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Misty, May, Dawn, & Iris all go to a vore themed park and get nommed in various ways.

Been looking for this for awhile now but I can't seem to find it anywhere.
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"Poke vore Park" by unknown author

Misty, May, Dawn, and Iris plan to do some sight-seeing together on a tour of the islands south of the mainland for the first week of summer vacation. Several of the places there are almost uncharted, a perfect place for discovery and adventure. The four girls know each other through their shared time with one legendary Pokémon trainer, Ash Ketchum. The girls tried to get Ash and ever Brock to go with them, but each had other plans. Ash found an old trainer who also never evolves his Pokémon for some stupid reason. He left for that trainer’s home high in the northern mountains right when school ended. Brock found some scroll about rock Pokémon technics that he has been studying for the last few weeks. It must have been very important to turn down an invite from the girls.

All four girls end up finding a strange training flyer while staying on Shamouti Island. The resort there is nice, but the girls have already been there before and the crowd this year is huge. It also has little to offer if they wanted to train their Pokémon. The flyer is for a theme park that just opened up on an island south of the orange islands. The four girls never knew there was island south of that chain, save for Unova, which is south and mostly west. It sounds interesting, but the name did not make since, it must be in another language, or at least a word the girls did not know, something called “Vore”. The flyer promised a once in a lifetime experience for all girl trainers. Something else is odd though, it specifically states that no boys may come to the resort on the island. This made the girls even more interested. The front of the flyers show three beautiful tanned girls lying on a beach in very skimpy swimsuits laughing and sipping exotic fruit drinks. Behind them three Pokémon have their mouths opened wide as if growling or shouting maybe.

May thinks the flyer is for a special intense training for Pokémon while the girls can relax and catch some rays. Misty however is not so sure, by looks of it, to her at least, the Pokémon seem like they are about to do something like maybe shoot breath weapons. The three Pokémon shown cannot use breath attacks. Misty thinks it is a way to give Pokémon new abilities that most have never heard of. Dawn does not know what to think, but the beach on the flyer looks very nice and not crowded at all. The blue haired girl stares around at all the people on Shamouti Island and grumbles, “There are way too many people here this time of year. It’s almost like being at a public beach.” Iris fiddles with her hair a bit and looks at the rest of the girls who are staring at her. “What?” she asks, as if this did not really involve her. May asks her, “Well, what do you think Iris? Do you want to check it out?” The dark skinned trainer thinks for a second and smiles to the rest of the girls, “I think I’ve heard of this, but it is very adult, I don’t know if you girls could handle such a place.” Misty and Dawn look at each other as May makes a face, “What do you mean, we are all older now, we can handle whatever this island for girls can dish out.” Iris grins at her, “Well, I like this sort of things, but who knows if you girls do. It is what got me interested in dragon type Pokémon when I was a little girl.” Dawn questions her, “Well what is it… is it training?” Iris smiles and says, “No, it does feel good though, and if they have a park for it, then I think it would be interesting to see.” Dawn makes a face at her, “Why don’t you just tell us what it is?” Iris smiles back and laughs a little, “Dawn, you are such a kid.”

Although the other three have their doubts that Iris knows what the flyers is talking about, all four girls agree that this is probably a good place to check out, if nothing else than to taunt the boys due to the rules.

Later that day the get on board and set sail for Vore Island Theme Park on a ferryboat piloted by two middle-aged women. The older women do not say much, but they did have rules that the girls must not bring cameras or excessive amounts of luggage, mainly clothing. Dawn and May had to keep some of their stuff back in a locker on Shamouti Island. Misty and Iris always travel light and are very used to this kind of situation. As they go on towards the equator, the sun is hot and the girls decide to tan. Misty is busy watching the water and notes several water Pokémon that she enjoys observing. The girl has a pen and paper with her and she is taking notes, probably about the ecologies of free-ranged Pokémon in the sea.

The boat sails all throughout the night and in the morning; the girls find themselves at the shore of the island. It is tropical and there are few people around. The dock area has only a single woman operator who ties down their boat. The three older women talk to each other about the weather and other old people stuff. The four guests are in their swimsuits ready for fun. Dawn takes a lot longer to get ready for some reason and the other three are off the boat looking at the island map. They see the theme park is off in a remote area from the docks, but it does have a trail and a grounds service that can drive them to the park. After Dawn finally catches up to them they have already paid for the trip to the theme park.

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She laughs a little; this is what the four of them came here for, right? “Oh my, you are a beautiful Lapras! Look at your shell; it is of the darkest greens I have ever seen, and your belly, so white and pure, like freshly fallen snow.” All the praise hits the Lapras’ ego and it understand her admiration for it, many girls have willing fed themselves to him, and this little redhead tastes wonderful. The Lapras comes closer and licks his lips. “So, you like what you see, I take it… you really scared me though, I wasn’t ready for it at all.” The water Pokémon turns his head and makes a face at her explanation. It reaches out with it jaws open and snags the girl by her midsection. She looks up at it wondering what is next. Lapras sit Misty down on his shell and starts to swim over to the deeper end of the marina. There Misty sees finds other large water Pokémon all with full bellies. “So, are these your feeding grounds?” A pair of Quagsire lay on the shore with bulging bellies and their contents evident. A few Gyarados rest at the surface of the water obviously sated from large meals. Down below them Misty sees a noble looking Kyogre at the bottom of the pool resting. She cannot tell if it ate yet, but she guesses that a Kyogre would have several fans as it were. It could probably eat three or more girls like her. As the Pokémon gets closer to the deeper end of the marina it stops and looks over at a girl and Pokémon making a scene. A large Kingler is busy eating a small brown-haired girl with silky white skin feet first using its large claw to guide her inside him deeper. The little girl cries out, “Oh God, I ate crab just yesterday, now I am paying the price… this is karma…” The crab’s mouth feelers rub against her middle and she collapses as the crab pushes more on her head. The crab is taking its time with her middle, giving her a full course of orgasms, making her body spasm for a minute as she cannot do anything but ride out her sexual experience. After slumping inside his mouth, she pleads, “Yes… yes… eat me… avenge all the crabs I eat… I deserve no less…” Forcefully, the large crab pushes her all the way inside his mouth. Its strange feelers clean its mouth with rhythmic motions clearing all the saliva away. The crab moves over to a nice dry area to enjoy the feelings of the girl struggling inside his food sack. Several moans issues from within the crab’s body as the eaten girl feels the stomach organ treating her like food.

Misty looks up at the Lapras, “I wonder if my friends are having fun right now.” The Lapras looks at her and smiles. Misty giggles as the Lapras licks her from crotch to head. “Now, now, do I really taste that good?” Her question answers itself as the voracious Lapras gives Misty full licks over her chest and then a long one around her back that snakes to her ass and between her legs rubbing against her love. The water trainer sighs, “I never knew Pokémon could be trained in this way, it seems so naughty.” Lapras goes back to tasting his next meal. His big pink gentle tongue wraps Misty in drool. She feels completely sexual right now and understands why this place is so popular. “One hundred girls today all ending up in Pokémon bellies, this is so strange, I didn’t even know this world of vore existed until today.” Misty falls on her ass as the tongue wraps around her feet. She is sitting on the large Pokémon’s shelled back. She looks up at him with sad eyes, “You are getting too excited! I know you want to eat me, but can’t we take this slowly?” The Pokémon answers by pulling her feet into its mouth. She swoons at his hungry advances. She turns this way and that and feels good everywhere she moves. She sees that she is now half inside and awaits more. Her hands rest on the Lapras’ nose and she looks deep into his eyes, “I wonder if I could be your trainer…” The Lapras suckles her body, her pussy responds to the stimulation easily, and she has several light orgasms in a row that are a part of one long stream of pleasure. “If I was your trainer, you could swallow me every day.” Her very long stream of pleasure slowly subsides. The water Pokémon sucks more on her glistening form. Misty’s natural sleek body combined with its saliva allows it to slurp her up easily and into its mouth in one swift motion. The Lapras’ jaws close down on her and she feels wetness all around her. He is still suckling at her body and she can feel it move. “Am I tasty? Because I…” The tongue comes across her breasts again and she smiles. Great waves of pleasure flow over her entire body. She rubs her pussy lips and feels her clit is raw and still wanting more. At this point, she actually does not care what Lapras does to her, she just loves being inside him like this. Her mind is hazy and her lust is at a high point. “If you want to… if you need to… you can take me… I can nourish you for a long time… with my body…” Her words are light and submissive. Misty does not seem to care about the terminal things she is thinking. It just feels so natural and right it is almost scary. She should be Lapras’ food. Lapras should keep her down the entire night and the staff at the park should let nature take its course. “Are we girls supposed to be your normal food?” Her body shutters as the Pokémon rubs his tongue across her pussy lips.

After accepting her feelings, she feels the flesh all around her push on her body. Another gulp follows more still, until she slides, on her back down the organic waterslide into the digestive sack of the water Pokémon. The feeling of her body used like food makes her tingle. It feels so right. In the dark confines, she feels around. It is only her there in his belly, but there could probably be one more. The stomach is about a meter wide and half a meter high. She lays a fetal position. Misty smiles and asks, “I wonder how many girls have you invited down here and how many you’ve kept…” The water trainer muses about it, but at the same time now that it is over she wonders just how safe she and the other girls really are, they are in the stomachs of living predators. Lapras settles down for a nap. The stomach starts working on Misty. Lapras’ belly gurgles, turns her around, and shrinks a bit. “I really am your dinner tonight, aren’t I? Is this really a one way trip?” Misty’s body pushes this way and that, but no stomach acids join her for this ride. The stomach continues the full body massage. “Is this why the announcer girl moaned so much on stage when Dragonite had her in his belly? Come to think of it, she is still inside it right now isn’t she? Not just her, but almost all the girls I saw today are deep inside a Pokémon’s stomach, waiting to be digested. Just like me… we are all just food…” Misty is hot and bothered by her words and still feels stimulated by the stomach muscles all around her pushing and pulling on her nude body. Her pussy feels the pleasure when her legs part and the stomach moves around her crotch and continues the massage. From outside Misty’s moans are almost inaudible. “This is so nice… I just want to stay down here forever… would you like that too Lapras?” She sighs at her words. “I eat food I like all the time; you should get to eat food you like too. I never have to spit out the food I like once I eat it… I hope all the Pokémon here don’t have to either…”

Meanwhile, May is having a lovely time strolling through the forested part of the zoo. The woods are extensive and have several Pokémon living in them. Many grass type Pokémon call this place home. “Iris is right, walking around in the wood naked is kind of fun.” The situation right now though, could be very scary. The fear of a predator while nude makes May feel excitement. She feels so vulnerable and that makes her hot.

On her walk, she saw several girls devoured by different types of Pokémon and sat by to watch a few that looked especially intense. All the girls seem to be in a state of ecstasy as they go down.

A monstrous Venusaur is munching on two girls at once. They must know each other because they are holding hands while they draw in deeper into the bowels of the powerful grass Pokémon. May watches them from behind a tree. He gets ready to finish them and unceremoniously swallows both girls at once. Done with his meal the Venusaur licks his lips with a very large tongue and nestles down for a nice nap. He starts to dig a little into the ground to hide his true nature. The floral on his back makes the predator look like part of the scenery. May decides to move in a little closer since the danger seems to be gone now because the sated Pokémon just ate. It does not seem to mind her coming closer. She gets up to its side, puts and ear up to its belly, and listens. May has read in Pokémon ecology books that Venusaur have large grapplers in their throat that can latch onto food when need be, but if that were true then it would be like having two extra tongues that would… her thoughts are cut short as she hears moans coming from inside the large dinosaur. The girl feels shaky, but at the same time, she cannot stop listening. It sounds like there is a lot going on inside the Venusaur’s belly. She feels some pushing against her and jumps back. “Wow, this is some pretty crazy stuff,” she explains to the Venusaur, who may or may not be listening. “I wonder if any of you Pokémon actually want to digest the girls you eat. That would be scary.” The Venusaur notices his visitor and yawns at her with an open mouth. “I cannot even tell that you ate those two girls,” May explains.

Visions of how Dragonite made her feel in front of those onlookers on the stage flash through her head. She becomes agitated and states to herself, “This cannot be right, I mean Pokémon are supposed to be used by children and we are supposed to battle and see who the best one is.” The trainer thinks about this, “Why do we need to prove ourselves by training monsters to fight against each other anyway? I mean we encourage children to do this, but why?” May is almost having an epiphany about her very existence when she hears a twig break off in the distance that makes her duck down behind the Venusaur. She looks around nervously, “I wonder what the other girls are doing right now…”

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Is there a sequel to this or a site I can download it, also do have others like this, thank you for any reply you choose and thank you for posting this
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>>8886
Sommm

Gore & Death
I noticed a couple pictures in another thread that seemed to me to be inspired by a story online. The suggestion there was to post the pictures and the stories together.

The first two are from GUROchan's own Htabdoolb.

https://www.gurochan.cx/lit/res/9773.html
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>>82397
I should also say, the artist who liked the story was throughmyshadow, for the first two pictures.

https://www.gurochan.cx/lit/res/7744.html
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>>82398
Finally, this story is from Inkquill, and I don't know where I can find this author. I liked this story, and commissioned Sorenutz to draw a picture for it.

http://jayseballbustingstories.blogspot.com/2015/02/octopussy-original-version.html
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>>82399
Alternate version, without the labcoat.

If anyone knows of other dick or ball destruction stories that ended up getting artwork done, please post them here :)
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I guess this is an acceptable solution…
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Gore & Death
Lets get our favorite girls into skullfucking, necksnaps ,snuff and the such.
Would like to see kushina and nami!!
Lets also try to keep out scat please
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>>61608
Courtesy of DepravityRepository
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>>82279
Part 2 with the actual guro
Original description imply they got executed for helping Sasuke :-)
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>>62724
Finally found back the full version.I knew it existed somewhere !
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some old pixel art i drew a while back on another site of Sadara from Boruto (naruto spinoff) but it didnt belong there because it wasn't for that type of crowd so im posting some of my pixel art here in order to get me interested in pixel animations again. my first post btw

Literature
It hath been six hundred and sixty-six years since the 'Great Scouring', when the gates to hell were opened by man unhumbled and thus through unbridled arrogance brought forth ruin to the great civilizations that dotted Old Earth. The war was great and terrible, ending when the Great Red Dragon, leader of the infernal hosts named Satan realized the folly of his inhuman crusade and proceeded to commit suicide over the Temple Mount in Jerusalem, leaving his daemonic armies scattered and leaderless which made possible mankind's eventual triumph.

Since then, mankind's progress and knowledge had reset to zero. Though most of daemonkind had been wiped out, they had in death cursed their slayers with a multitude of foul and so far, unbreakable afflictions.

There was the 'Curse of Mammon', which lead to traditional energy sources such as oil and coal being too inefficient to use in an economic scale. There was the 'Curse of Asmodai' which was a great magical barrier called the 'Firmament' that prevented man from leaving their own atmosphere. Even heaven, the afterlife, was barred from entry due to a curse from great Satan himself who decreed that if he could not return to heaven then mankind would join him in exile and languish in earth after death.

Thus, mankind was forced to mine the layers of a now empty hell for a resource called Infernium, which powered everything from simple machinery to the most complex of spells. The souls of dead humanity now either roamed the Earth if they had been good or coalesced into Infernium if they had been evil.

The many nations of the Earth sundered, broke apart and formed into new forms of government. I myself lived in the great island kingdom of Albion, which had been known as 'Great Britain' in the ancient texts. It was a land ruled by a powerful council of magisters, the 'Red Wizards', I was endeavoring to join the ranks of these wise men by planning to apprentice myself to Lord 'Maximus Waxley', whose house I was currently standing outside of.

“Oh young Lord Mercer, please do come in”, I did not even get a chance to knock on the door when it opened, a handsome middle aged man with an aquiline nose and greying blond hair greeted me, wearing a bespoke vest and trousers.

“Oh Master Waxley, I do hope I’m not intruding at a terrible time.” I was apologetic, our original meeting was scheduled to happen in the morn, but mother’s favorite slave had escaped and I had to help her before the runaway found a way off the island.

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Impressive, Well written, great descriptions!
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this is amazing. great back story and world building. wish the other displays could have gotten their own scenes but not too bad overall. hope you write more stories like this. good necro is surprisingly difficult to find even here.

Gore & Death
Spoiler alert
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>>95659
I like rebecca but i sympathize with dead women more.
I dont know it's just she's more lovable when she's dead
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Requests
Does anyone have the uncensored work of Garikaliev called this?
[https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/85677838]

Discussion
A sudden new fantasy…

I’d like to put a man into some comfortable bondage, blindfold, etc

Once he’s been stuck waiting for a bit, put his soft cock into my mouth, suck him as he gets hard and tease his balls too.

So far so good, pretty normal stuff right?

Once he’s hard, instead of sucking him off as expected, I would just start chewing on his cock. Not too rough at first necessarily, but determinedly. Just keep chewing on his cock more and more, becoming more insistent, until after a while, I would eventually chew it off completely. Then I would sit on his face until he’s dead.

Sounds fun doesn’t it ^_^
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It does sound like a dream to me.
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well I am not so much into pain or losing my dick but i admire when woman is willing to take initiative rather than waiting until someone will do something to her :)
And if it is just a fantasy no reason to refuse :)
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not a want, A NEEEEDDDDDD

Freakshow
futa girls, swapped their head with big cock. ecit welcomed
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Requests
Looking for the name of the artist and the set pack
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e-hentai.org *gerd1000*
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Thanx

Requests
Found in manga thread but no source
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>>16110
Reincarnation Colosseum Chapter 9

Requests
Okay
there are 2 doujinshis I'm looking for

First
A female Biology teacher showes the human anatomy to her students by cutting herself open. (rough discrition) Title was something with "3rd Grade Biology class" or near that.

Second
A unpopular female student is forced by the teacher to be a bisection subject. Somthing like Unpopular Student" or something.

Maybe I remember some details of both Storys but it's a minute since I saw them around. (Bearbeitet)
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I've seen a biology manga on pixiv, but I think the artist wiped a good part of their gallery…

The artist name might help you though: They used the pseudo "e50gun"
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I've been looking for a doujin for a while, where a woman controlling tentacles kills their rape victims violently if they cum. Anyone know it?

Requests
Two maho shoujo girls (magic girls) are fighting, both have these huge flat blade light sabers.

One is doing the edgy quiet victory pose, while the other has half her torso melted and her organs exposed.

It was super detailed and I need it for reference.

Like, the hearts artery was pumping blood into the air and her face was all flabbergasted.

It wasn't exactly gruesome, but her torso was melted to the bone and her organs were exposed. It was more so shock value and macabre than bloody horror.

They were displayed neatly, like they were anatomically correct in their presentation.

Discussion
Can we have, like, a separate board for AI stuff? I don't want to see it. Nobody actually imagined that, nobody told that story, it's just words put together in a likely order / images mixed together to look arguably coherent. I respect that some people like it or don't mind, so let them have a board!
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>>15606
personally, i get off to ideas, not images, so as long as the image conveys something interesting and unique, i don't care. that isn't the reason i am ok with ai art, though. the reason is because, as someone who enjoys guro from both an artistic and fetishistic perspective, certain ai-generated images remind me of the classic ero-guro nansensu art such as pic related. uniquely for us gurofags, an image being grotesque and confusing only adds to the charm. if you hate it so much, stop paying so much attention to it.
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>>15607
It might improve but it won't get better until it's clearly separated and isn't pretending to be something it isn't. Think of a guy with an early photocamera bragging that he painted this: no you fucking didnt buddy
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Like imagine if blown up photographs were mixed in with actual oil paintings in a museum or whatever. Oh what technical skill, strange composition though, is this a new artistic movement? THere must be meaning in every small detail in the background! Oh wait it's a fucking photo nevermind that
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>>15628
Real easy solution to this: separate it into a separate board where people post /AI/ art and develop the art of using AI to make interesting shit. It could be cool af! Just don't mix it in with people who are making their first humble forays into mspaint (1000x more effort than your average AI "art maker")
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>>15631
containment is absolutely a good option, i just wonder whether or not it's worth creating an entirely separate board over. if that's easier than having them mixed, then so be it.

Requests
Searching for a particular comic/story, with McGonnagall magically removing Hermione's genitals. I know I've seen it here somewhere, but I'm failing to find it. Thanks.
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The story was created by the artist mad.aye; who is a paywall artist. The images are floating around on the net in various places.

Requests
Im looking for a picture: a female mage stepped into a trap resulted in a spear came from bottom and impaled her trough the pussy and ripped out her uterus through the lower body. To see her uterus speared and dangling directly in front of her gave her a surprised and some kind of frightened face.

can someone help?
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bump
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here you go
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>>16084

Thanks a lot :)

Do you also know the artist?
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Artist name: Fan No Hitori
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Thank you

Literature
Within the halls of a collapsing chasm. the sounds of rubble falling from the ceiling above echoed through the dark pathways, being mixed with the desperate panting of a woman running for her very life. She listened to the sounds that echoed throughout the corridor, hoping to use the reactions that the environment gave back to her ears as directions, but her speedy advance took priority over everything, her survivability above all else.

“…I have to hurry! I can’t die in a place like this!” The woman heaved in a frantic motion, continuing to run about at a steady pace.

The ceiling continued to fall, the rubble hitting the floor and continuing to fill the woman with dreadful thoughts as it continued to block potential exits for her to get out of. Whether it be sheer karma for something she did, the place was not getting along with her and was not providing any way for her to get out. Despite this, she paid no attention to the dark grey walls that surrounded her, which consisted of a brick like material that dimmed with a gloomy coloration due to the dying torches and falling of dust filling her vision.

The floor, while having an appealing design to it, was ignored as the rubble crushed and cracked its intricate detailing as the woman passed trying to avoid her gruesome fate. So far, she seemed to be doing alright, as there was a great amount of space between the walls to her right and left despite the ceiling continuing to fall down towards her.
Eventually, after running about for a few more minutes, she eyed something on ahead, noticing a large opening in the distance. With what energy she had left, she made a mad dash towards the opening.

Once she was a few paces away from the entranceway, she dived forward with all her might into the room; tumbling on the floor until she laid flat on her back. Though her body was kicked up with dirt and grim, she survived, much to her relief.

After taking a few heavy breaths of air and coughing whatever soot filled her lungs out from her mouth, she rose up onto her hands and knees; shaking her head back and froth form the experience.


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Artwork
Hi! I love drawing snuff, and I'll upload new snuff to this thread! I'll keep uploading as long as people keep commenting.

I do a lot of furries right now, but I hope to do more humans. I hope you guys can be inspiration for me to do that. Lemme know what you think of my stuff!
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>>29815
A present then, you posted this and I colored it for you.
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>>30365
Oh! Well im flattered, dont ya know? Hope you had fun!
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>>30374
No problem. I am trying to improve my skills in Fire Alpaca
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>>35122
So cute
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>>35135
Any chance to see hangings one day?

Literature
Here's my first ever story on GuroChan. It's about a snuff war between TikTok influencers and established Hollywood actresses. Hope you all enjoy!
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Very nice story, looking forward to the agent working his way down the target list…and the potential retaliation missions :D.
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>>24336
Second Kill: Charly Jordan

Tags: Snuff, Rape, Non-con, Necro, Shooting, Stabbing


Location: Just outside of Los Angeles
Time: 23:59:55


The Agent walked into the room, and noticed the black duffel bag in his seat. A newscast played on the screen and he nodded at Ana as she acknowledged his presence.

The whole Tik Tok community is in shock after star Dixie D’Amelio was found strangled and raped in her home in Los Angeles. Her friend and fellow Tik Tok influencer Avani was also found deceased in the home. The police are investigating but have no suspects at the moment for this heinous crime. Reports are trickling through that Dixie was raped before her murder. If you have seen something, please say something. Check back in for more news…

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Very promising story.

If i can do a bit of light criticism, I'm a bit puzzled by the "display body in public" went out of the window immediately after the contract.
Especially as I think it might have been fun. I guess the Twitch idea kinda plays towards that.

Another concern was about him having visibly no qualms about leaving his DNA basically everywhere.

Finally, I think you easily could spend more time describing the action and the feelings and thoughts of the characters before and as he's killing them. Right now it might be a bit too heavy on the setup and a bit too clinical as a result. I'd enjoy something more personal.

Other than these 3 criticisms, I really enjoy reading you and I look forward to more.
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>>24346
Thanks for the feedback! I definitely agree about the feelings of the characters as he's killing them. As for the DNA, it was kinda difficult to write a hyper-realistic representation of DNA evidence and whatnot. For this series I think I'm just gonna ignore it (I know it's not right, but I'm lazy).
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Could you do Liz Olsen next possibly??? This is awesome.

Gore & Death
Let's see those nasty, sexy vampires getting hunted and killed.
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I like the idea of this
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Requests
I really love this manga, but i heard that there is a novel written by an auto called Shi Yan. Is there anyway to get his work in English or any non Chinese language? has someone found it somewhere?
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this part is amazing, she's holding her womb and uterus while they fuck the hell out of her
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I found what I think it’s based on, here http://www.yiyexs.com/reader/31852/391700.html
Good luck being able to translate it decently

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