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NEW YORK PARTY GIRL

by Regis







I’ve got no idea how I got myself into what turned out to be this crazy, extraordinary, exciting lifestyle, but hey, I’ve got to tell you things weren’t always like this for me. The truth is, I’m quite a good girl, really. Everybody tells me that. I’m not a call girl, a prostitute or anything, like its important you know that the truth is I only fuck friends.



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I’m a good girl, and I always was, even my daddy told me that. He trained me in lots of special ways to be good with a man. He said if I ever told Mommy she wouldn’t think I was a good girl, but he told me I definitely was. That was good enough for me, because he always hugged me a lot and everything, a lot more than Mommy ever did.



Even when I was little he told me I was sexy and that I turned him on big time. Mommy had to go to work on weekends, and he’d take advantage to help me with my private sex training, as he called it. We started the training when I was like 7, so I had lots of experience before I went to college. He had a really big dick, and I was like 11 before I could take the whole thing all the way into me.



These guys who are my friends have big dicks too. They are doing really well at selling stocks, and they really love girls. They like the look of us, and are always putting clips on our cuntlips to hold them open, or to dangle little weights or tiny bells from them, that ring while we walk or are getting fucked, or will use rubber cement to glue our cuntlips wide open just to look at them.



It’s just that these guys really like to see a girl’s cunt, the most compelling thing about her, they say, and they like it to always look like its feeling horny. They even call us cunt, like they don’t know our name, and we let them do stuff to us because they always want to see our sex organ ready and open for business, and I guess its fair because they do the same kind of shit to all of us.

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One of the guys, or maybe the bar tender, cuts the cord, triple bags the sprog and it gets dropped right down the trash chute, end of story. The girl that drops it now gets to rejoin our group, and so it goes. Life goes on, but the sprog’s done, so she’s free to be a party girl again. I’ve dropped 3 since I joined my stockbroker friends just over four years ago, and it was scary but cool.



Anyway, we were 4 or 5 nights into one of these exciting ‘time of month’ ‘kill the fucking bunny’ games where we were all getting team-fucked when a couple of the guys came in and said the game was off, because they’d just found something way more exciting, and they needed as many of us as possible to take part.



They told us they’d met these really rich dudes who they found were throwing a terrific party, and they needed to have girls like us who liked to party, and who weren’t prudes, but who were just looking for a good time, girls who were really into satisfying the lust of their clits. I was in.



The guys told us these new guys they’d met were really rich, and what they said they needed was solid girls who weren’t afraid to show their goods, weren’t afraid of some fun rope games, were well built broads with a great set of tits, just like us, and we were told they were going to pay 4 grand to any girls they liked, girls who really wanted to participate, just for one night, and they would pay us in advance.

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Now something I thought was worst of all happened. The guys brought these 40 pound weights out, released the rope from one of out tits, and tied it to a weight, so that one tit was taking all our weight, and the other was being pulled severely down by a big fucking weight. The new weight was being supported by the one tit as well.



I hated these assholes. Even my friends at the sprog-dropping parties had never treated me this badly when I’d been ass-fucked while three different times, like on three different occasions, I’d been forced to pop my pups out. That was then, this was now. I sort of hated that, but really hated this. It was bullshit, and I couldn’t do anything about it.



The weight on one tit pulled on me so hard that my whole fucking torso twisted. With one tit being pulled up and the other down, I was being bent severely, and had to look really grotesque. All this was happening while I as cuming like a fucking pig, if a pig was able to cum, which is possible, I guess, and I was hanging like a fucking pig too.



In this new position I could see horizontally, because of the skew in my body. There was nothing I wanted to see. My neck was in almost as much pain as my tits because of the pull on my braid to my asshole anchor. The other eight cunts were in bad shape too, and all of us were drooling from the tight steel rod clamps on our tongues.

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No.13049 [Edit] [Report]
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Wow, that was great. Really loved the clit clamp.
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I've used a clit clamp before in stories, but not to this level. The earlier use was of one electrified, driven by a battery carried inside the vagina. It produced continual stimulation for two days, which is more continual orgasm than most women could endure. They died from a combination of high blood pressure and total exhaustion.
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No.7098 [Edit] [Report] AS
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Just discovered exhentai any good large insertion stuff thats not on regular ehentai some of it is rather difficult to find
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No.7100 [Edit] [Report]
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Exhentai only has loli stuff which is not available on public site
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there's a tag for it on exhentai, which is just "large insertions." there are loads of good large insertion works there.
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I like guro and I fap to it allot (probably too much) but when it comes to real life gore I dont feel anything.

NADA



Am I missing something?
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>>7069

We even don't need to go that deep. Things like people trying to put their intestines back inside, shot in the head teen prostitutes in favelas or stabbed to death ex-gfs in Korea are sad no matter of interpretation. And fapping to that is highly disrespectful ( but this is matter of one's emphaty).



Although I agree, you can ignore this sadness, or even enjoy it. I won't blame anyone for that, but it's wrong thing to do in my opinion.



>>7070

Well, I guess there are other great minds out there then;)
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Not only do I enjoy gore, but I especially enjoy the suffering associated with it. The gore itself is just the package it comes in. To me, the sadness of the context is part of what makes it great. It's part of the reason I'm not into post-death gore and I'm not into consensual torture. A butchered corpse of a girl is just a pile of meat, but a living, conscious girl in tears as she is mutilated slowly has some appeal. The things that must be running through her head, the raw emotion of the situation, the trauma and anguish, all are a part of it. Emotion is a drug at the end of the day, good or bad.



Fortunately, I'm also a reasonable and respectful person. I think it goes without saying on this board, but it's possible to enjoy imagining the unthinkable without endorsing or condoning it in real life. I would never wish these sorts of things on anyone in reality.
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Interesting. I'm not super into gore, but like you, >>7073, I'm way into the suffering, the physical, emotional, and psychological cruelty of the thing. Though unlike you I'm not into straight up non-consent. I like it to be consensual, semi-consensual, or just like, that's her place in the world and she just doesn't even think about having a choice, and its best if she doesn't enjoy it at all.



I think part of what makes it exciting in fantasy is how wrong you know it is in reality right? Like, in real life I'm a vegetarian because I don't even like the idea that animals die so I can eat, but in fantasy I will totally make that bitch prep her sister for the oven and fuck her in the ass while making her watch through the window.
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Nah ur not missing anything. I’m sure if you did it right you’d like it. Irl gore stuff online is mostly such shit

Tell me with a straight face you could slit someone’s throat and not be aroused, at the very least by the fact of what you’re doing
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Yeah it’s sad to think about maiming or death in the context of the irl consequences, and maybe you can’t help being turned off if ur empathy is high/normal enough

But personally the fetish more hinges around the mutilation, blood, guts and the control. Those things in isolation are hot, nothing sad about it
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Hello, I'm looking for an artist to draw me a short comic of a museum where beautiful women are stuffed, mounted, and displayed inside. Please email for information, to discuss prices, and to show me a sample of your work.
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This story's just for you Gurochan. I have some time at nights now to write. I hope you enjoy.



While you have the right and freedom to read this regardless of who you are:



This story isn't meant for anyone who can't separate fantasy from reality.

You should not use lust, rank, power, or order as an excuse to hurt others,

you also should not see malice directed at you or anyone you know, or any

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Given his habit of collecting/preserving fine armour/baubles, I suspect his first instinct will be to find some way to add the soft beauty to his collection. Perhaps he will attempt to delicately strip her other layers at first? Or find some other magical or enviromental way of "claiming" this gossamer beauty for himself? At the very least he should pin her like a butterfly so she can't flutter away.
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***Important note: I re-titled this thread by reposting it myself. This post marks the end of that reposting and is all new!



Thank you, with all of the threads with only 1 post, the original, or that have only the Original Poster reposting over and over again, it's nice to have even one comment, it's pretty inspiring. I hope you like this next chapter, I considered your advice and thought the story forward! I also quite meanly probably won't take all of it, I don't know if I can see Tiamel splaying her out like a butterfly. Though I'll make a reference to that recommendation if I get far enough. [I didn't get far enough this writing session, don't go waiting for it. But I still have the idea up in my head!]



I wasn't planning to make a second chapter in this thread, I guess I'll have to make a whole new thread simply called "LAIR." and start posting there. I had to go and make the title so limiting to myself. Oh well. [I did so. Hence the note at the top]



XXX LAIR

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Interesting. I admit, now things have taken this turn, I'm less interested in seeing lethal violence happen to Shaun or even Daylah. It will be interesting to see how their psychologies evolve, and how long they might be the dragon's prisoners...slaves..and perhaps eventual willing pawns. Will they come to depend on Tiamel? Will they help him strip other foolish adventurers of their armour? I am very intrigued to see where you take things next.
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Pretty interesting series of stories here! I like some good old fashioned fantasy fiction, especially with dragons so I wish you the best.



My personal tastes are in the other direction though, although I do enjoy dragons and violence I particularly pine to see some stories that make it a point to inflict some upon the dragons as well. It seems almost unusually uncommon for dragons to be on the receiving end of torture, as you'd think they would be perfect due to how much access a small human could have to their parts, especially the armorless genitals.



Will definitely be on board if your plans ever go in that direction.
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Mqio’te Massacre - PART 1

(Genital Mutilation, Snuff, Guro, Cannibalism, FFff 16/13/10/7)



The world of Final Fantasy 14 is owned by Squre Enix. I own no rights to the places and races mentioned in the story. This is entirely a work of fiction and fantasy, with absolutely no basis in reality. I do not condone any of the actions or viewpoints presented in this story. Please treat all women with the respect they deserve, they are our mothers, daughters, sisters, nieces, friends and peers.







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Damnit, of course, on my fourth read-through, after I posted, I see a few small grammatical errors here and there. That's the problem with writing this stuff - its hard to proof read because its so damn distracting to read in the first place!



If anyone wants another upload with the small changes, just chime in. Otherwise, I'll get started on Part 2 :)
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and yes, that above was me. For realz.
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No.13059 [Edit] [Report]
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very nice stuff. i would hope for a sequil showing what Kasaal finds... hopefully even younger prey for her.
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No.13068 [Edit] [Report]
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Yes indeed! I had meant Kasaal to be part 3, but no reason not to make her viewpoint part 2 instead. Glad you enjoyed part 1, please look forward to more soon!
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It was a doujin where on a side scene there was this girl practicing track and field, and had all these guys behind her, and when she was caught she was raped, and had to try again. Anyone know what it was?
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after i made the post i realized i misspelled particular wrong. haha
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So, just a quick question as to why threads on GuroChan don't use pages?

Especially in threads were images are posted, this is seriously annoying, as you have to wait for all the images to load before you can scroll down. (Well, you can try before, but the images will keep on pushing the bottom of the site down until they are all loaded).



So yeah, pages would make life here A LOT easier.

But maybe I'm just not seeing the amazing reason as to why they aren't used?
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>>6907

Code complexity is about all, I would expect. Pretty much no *chan type server uses anything like that other than at the section overview level, they're all extremely simple (though Enclaved would probably beg to differ given his rant about having to disentangle the original spaghetti code in order to fix it) PHP/MySQL type affairs.



SELECT FROM TABLE "artwork" WHERE $THREAD = "1429" and all that.



Heck it might even be a simpler filesystem based setup given how the "forum" and "thread" addresses are given... e.g. for this thread, gurochan.cx/dis/res/6907.html ... this is thread #6907, and it's in Discussion, so each new post regenerates the code of page file 6907.html under folder /dis/res on the gurochan server. Loading the page then requires nothing more than reading the html, and any images inlined to it (which are also stored in a big flat pile inside /dis/res, and found by searching their numerical filename). Doesn't even separate threads into their own folders... I mean, I'd expected this to be more index.html in /dis/res/6907, but that's evidently not the case (or at least, what we can see from the client side doesn't reflect that; it might be like that in reality with the server-side software doing some live translation between the apparent and actual filesystems).



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* s/regenerates page code/appends a new post section at the end of the page code (just above the footer)



Like, I doubt it would rewrite the entire page, that would get pretty heavy for the longer ones, and require some kind of separate database or at least creating a temporary single-thread one in the server memory. Much easier to just have each post on a thread marked out with some kind of comment tag (so they can be deleted in a fairly simple manner later on - just erase those particular tags and everything between them, plus any associated image file), and with each new one erase the (standardised) footer, then write in the post data and reappend the footer. The html files themselves become the in-place database, making for a considerable saving in terms of disc space and processing overhead.
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SELECT * FROM ThreadPosts WHERE threadId = "whatever" ORDER BY postDateTime LIMIT {postsPerPage*pageNumber}, {postsPerPage};



would work in MySQL.



And pages threads are useful for more than just load times - it helps you save your place. Instead of having to save something you can Ctrl-F to some file, you can just look up the last page of the thread in your browser history - or if you've set up your browser to re-open the last session's tabs, you're immediately back where you left off.
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And here's page functionality in JS: pastebin.com/J0rHXEVi



This could easily be made into a browser extension, but for now, do the following to get it working:



1. Append ?page=[n] to the end of a thread URL, where [n] is the page number starting at 1.

2. Reload the page to apply this change.

3. Open the developer tools by pressing F12.

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And here's a Chrome extension based on the code I posted earlier: chrome.google.com/webstore/detail/gc-pagination/hjchpmmpmlpobmihjoiafhofacfampmf
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Hello friends,



I'm new / not new here. Ive been lurking on and off since probably 08 or 09, but a while either way. I've posted a few comments here and there but never with a name attached. Since I'm putting my story out here I guess i should stack a name with it.



This is the second story that I have written and only the first that I have posted. I am by no means a writer, in fact grammar and spelling has been difficult for some reason. So this has been a slow going process.



All that said I am very much looking forward to feedback and suggestions. I have more written, but only this much edited to where I can stomach showing it to others.

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Always happy to see more non-lethal works. You say you're not a writer, but don't sell yourself short: that was a great first effort. The premise is original as well as interesting, and the whole thing is well-written. On the technical front there are some minor spelling and grammar issues here and there, but nothing that detracts from the story too much.



I'm certainly looking forward to reading more of your work. I don't suppose I could convince you to post your unpublished story as well?
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Yeah what JIP said. That was really, really excellent. I like the fact that you don't even attempt to explain why girls turning themselves into skeletons without any negative consequences is a thing. Trying to explain something like that is basically impossible and gets in the way of why we're all here: really hot guro content.



I'd love to see more from you!
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Thanks! I'm glad that both of you enjoyed it.



Currently I've got one or two more chapters written and unedited for this story. Ive also got a bit of another story that can tie in with this one.



>>12786

The other story I started first is a lot different from this one. It actually started out as an rp and then the other person and I had a difference of opinion. So its written from a couple of perspectives. The kinks are a bit different too. Rough fucking, gaping, prolapsing, and scat, lots of scat, and bestiality. I recently started breaking it down into chapters and will one day post what I edit into.



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>>12789

I'd like to see your take on eye fucking. Maybe something where it just sort of grows back, same way the lady in the Oglaf comic "Pinkeye" assumed it would? Or maybe there's a particular class of people who can cause otherwise impossible regeneration by ejaculating into a wound, and they might as well have fun with it.
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Idk why this is so hot to me.
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> Ugly bastards fucking cute girls




This sentence describes most of hentai imho. :-/
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Anything where the woman is bigger, deadlier, stronger, more 'hideous', more 'badass', larger, more capable of survival than the male or your average person.

This doesn't just mean one thing but a cluster of things. She could be tall and muscular, or half alien, and orc, robot implants, deadly or poisonous in some way.
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Ive been lookin for her nudes everywhere but cant seem to find them
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>>9449



She's a minor
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so what
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That's child pornography, dude.
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>>9449



A small reminder, that this is not a site hosting illegal material.

If you really want those you should probably look into the deep web, there are a bunch of pedophile forums still running.

(Don't ask me how i know)
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Free Hentai Stream and Download Online With Fastest Server Google Drive,Youtube. High Quality HD Hentai.
visite ;http://3dhentaii.blogspot.com/
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Sorry, the website is down. Google killed it due to an obvious reason.

>:( fak!
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go visit this

website: hentai.animeholics.org
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>>1259

Last time I tried, it doesn't work. Not even a single cache from the web hosting company.
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Here's the one I use. Works great for me, and has TONS of vids.



Website: hentaimama.com/
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Happy you're back
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thanks for keeping this site running.
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:D
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Does anyone have pics from the manga, blangel?
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This story is about Eva La Fey, she is a 23 year old young adult, this story will tell her how she became like this.





Eva is 6 years old half asian and half caucasian girl with a lot of behavior problems like hitting and picking on other kids and not behaving to social rules, wearing only black panties and a black short yukata with flowers on it because she cant pay better clothes, she is a orphan and lives in a orphanage in the east asian mega city, That city is build up from hongkong to beijing to seoul to tokyo. The mega city is so big that they even closed the sea between the cities to build more houses. Eva her orphanage is in the kabukicho district. The streets are flooded with prositutes, street kids, sex offenders, gang members, mafia. Kabukicho is famous for the redlight district, soap massages, hostess bars, geisha schools and houses, love hotels, cosplay cafes and a lot more, now a days is prostitution legal in the city so there are also a lot of brothels and stripclubs available a long with many internet cafes and sexshops. Eva is supposed to be taken care of by the orphanage but they only provide a sleeping place for the kids and some breakfast, the kids can walk in and out whenever they want between 00:00 AM and 8 AM, after 8 AM they are thrown out on the streets and cant come back before 00:00 AM. So like many Eva started doing jobs for the older girls and women that worked the district. getting supplies from the store like lube, condoms, food, drinks, smokes and medicine. She also did a lot of other things like reading and writing for some of the girls that couldnt do that, they never learned because they were to poor for school. A lot of the more educated girls like the geisha knew that Eva was a very smart girl so 1 of them told a man about Eva, he told her that she should send Eva over to him. The next day when Eva came to her she told her about the man and Eva went to him right away. She arrived at the destination, it was build like those old japanese houses with paper walls and tatami mats as a floor, only they used modern materials now. She ringed the bell and a man about 50 years old opened the door. "Hello little girl, you must be Eva, I am Mister Dimitrov" Eva smiled to the man, "It's a pleasure to meet you sir" She said while taking a bow. Dimitrov let her come inside and made some tea for both of them, they sit down at the table in his living room "Ok Eva, i heard a lot of good things about you, that you are a very smart girl, i wa

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please tell me if you like it or not, if you do i will provide you all in the coming days with more stories about how Eva became a very dangerous woman.
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A little bit of formatting would go a long way. It's hard to read it as it is. Break it down into more paragraphs.
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>>12953

Agreed with this anon. OP, please read the /lit/ sticky by Andlex.
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Thanks a lot for the comments, i will work on that, do you all enjoy the story so far?
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>>12955



It's ok so far.
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Fresh install system. Cookies died, account long lost.
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>>7072

... make new account
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When I woke up in my new body, first thing I noticed was how much smaller it was than my last one. I spent a minute getting used to it, moving my limbs around and touching myself in various places while the machine applied make-up on my face.



When it was done, I got up and looked in the mirror - I was a small, young, blonde, curvy, sexy girl with a very slutty make-up with a lot of green in it. Weird, I was pretty sure that He preferred brunettes.



In the next room, I was expecting to put on clothes, but they never were brought in. I decided that He probably wanted me naked and rushed out and down the hallway, to our playroom.



When I entered, the first thing that struck me was the smell. It smelled like a slaughterhouse with air sanitizers desperately trying to mask the smell with lavender and… some other smells I didn’t recognize. The floor of the room was one big, leather-covered bed. He was too busy trying to fit His cock inside of my corpses’ intestines to notice me.

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This concept is pretty hot. I like the detail where the make-up is applied to the reincarnations automatically.
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The Shortcut



Combat, snuff, humans vs. dragon.







On a sunny day of late spring over a mountain pass walked a couple of humans and a donkey, pulling an oblong cart. Both toned and confident, both equipped with a leather cuirass and a short sword. Despite the perfect weather and clear, if grassy path, woman just couldn't calm down.

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Aaaaah! Silly me! Silly me! >_< Shouldn't have rushed and one-shot it. Forgot to add few things. Should have let it sit and brew for a day. Could have added more details. But here it is. Hope you still like it. I tried to make it tragic.
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Zero comments. Was it that bad? >_>
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Don't worry, that's normal! I was entertained. It was coherent and interesting. You don't get a lot of love unless you do really over the top fetish stuff.



I also bet people would talk a lot more if you practiced so much your writing was undeniably amazing, but I've never experienced that so I can't prove it!



Anyway, I liked it! You should write more!
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The dragon submitting to the humans was very hot, that scene by itself was worth the price of admission.
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Last week I finally had a little time to write and I managed to finish a short story that I had in my mind for a while. Its a concept that others had tried before, though I think this one is somewhat different and you might like it.



I am also working in another story, much more brutal than this one, that might be finished by the end of the week. I will post it here too if people are interested in a girl being burned alive as revenge by the police.



Also, if you like it and want to read more, check out my website at www asstr org/~Eficient/





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This is some beautiful writing here. You portrayed ambiguousity of while situation rather well and would definitely read more of your work.
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Thanks Orion, I am glad you liked it!
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Very nice, the grammar mistakes leave something to be desired though.
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Thanks, I am glad you liked it. Sorry about those mistakes. I have never found a proofreader and no matter how many times I go over a story before posting it, some always slip by...
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