nadoka it’s only a little painful, and that there’s nothing to be afraid of. Though it was easy for them to say – they were already finished.

“You see, Nadoka-chan?” Said her friend Nakano quietly to her. “It doesn’t hurt. It will be OK!”

Then Nakano had to go inside. She didn’t make any sound either, and came out as normal as ever.

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I was in the town square when they arrived. They were silent at first, almost ashamed at the situation, but soon more people started to arrive and the noise grew slowly.

A man was pushing a little girl forwards as she cried desperately. She was naked and pretty beat up. There was a trail of blood between her legs and one of her eyes was closed. Her nose was bleeding and it looked crooked. When she stumbled to the ground, the man kicked her in the ribs before lifting her from the ground by her hair.

As she rose, she tried to scream but it was somehow muffled or broken. I guess her jaw was broken.

At 15 years old, her body hadn't had much time to mature, but she was still very pretty. Dark skinned, slim and tall for her age, with long dark hair and green eyes. The girls around here were always gorgeous, a pity that they turned into hags as they grew older…

When they arrived to the center of the square, the man led the girl to a big tree. She was trembling as they stood there while more people arrived every minute. It wasn't long before a wall of people formed around them.

And of course, there was not a single woman in sight, except for the girl.

After a few minutes, the mob parted and three old men walked forward. They stood to one side, looking at the man with solemn faces. The man took one of her arms and raising it into the air, he addressed the people around them.

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Nicely told. Thanks for posting it.
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Justice been done!
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As it should be.
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There used to be a massive Final Fantasy story here on Gurochan, looked to be an arena-based one. It's dropped off now.

I think the title was Final Fantasy Arena.

Anyone have it saved anywhere?
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The FFXIII Tournament



Serah and Lightning were sitting in Lightning's house. The two had a bit of a reunion after the time Serah spent at the arena, and now were just sitting in her bedroom. They were both naked, but they didn't really have sex yet, as Lightning seemed more reluctant than usual, but they masturbated a lot to the stories she told. Serah didn't try to push, but after just a couple of hours she realized she needed to get on with her job. Just getting the crystal didn't seem right for her, as Lightning finally seemed peaceful now. Apparently all the things that happened changed her, and Serah suspected she won't be willing to go back to the Arena one more time.

"Light, there's something I need to ask you. As you know, I was busy running the arena one last time, but one thing remained. We agreed we had to choose one girl from each of those worlds, and after we're done they are gonna fight each other soon. We also gather all the crystals, as we decided we are going to need their energy. So, I have to ask: Do you want to come back to the arena?"

Lightning looked at her, surprised by the question. She actually wanted to stay here, to keep it just a memory, but she knew it was necessary. People coming back from the dead weren't something that was supposed to happen, and from what Serah said it was happening everywhere, not just because of the crystal magic. Yes, it needed to be stopped. Just as she was opening her mouth to reply, another thing hit her - one of those eight girls was going to become the new Goddess, and she didn't want it.

"Sorry Sis, but I have to refuse. Even though I want to feel the thrill of fighting again, and the pleasure of killing as the victim is being raped, but there's no way I'm gonna agree to a chance of becoming the Goddess. You can take the crystal, but I'm gonna stay here." As she was saying that, she got the crystal from some shelf and handed it to her. Serah looked at her with disbelief, but it was soon replaced by the familiar arousal. She sighed, and then spoke again.

"I didn't want it to come to this, or maybe I secretly hoped for it to happen? I have to bring all four of us to the arena, and since you don't want to come..." Serah jumped at her sister, calling her weapon on the fly. She slammed into her, pushing her down on bed, and cut with the sword at her neck.

Lightning felt a familiar pang of pleasure and pain as her head was cut off, and as her world was going black she could see her sister masturbating again...

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The Final Tournament - Day 1



A few days passed since the fight between Fang and Serah. Serah, Yuna and Terra all agreed to take a few days off, knowing it might as well be their real last few days living. After they’ve all had their free time, they came again back to the arena. Yuna brought Tidus with her, knowing her lover was going to enjoy watching her fight, no matter the outcome. Serah didn’t get Snow there to watch, as she wasn’t going to fight, only oversee and control that everything happens correctly. Terra also didn’t bother bringing Locke with her, as she just considered him a toy she just used for pleasure and didn’t care about him otherwise.

The girls were arriving one by one, as they’d told them to. Rydia arrived with her ninja husband, Edge, who had already been there with her the last time. Lenna arrived alone, and they all noticed she was really apathetic. Rinoa arrived with Squall, and as he looked at the other girls there he actually hoped Rinoa asked him to help her kill one of them again. Garnet came alone, as she didn’t want her husband to get involved in it. Penelo arrived alone too, much for the same reason as Garnet did. Finally, Fang arrived alone as she didn’t have anyone she could take with herself.

When they all gathered, Serah spoke up:

„Okay girls, here’s what’s gonna happen now: we fight in usual battles, but if you die we will just send you back to your world. The girl that wins is getting a really special prize, one we can’t tell you about yet. Let’s start the fights now.”

„For the first fight, Garnet and Terra are going to fight. The weapons are a rod for Garnet and a sword for Terra. Prepare yourselves!”

Both Terra and Garnet suddenly were transported to the arena, looking at each other. Garnet was a bit afraid, fully aware her fighting skills aren’t good enough to let her win in a normal battle.

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Loose Ends



Lenna opened her eyes and looked around. She was in her bed back at her castle. This place seemed emptied than usual… Then she remembered. She killed her sister, and she wasn’t going to come back this time.

She tried to get up, but the feeling of loss overwhelmed her, and she fell back between the sheets. Then she realized – no one knew she was here! If she sneaked out now, everyone would still think she’s still on the search for Faris she used as an excuse when she went to the Arena. Sneak out, and never return – that seemed like a good plan to her.

She slid out of bed, not caring that she was naked, then soundlessly moved through the castle’s secret passages, going through her home for the last time. Finally, she jumped out through a secret entrance, landing on one of the fields that surrounded her castle.

“What do I do now?” Lenna wondered. “I can go to Bartz and tell him what happened, he will surely help me decide what to do.”

The idea sounded pretty reasonable to her, and she quickly searched for him with some magical spells, transporting herself to him. The first thing she felt was heat – Bartz was currently exploring a volcano!

“Baaaaaartz!” She shouted, and she saw him turn around.

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The Final Tournament - Day 2



Penelo spent the night with Vaan, but even as she did, she couldn’t stop thinking about the girls she killed, the pleasure it was taking lives, watching the life slip away from the eyes of dying. She never felt it the way she did in the arena even though she killed quite a lot people by herself, so the arena must have triggered something in her. As soon as the night was over, she slipped out of bed, not bothering to get clothed, and went to the arena using a special spell she was taught.

When she got there, she saw the other girls were as eager as she was, waiting for fights to start. Both Yuna and Rydia seemed pretty happy after a night spent here, but Terra was nowhere to be seen. She ran to her spot she watched the fights from yesterday, then turned and looked at the portal just in time to see Terra coming out.

The green haired girl ran to her spot. When she reached it, Serah spoke to them.

“Let’s get it done, shall we? The first fight is going to be between Terra and Yuna. I know you girls have fought already twice, but you both killed each other once, so I’m giving you a chance to settle it once and for all.”

Both girls immediately moved to the arena. Yuna, as if remembering something, moved her hands to her braid and set it on fire, knowing it caused her death once. Her hair started burning, but she didn’t care, waiting for the fight to start with a sword with one hand and her guns in a holster on her hips.

Terra saw what Yuna was doing, and prepared herself. She transformed into the Esper Form, still holding the sword in one hand while her body changed.

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Things that are coming to this thread soon-ish:

The rewritten final chapter;
A series of short stories similar to >>8735 with FFXV characters;
Possibly something with Edea Lee and Magnolia Arch;
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My name used to be Aaron Morr, but now, I go by the name ‘Cutter’. My body, that was once human, has been completely replaced by a witches curse. I am now all metal, electronics and just the hint of organics that keeps my mind intact. Yet within this mangled mess of wires, screws, bolts and washers is the heart of a real monster. To feed a human heart you eat food, you take in nutrition, you pump blood. To feed a monster’s heart… well, a different kind of sustenance is required altogether. Tonight - I was very hungry.

Three floors up, around sixteen rooms including two living spaces, six bathrooms and eight bedrooms - the Alpha Sigma Phi’s sorority house stood at the edge of a university campus. The sorority was famous for taking in freshmen to bolster their ranks, and it was still true this year. Two first year college students, at the age of seventeen, took up residence at the house. Two upperclassmen at the ages of eighteen and nineteen watched over them. Most of the campus was - what it seemed - on vacation.

Everyone was enjoying some holiday, as surveillance by any sort of law enforcement was low. It was the perfect time to cause a little power outage.

I willed it. Inside me, I felt the gears turn, the soldering flare and the parts come together. After only a minute my right hand had transformed itself into a small array dish. Using my left hand I took my right by the wrist and gave it a quick turn. The device that used to be my right-hand unlatched and I gently put it down on near my feet.

I pointed a finger at the device and a deafening low frequency burst erupted from the EMP device and all the lights went off in the house. Their nearest neighbor was half a mile away, so even if they looked out the windows they couldn’t see if the rest of the area was lit up. Only their house and the lights outside flickered into darkness.

Quietly, I walked to the back door and my right stub of a hand turned into a small antenna. I inserted it through the keyhole and a high pitched beep erupted into the house. Instantly a map of the whole house was made for me, along with its occupants. Three males, and the four girls.

They were all in one of the living areas, all naked, probably having one of their damn orgies. Everyone was trying to get dressed as exclamations of the lights turning off and the beep alerted everyone. Further analytics caught some voices.

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Amy's quest for Sonic heart.

Sometimes Amy doubts, if Sonic really loves her… A stupid question! Sonic loves her! He is just a little bit shy with girls. But this doesn’t mean he is uncool! Sonic is the coolest person you can find on this planet, if not even in the universe! But still… Sometimes Amy doubts... After all, Amy tries everything to seduce Sonic. But every time he runs away. She trained to become stronger, cooler and more stylish. Sonic doesn’t care. She wears shorter and more sexy dresses. Sonic not registers. She even tries bondage. Sonic safe her, and this is cool… But, well… Sometimes Amy wish to get a little bit more intimate with her boyfriend and future groom. It looks a little bit like, as if Sonic not even is interested in her. But this can’t be true! Amy doesn’t give up. She will confront him! He will tell her, what he wants!



“Sonic!!!” Amy shouts as lovely, as she can.

“Oh Shit… Amy.” Sonic hasn’t see her coming. He tries to run, but it’s too late.

“Sonic! Don’t run away!” Pooh, he really is a shy hedgehog...


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My name is Aaron Morr, or at least it used to be. Countless years ago a rip opened in what is now known as the space-time-continuum. I was with my friends Jonas and Lars, and we were pulled into it.

We thought we died because we awoke in a paradise. It was not Earth, but all the common sense rules we knew applied to this new place. We drank fresh water always, all the fruit was completely ripe and always delicious and finally the world was populated by beautiful young women.

So what did we do? What any young men in such a paradise would. We ate everything, drank everything and fucked everyone. The women were absolutely amazing and they seemed to be defenseless and almost infinite. We fucked them whether they wanted to or not.

That was life - fucking the willing and raping the rest. They all ranged from as young as six to as old as twenty. At least, that’s what they seemed like. Life was the best - what could possibly go wrong?

Well, it turns out that world was owned by a trio of powerful witches. The witches came one day, captured us and to punish us for our, what had now been years, of transgressions against their women.

They casted spells on us and turned us into monsters. Helpless monsters. They turned Jonas into a vampire, they turned me into a robot and they turned Lars into a dog. They transformed us into their own personal kinks and for centuries forced us to be their sexual slaves. The witches raped us, and beat us, and treated us like complete tools. We deserved it. But we lost our minds and our will to live,

Centuries later a scientist found their way to the dimension and encountered us. Seeing us something to be pitied he returned our minds and gave us the power to steal the witches powers if we could eat a part of their anatomy.

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Eh... Kind of rushed and rather cringe-worthy.
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Agreed, but its a part of the story that I expect people to skip on.

I just kind of wanted to get it out of the way so we can get to the parts that matter.

I didn't need this to be good, I just need it to exist.
I'm spending much more time and effort on the upcoming parts. :)
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Don't be discouraged, I liked it!
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Don't be discouraged, I liked it!
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Hahaha no worries - I'm not discouraged at all.
I'm very excited that I've covered material that I don't want to talk about while I'm writing about the more "interesting" stuff.

I'll be writing Part 2 tomorrow as I continue working on my usual 3D stuff ;)
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