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    On behalf of all content creators 😊 This site doesn't have any sprt of view counter and we love to know if our work is being enjoyed so if you're reading and enjoying our stories, please leave an anonymous comment now and then, even if it's just "Enjoying this!" Or "Looking forward to the next chapter!" 😊 It would mean so much to us! Thanks
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    I agree—readers could certainly comment more. However, there is also the issue of shyness—especially with the kind of topics we cover. That said, it shouldn't really matter as much for an anonymous commenter. It’s cold comfort, but most fetish sites dealing with niche or edgy content face this same problem of low reader engagement in the comments.
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    Speaking as an occasional content creator, it really does mean a lot when someone responds to something I made. Even criticism is often nicer than the silence which quietly implies that my efforts are worthless. (I know I have at least a couple fans, so I know to dismiss those doubts)

    Speaking as a frequent lurker, I wish I had a way to encourage a creator who is making something I enjoy which didn't require me to come up with something to say 😶. I understand why it wouldn't work here, but the ratings / thumbs buttons on basically every other content sharing site offer a nice middle ground between a thoughtful comment and nothing at all. Perhaps a comment with just "+1", "like" or "👍" would be a workable equivalent here.

    Finally, Edward, I'd probably love about everything you write, but just don't have time to read as fast as you can apparently crank out tasty little tales 😜. Maybe some day I'll take a month and try to catch up reading your many ongoing stories.
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    👍
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    I found the "like" button. Hmm, I wonder if I should use it when various stories have been completed. :D There are also gold and wooden versions of the thumbs-up. Haha.
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    >>31011
    that lights up the imagination... giving her the thumbs up 🤤

    (TAGS – Cannibal, pre-teen, consensual, exhibitionism, public, spit-roasting, school)

    School Dinner
    By
    Edward Hyde
    “You wanted to see me, Sir?” Kerry asked a little nervously, knocking on the half-open door of the Principal’s office. The middle-aged man looked up with a warm smile.

    “Ah, Kerry! Lovely!” he stood up behind his desk. “Do come in!” Kerry pushed the door all the way open and walked into the modest office, still wondering why she had been summoned and what kind of trouble she might be in. A woman who she did not recognise, wearing a smart, expensive-looking suit was stood beside the desk and she also smiled warmly as the twelve year old came in but, to her great surprise, her mum was there too, grinning excitedly as if she were there to watch her receive a prize! “Kerry,” Mr Harcourt, the Principal, smiled, “this is Mrs Collins. Mrs Collins, I’m proud to introduce Kerry Mulligan from year seven.”

    “Please,” Mrs Collins held out her hand for Kerry to shake, “call me Josie.” Kerry nodded mutely with a polite smile, still not quite sure what was going on. Everyone sat back down, Mr Harcourt behind his desk, Mrs Collins, Josie, on the other office chair that faced it and her mum on the green leather sofa that had seen better days. She patted the cushion next to her and Mr Harcourt nodded approvingly, indicating with his hand that she should sit down. “Now first let me assure you,” he beamed as Kerry’s mum slipped a comforting hand into her own and squeezed it encouragingly, “you’re not in any sort of trouble! We just have some rather big news to share and couldn’t risk it getting out before everything was finalised.” Kerry nodded. “Are you familiar with the Sidney’s chain of restaurants?”

    “Yes.” Kerry replied carefully with a slight nod. How could she not be? Since the first one had opened in the UK five years earlier, the American chain had become something of a legend, especially among girls around her age. The restaurant, named after the owner’s daughter, was a family-friendly chain, a treat certainly but well within affordability for most families, especially for special occasions, where all the meat served was from human girls aged between eight and fourteen. Kerry had never been herself and, like many people, had been sceptical about the claims at first, thinking that whole girl-meat angle was just some kind of slightly bizarre marketing gimmick but over time she had spoken to enough friends who had eaten there and seen enough videos of girls being cooked and served up that she was now convinced that it was real.


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    >>30800
    They're awesome, aren't they? I love seeing my characters come to life and the pictures that you and he make both make me very hungry :D
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    Speaking personally, Ao3 would certainly be easier to access than Pixiv if you're not gonna post it here.
    And I'd be eager to read it.
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    >>30849
    I'm back to posting everything here, don't worry. The sequel story is called "Talent Laid Bare" :)
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    Oh, nice.
    Didn't get around to that one yet, but that's definitely getting further up my list :-P
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    Since this story written by Edward is my favorite so far, it gets a thumbs up.

    In the heart of a bustling suburban neighborhood, where the chorus of children's laughter mingled with the rhythmic thump of a basketball against pavement, Sarah McIntyre was king of the court. Well, at least in her own mind. Her cheeks flushed with the heat of the day, her shoulder length red hair messy as she darted around the court. The ball, a faded orange sphere, was a silent witness to the countless victories she had scored over her invisible opponents. At eleven, she was a force to be reckoned with, her round frame believing in speed and agility rather than the delicate grace society often prescribed for a girl her age.

    Her sneakers slapped the concrete as she dashed for the ball that had escaped her grasp. The afternoon sun, a fiery disc in the sky, cast a glow on the pavement that made everything feel a few degrees hotter. Yet, Sarah didn't mind. Sweat beaded on her forehead, tracing tiny rivers down her cheeks. Her t-shirt, once a vibrant blue, was now a patchwork of dirt and grass stains - a testament to her fearless spirit.

    Neighboring the basketball court was a small veterinary clinic. It was a nondescript building, the kind that blended into the background of the everyday, but today, it would play a role in a drama she never saw coming. Above the door was a nondescript sign reading 'Dr. Amanda Richards - Animal Care'.

    With a determined look in her eye and the ball firmly in hand, Sarah took aim for a three pointer that would surely echo in the annals of her personal legend. She didn't see the window to her left until the sound of shattering glass pierced the air as the ball bounced off the rim and flew straight through it. Time seemed to slow as the ball sailed through the window of Dr. Richards' clinic, leaving a jagged hole in its wake. The world around her stilled, the only sound now the ringing in her ears and the barking of dogs in the chaos she had unintentionally created.

    Sarah's heart dropped to her stomach as she stared at the carnage. The shards of glass glittered like a treacherous crown of thorns, beckoning her closer. Inside, a cacophony of alarmed animals filled the room. She knew she had to do something - fast. Before the guilt could fully consume her, she gathered her courage and approached the clinic. The door was unlocked, swinging open with a gentle creak that seemed to amplify in the sudden quiet of the street. The cool interior was a stark contrast to the heat outside, the sterile smell now mixed with the faint scent of fear and confusion from the animals.

    The reception area was small but meticulously organized, with a desk in the corner and a few chairs lined against the wall. A bell above the door jingled as she stepped in, announcing her presence. A moment later, a 35-year-old woman with pretty auburn hair and a white lab coat emerged from the back, her eyebrow raising at the sight of Sarah.

    The doctor held up a ball.

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    >>27653
    Honestly, that's a bonus she haven't considered.
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    Any plans on continuing? Truly great work
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    The turns of phrase and writing tempo of this story have me believing that this is either written by AI or with heavy AI assistance.
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    >>29512
    AI or not this shit was hot as fuck
    Any more coming OP?
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    Fast pace and to the point. Great power dynamics with Doctor/reluctantly manipulated patient relations. This story is definitely a medical fetish few have venture to explore.

    AI? Could be. Seems sanitized enough. Not criticizing, I don’t really care one way or the other.

    In particular, anyone have his story “Heroes vs Zakos”?
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    Yes!
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    Bump! pleeeease!
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    bump
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    I third the request!
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    yes please

    A Farmer’s Market Feast
    By
    Edward Hyde
    “Here I am, Mummy! All clean!” Carmen declared, stepping out of the shower, pink and dripping wet. He turned all around on the spot to show that he had washed himself properly as his proud mother knelt on the bathroom floor.

    “Good boy!” she praised him. “I’m so proud of you doing that all by yourself!” Carmen beamed. This was not just a normal shower with normal soap. This time he had needed to scrub himself all over with the clear, unscented body-wash which felt like it had sand mixed into it to make sure all the dirt came out of his skin and made him safe to eat. The last thing he wanted was to give anyone a tummy-ache! Mummy had offered to get in with him and help but he was a big boy and had wanted to do it on his own, something he had successfully down, even remembering to scrub deep in the crack of his bottom and to pull back the skin at the end of his willy to clean underneath. “I think that deserves a special kiss!” Carmen’s beam of pride turned into a broad grin of excitement! Mummy’s special kisses were one of his favourite things but normally they were reserved for bed time and then only when he had been a very good boy that day!

    Licking her lips a little as she leaned forward, his mum took Carmen’s little willy between her thumb and forefinger. Already a little stiff from the excitement and anticipation of the day’s events to come, she massaged it gently until it stood at full attention then put her warm, soft lips around it. This was the first time Carmen could remember getting a special kiss standing up! Normally they happened when he was laying in bed, his pyjama bottoms pulled down to his knees and his top hitched up past his tummy. For balance, he put his hands on his mum’s shoulders as she sucked and licked him at the same time, giving him that nice tingly feeling. After a few minutes, he felt the pressure building behind his willy as his mum tickled his little marble sack with with tips of her fingers then the familiar happy explosion and the last bit of licking as Mummy hungrily sucked the last few drops of thin, watery cream from the tip of his willy.

    “Good boy!” she grinned, standing up and reaching for a towel to dry him off. “There!” she patted his bare bottom once he was reasonably dry. “Go put on your outfit and we’ll get going!” A few minutes later, Carmen was downstairs in his denim dungarees, plaid shirt and baseball cap with the logo of a farm equipment company on it that Uncle Silas had given him on his visit to the farm. On his feet he wore bright red wellington boots that, to his seven year old eyes at least, completed the farmer look.

    It had been three years since Uncle Silas had quit his job in the city and bought the long-disused farm with its ramshackle house and barn, complete with leaking roof and toilet that only flushed if it was in a good mood, with the intention of not only doing up the house to make a nice home but also working the farm to grow potatoes. He had enjoyed a certain degree of success, although it would be another couple of years at least before he actually turned a profit, given the amount of investment that had been required to get things going! Although wholesale was his biggest outlet, he did like to sell to the public as well via a small roadside stand near the entrance to his property and now he wanted to break into the ready-to-go food market via a baked potato stand and the local farmer’s market which was held on the first Sunday of every month.


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    >>30832
    I have a new account on there - TheEdwardHyde :)
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    No hair in soup. Hurts a cooks reputation. Closed cap stewing is a must, traps in all the flavor. All this is done well in this story.
    Story looks open ended for future tale.

    Bravo!
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    >>30840
    So happy you like it 😁 It was a comission for a friend 😊
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    >>30833
    Message me where we first messaged.
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    >>30888
    Comment on this story there so I can find you. I don't know how to search for users, sorry!

    Dying to be Eaten?
    By
    Edward Hyde
    “Did you see that documentary last night?” Jackson’s co-worker had asked him, apropos of nothing as they waited for access to the kettle in the break room.

    “Might have to give me more to go on!” Jackson had chuckled. “I mean, I didn’t see any documentaries last night so the answer’s definitely no but which one in particular did I miss?”

    “The one about those girls who are going to get butchered and eaten!” his co-worker had explained. “Can you believe that?”

    “The Louis Theroux one?” Jackson had asked, recognition dawning. “Yeah, I saw it last year. Pretty wild, huh?”

    “No, not that one.” He’d been informed with just a hint of impatience. “There’s a new one. You know, because they’re making it legal here in September?”


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    I’m in editing hell. Thanks for a much needed break.

    Promising start to what will be an excellent addition to the Sidney saga.
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    The next segment was a series of three short, pre-filmed segments showing the girls in question living their normal lives at home, at school and out on the street, only three because two of them were appearing together as they were best friends.

    “Four apparently normal, happy, healthy young girls,” the reporter narrated, “with one very extraordinary thing in common.” He paused for dramatic effect. “The overwhelming desire to be eaten!” The pair of best friends consisted a more or less flat-chested strawberry blonde with a pretty, round face and her taller, brunette and olive-skinned friend who, although clearly very close in age, had pert young breasts around the size and shape of apples, clearly visible under the crop-top she was wearing in some of the footage. The other girls were a tall, rather stocky brunette with a plain kind of prettiness and a cute, chubby blonde with wavy hair just past her shoulders. They all looked to be around eleven or twelve years old.

    The next scene took place inside a house, presumably the home of one of the pair of friends. The reporter was sat with the two girls and a woman with similar-coloured hair to the smaller of the two at a round, kitchen table. Although only what was above the surface was visible to the camera, it was quite clear that the girls were naked.

    “Can we make it clear from the start,” the reporter said, his hands on a mug of tea or coffee in front of him and speaking directly to the girls rather than to the camera, “we didn’t ask you to dress like this. Is that right?”

    “Absolutely!” the older girl laughed and her friend gave a cheeky giggle. “We insisted!”

    “And why is that?” asked the reporter.

    “Because we’re meat!” the smaller girl explained brightly. “Just like any farm animal! You don’t expect pigs, cows or chickens to wear clothes, do you?”

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    Oh, wow – another new story. More new insights; I’m curious. I think I really need a table of contents for the good stories published here.
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    “She was still reading about it and watching old videos of her interviews and stuff when I came over to work on our project for school!” Hannah picked up the story. “I thought she was looking at porn or something when I came in and saw Sidney on the screen but she showed me what it was and then we watched the documentary together.”

    “And did the project ever get done?” the reporter asked with a wry chuckle.

    “Something got handed in on time.” Sophia confessed a little sheepishly. “But it probably wasn’t either of out best work!”

    “So was it an instant conversion for you?” The reporter continued his questioning. “You clearly found it fascinating but did you immediately want to be eaten or did that come later? Tell me how you felt around the time of that first realisation.”

    “Excited.” Sophia blushed a little, clearly intending the meaning of the word relating to arousal rather than anticipation. “I was kinda shocked at first I guess but the whole thing just seemed so thrilling and felt so… right!”

    “How long after that was it that the announcement about Sidney’s coming to the UK was made? How long did it take for you to pre-register?” He was focussed on Sophia for the moment, clearly wanting to draw out her full story before turning to Hannah to compare and contrast.

    “I don’t know really…” Sophia thought for a moment. “I guess a few months? There were rumours first then reports about negotiations. I’d joined loads of forums and websites for fans of Sidney, fans of the restaurant and other meat-girls so I got all the info pretty much as soon as it was available. I had to get Mum’s permission to sign up when the form went live.”

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    EXTREME FICTION / FANTASY ONLY – 18+ ONLY

    This is pure fantasy. All characters are consenting adults.
    Contains: graphic consensual snuff, ritual seppuku/hara-kiri, detailed evisceration, autophagy (self-cannibalism), extreme gore, intense pain, organ exposure, blood, bodily fluids and death agony.

    If these themes disturb you, please do not read.

    Feedback is very welcome – especially on pain realism and anatomical details.

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    **The Liberation of the Spirit** – Teil 1


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    Teil 2
    **The Liberation of the Spirit** – Teil 2

    Andrea sat there as if petrified. She had been forced to witness every moment, every moan, every tearing sound. Her hands clenched the seat of the sofa so tightly that her knuckles turned white. A war raged within her between revulsion, sheer horror, and an almost unbearable, arousing fascination.

    The sight of Monika’s exposed, steaming entrails—this raw, true interior of her friend—sent a shiver through her that reached to the deepest roots of her existence. It was ugly. It was terrible. It was the most honest thing she had ever seen.

    The Snuf officer didn’t move until after a long minute of silence. He stepped forward, knelt beside Monika’s motionless body, and checked her pulse with two professional fingers on her carotid artery. Nothing. He nodded, stood up, and wiped his bloodstained fingers on a white cotton handkerchief.

    “Phase one complete,” he said in his monotonous official voice. Then he turned to Andrea. “Are you ready for phase two? You can back out at any time. The contract applies per person.”

    Andrea swallowed hard. Her mouth was parched. She looked up from her friend’s corpse, eyed the blood-smeared tanto lying on the floor, and then the officer. There was no encouragement in his eyes, but no judgment either. Only waiting professionalism. That gave her a strange sense of support.


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    Teil 3
    **The Liberation of the Spirit** – Teil 3 (Abschluss)

    She pulled and thrust, further and further, an automaton-like executor of her own will. The blade approached the pubic bone. Just before it reached it, with one last, brutal jerk, she severed something that triggered a sudden, violent gush of a clear, warm liquid, which spurted down her thighs and onto the floor.

    *Ssssssssch—*

    It wasn’t blood. It was urine. She had ruptured her bladder. The sharp, characteristic smell of urine mingled with the already hellish scent. The liquid ran hot down her legs, mixing with the blood and intestinal secretions. A final humiliation, a last surrender of control.

    The knife couldn’t go any further. The handle struck her pubic bone. The vertical cut was complete. A gaping wound about thirty centimeters long stretched from her upper abdomen down to her pubic area. Her abdominal wall hung apart in two large, bloody flaps.

    Exposed in the cavity lay a large portion of her digestive tract: liver, stomach, a tangle of small intestine loops, the beginning of the large intestine, all covered by a shiny film of blood and serous fluids, all still warm and alive with a sluggish, peristaltic twitch.


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    >>30010
    Seems like part one got cut off?

    Mistress Skye – Superstar!
    By
    Edward Hyde


    The rest of the evening continued as smoothly as it had begun with the second and third audiences being every bit as appreciative as the first. For the middle show, to keep things fresh, a couple of the executions were gender-swapped from the first, with a boy of fifteen receiving the lethal injection while covering his belly in spunk as the girl chosen to operate the controls flooded him with the orgasm-inducing chemical for nearly the whole time, watching as the pleasure itself became the torture, before inflicting the final quarter of the dose all in one go with the dial turned all the way around to the pain setting. Before moving on from that room, many of the audience had paused to take photos of his face locked, in death, in an expression of unimaginably agony. It gave Skye great pleasure to know how much Dinah would have enjoyed watching others tortured to death by the method she devised for herself, especially as the teen girl executed in the third show was her big sister Martina!

    The beheading had to stay a girl, of course, since that prisoner once again provided the meat for the barbecue and Skye knew the paying guests would feel cheated if served boy-meat. Even ‘though it was no longer illegal for human consumption and in most blind tests, hardly anyone could actually tell the difference, it was still considered by most to be vastly inferior to girl-meat and it didn’t seem fair for one set of ticket-holders to get short-changed in this way!

    The most interesting swap had probably been the “heretics”, where a girl was hung from the hooks to suffer death by a thousand cuts while it had been a boy strapped into the garotting chair. What made this variation especially interesting was the introduction of a secondary vice clamped around his testicles, slowly crushing them with each turn on the smaller handle. The boy, a fourteen year old named Colin, had abstained from sex or masturbation for the seven days leading up to the event, no mean feat at his age, so that they would be nice and swollen when the time came. Of course his member had stood bolt upright, engorged and proud as, naked of course, he was strapped into the chair and the castration began. The tighter the vice was turned, the more he screamed and blood began to ooze out among the pre-cum. When the engorged testicles finally exploded, he had ejaculated a spectacular fountain of blood mixed with seven days-worth of pent-up spunk. This had elicited more applause than his actual death a few minutes later!

    The girl hanging from the hooks had been an interesting variation too – the middle one being inserted into her vagina and emerging bloodily through her mons pubis. Although once again too thin to provide a decent amount of meat, her bust was not insubstantial and, like her predecessor's PENIS, it was her breasts, hooks pushed through below the nipples, which attracted the most attention at first with people enjoying the way they gradually distended and pulled themselves apart. One man, after seeking permission from Skye of course, even cut a careful spiral in the less damaged one, using as many of the existing cuts as he could, so that the full and perky teen breast unravelled like orange peel! A nick to the artery in her inner thigh meant that she was dead long before the hooks gave way and was therefore available to take her place on her designated cross.


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    >>30475
    Hehe it's almost like you're TRYING to split my focus! 🤣 I do like that character so will re-read this and see if I can remember where I was going with it. If not, I might go for a do-over and write something new with the character 😊
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    >>30477

    If Anonymous (>>30475) hadn't revived this thread I would have missed this nice story. So I second his/her/its attempt to split your focus. ;)=)
    It will be a waste if this a little bit different story (from the point of the protagonist) has no future. I like the idea of Skye not ending as meat.
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    >>30475
    I double this.
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    >>30494
    Oh yes, don't worry! This character is very much a "dom". I see her as having a long and deadly career 😁
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    I missed Skye! I’m so happy to see she has a long career ahead of her, because her technique is amazing! I also can’t wait to see more of her work here, and I’ll be eagerly awaiting more updates :)

    Hello Dolcett Fans,

    I know it has been a few months since my last story was published. The reason is (besides a break) I have been hard at work brainstorming, outlining, and drafting my next major project:

    ***One (More) Week in Dolcett - Scarlett Sky***

    The original story was extremely popular through Reddit, with over 10,000 plays on Itch over the last year. I've been thinking about developing a sequel over the past year and have finally committed to the journey required to complete a story of this magnitude. If you have not read/played the original, it can be accessed on Itch:

    https://strict-smile2087.itch.io/one-week-in-dolcett

    The sequel will be a brand new feature length story that will take place several years past the canon ending of One Week in Dolcett, involving a scenario where Scarlett faces what appears to be a simple quest and short journey back to Dolcett. I don't want to give any spoilers, but nothing in Dolcett ever goes as expected, and a wiser, stronger, and more confident Scarlett takes on an even more dangerous world of Dolcett in a story poised to change her, and that world, forever.

    Featuring:

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    Being dismembered alive roasting pieces by roasting pieces

    Eaten limbs by limbs

    Eaten raw

    Neck fucked while the decapitated body is roasting on a spit

    eyes scooped out, cap removed, brain turned into a mushy soup in a head bowl.

    hands and feet cut to elbow and knees, roasted and eaten while the stompy girl is converted to a pet.
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    These are some good suggestions, I will be doing a couple of these for sure. :)
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    >>30806

    Your an animal. lol

    I’ll see what I can do.

    I do like a good limb removal.
    Maybe even a clan up the road. Treating pets as only cattle.
    Shun by the pet loving community. Not nice folks.

    Big party coming up, we’ll see who’s invited.
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    >>30807

    Agree, I’m a tad bit suspicious of Coach. I plan to fish out his story a bit. He has a killer job at a Middle school. ;)
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    Thanks PBandJ. There have been requests for a longer/more fleshed out (pun) version of livestock/cattle, and that is 100% in the sequel

    The general plot was a group of women playing Russian Roulette. One of them (Kimmy, I think her name was) goes first and blows her brains out. Another girl comments about how she should've waited for them to unload the gun. The girls continue anyway with the gun still fully loaded.

    Does anyone know where I can find this story?
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    posted by PullApartWriter to reddit /r/guroerotica

    “Kimmie, we need one more!”

    Kimmie joined a circle of five other girls and gazed, fascinated, at the revolver they were passing around.

    “Loser’s dinner,” one said mischievously.

    “I’ll start!” Kimmie said, greedily grabbing the revolver, spinning the cylinder, and holding it to her temple.

    The explosion rang loudly through the party, then the wet sound of brains and blood pouring onto the ground, followed quickly by Kimmie’s madly convulsing body.

    The remaining girls looked at each other, stunned. One finally spoke.

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    >>30683
    Thanks

    This is part 2 of Riley's story, a direct continuation from Riley's Conversion. It's much shorter but, I hope, just as emotionally deep.
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    >>30658
    I tend to post works in progress on Pixiv and finished works on Dolcettish and Ao3 but I may start posting WIPs on Ao3 :)
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    >>30660
    I know it is your "baby" but I'd be surprised if The System didn't have a public face and a far murkier underside.
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    Never herd of Ao3 is that the name or initials?
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    >>30664
    Archiveofourown. It's a depository for fanfic but they're very broad-minded! Just search "Sidneyverse" on there and you'll find most of my stuff 😊
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    >>30592

    I'm just wondering if it's a new common way of writing to double whole sequences? ;b
    Edward did this already in his story "A Farmer's Market Feast" (>>30583) so I had to mention it (>>30680) :)=)

    Here it happened in
    > Chapter 3: The Tiger
    between
    > Once the paint had dried enough to stop smudging, Matilda guided Riley up onto the table itself.
    and
    > And seated atop the paint-stained table with Matilda between her legs, Riley felt strangely, terrifyingly safe.

    I'm afraid I'm to busy to proof-read the stories of both of you on a regular base. ;D
    This said I'm desperately waiting for Riley's next chapter.

    This is the tale of Amara, currently a ghost, haunting a maritime museum full of salvage from the shipwreck of the "Tarberry". This was a ship involved in the 18th century triangle trade. She would sail off from, say, Philadelphia with whisky and tobacco to Southampton, England, where she would be loaded with clothes and other manufactured items, and from there, she sailed to West Africa, where she would take on people, freshly captured in war or some other barbarities, and take those captives off to Virginia or the Carolinas to be auctioned off. It was a lucrative trade, this triangular route, and the sailors were adept at handling the ships with billowed sail for months on end.

    Amara was a West African mom with somewhat sizable boobs (displayed topless in the typical West African fashion of the day) and a curvy butt (hidden inside a long flowing dress). She had a love of dancing and her nappy, braided hair was cropped short. Amara was not really skinny at first, she was somewhat plump. Such was her condition when she was captured by a band of warriors while caring for her kids outside her Igbo hut.

    According to our seance, Amara recounted as follows, although it was translated from her native Asusu Igbo language.

    "The bad men had grabbed me roughly by the wrists and ankles and tied me to a pole. I kicked and screamed, trying to get attention. Unfortunately, my children and husband were too far off to hear me. I must have peed, as I felt wetness dripping down my behind; my skirt was still on at this point. My captors loosened my hair and they started carrying me, like people might carry dead animals they intend to cook and eat, one man on each end of the pole. I bounced and shook and my wrists and ankles became so raw from the rubbing that they bled. This trek took most of the day, then they would set me down in the dirt, then they would pick me up again, and then at night, I would be tied with my ankle to a rope around a tent pole. I would eat and do my business in the tent. My captors used knives to cut my clothes off, so that I stood, dark and imposing and quite naked in the chilly tent. I peed on one of the warriors, who then got angry and threw a punch into my side, causing my ribs to hurt and my boobs to jiggle and shocking pain to radiate. I didn't want to create any more trouble. I was left alone the rest of the night.

    It took a few days to get to the place of the Tarberry. This was what the sailors called a wharf, with a long pavilion next to the vast waters and several massive boats, all with poles sticking out of them and canvas sails on the poles.

    The sailors, now, they were a drunken lot. They slurred their words and stumbled around, they were rude, they got into fights. They also lined us up against posts and looked over us head to toe. They stuck their filthy hands into our mouths, opened them wide, and they looked at my breasts and behind and legs and vagina. A few even stuck their fingers in my dark smelly liquid twat, causing me to wrinkle my nose. One of them spoke in his gibberish, and I could see his bulge in his trousers as he felt all over me.

    Then they put me in manacles and chains, and I was buckled by my ankles and wrists again and forced to walk the gangway to the big boat, the Tarberry. I was shoved down the hold so hard that my feet were a mess of pain and my knees buckled. I felt warmth down my legs: my bladder had let go again. I was laid down cheek to jowl on a shelf in the darkness where we couldn't move, or at least not without difficulty. We rolled in the dark, as the boat moved through the water; the ship moved back and forth and up and down quite vigorously. I felt nauseous and I spewed up my belly's contents. I was loosened from my shackles every now and then, to pee and eat slop and poop, but otherwise it was an interminable lying in the darkness."

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    >>30691

    Once more a short story with a (pseudo?) historic background. It's a new theme and refreshing! Go on ...

    Diary of a Meat-Girl – Sidney Roebuck in Her Own Words
    By
    Edward Hyde


    EDITOR’S FOREWORD


    Sidney Dorothy Roebuck, born August 15th 2010, died August 15th 2022, on her twelfth birthday, was my Great Aunt, the youngest sibling and only sister of my father, Alexei Roebuck. As the first person to be legally killed for the express purpose of being eaten in recorded history, she is one of the most iconic figures to have come out of the twenty-first century and arguably more has been written about her than other other historical figure since Jack the Ripper. Like the infamous Ripper, however, a great deal of what is written about her is speculation, the discussion of her feelings and motives based on carefully managed television and magazine interviews and, while it has become widely known and understood that the Sidney we all recognise today as the mascot of the international restaurant chain was simply a character she portrayed, the creation of an expert marketing team, this is still the only Sidney most people know.

    In 2084, the world was rocked by the claim that Sidney had changed her mind at the last minute and allowed another, unwilling girl to be killed in her place. Although this claim was proven to be a lie and the woman claiming to be Sidney was, in fact, the girl she claimed had been used as a substitute, the scandal reawakened public interest in Sidney as a person and her relationship with Jessica Thornton after whom the fast-food chain Jessie T’s, a subsidiary of Sidney’s Inc. (Formerly Roebuck Inc. Worldwide) is named. With very few living witnesses who had known either girl, this too became a topic of speculation, the only first-hand source being a letter written by Sidney to Jessica in which she laments their estranged friendship and expresses hopes that Jessica will accept the invitation to attend her slaughter and that they might be reconciled. Since the true identity of the woman who claimed to be Sidney was only discovered after her death from natural causes, the real Jessica was unable to shed any more light on their friendship, the full cause of its ending or the effect it had on Sidney.

    While some of Sidney’s personal property was put on display in Roebuck International Hotels or in branches of Sidney’s Family Restaurant when they began to open, or donated to museums such as the Smithsonian and the Bullock Texas State History Museum, these tended to be pieces that related to her campaign and were deemed to have historical significance. The rest of her property was packed away by the family’s staff and put into storage where it remained until three two years ago when a leak was discovered in the roof of the building where the boxes were stored and they were moved to a safe location while the repairs were carried out. The family, including myself, took this opportunity to sort through the decades old artefacts to see what should be kept, what needed to be disposed of and what might be considered of interest to scholars and historians such as myself.

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    [Editor’s Note – The next events of note take place in August 2019. In earlier entries, Sidney discusses not being picked for the school’s hokey team that year but planning to try again next year if she is still alive. She also confirms that nobody at school, other than the teachers, seems to know that she is the same Sidney as her by that time very well-known campaign or, if they do, they are being very discrete about it. The next reproduced diary entry was written in LA.]


    Tuesday 13th August 2019

    Got the best news ever today! Not only is Jessie’s mom letting her come to my birthday party in Dallas on Saturday but she’s allowed to come with me, Daddy and Martha to Disneyland on Thursday which is my actual birthday! The only better present would be to hear that my campaign has been successful and I can be my own birthday dinner but Martha said I need to be prepared for that to take at least two more years and maybe more. I asked what happens if I am 15 before the law gets approved as we proposed making it for girls 8-14 but she said if that gets close we’ll just make it 10-16 instead but she thinks it will happen before then. I really hope so! She and Daddy are talking about opening a second campaign office in LA and letter Moira run it while Claude runs the one in Dallas and she goes between them. She said it would make sense as I do spend a lot of time here too. Daddy asked if I want to come out of school next year and have tutors instead so I can spend more time on the campaign but I don’t know yet. He said I didn’t have to decide yet anyway. Called Jessie after dinner and talked to her about Disneyland and the party. Her mom said she can fly with me and Martha on Daddy’s plane. It feels so nice to have my friend back.


    Wednesday 14th August 2019

    Daddy had a meeting at the hotel today so went there with him. This one had an apartment at the top just like the one in Dallas but I don’t like this one so much because Mrs Webber isn’t here and I guess because the LA house is so new it feels just the same. The manager here is a man called Scott and he’s nice I guess but always seems really busy and when I try to talk to him I feel like I’m getting in his way and keeping him from his work and that he’s only polite to me because he’s afraid Daddy will fire him if he’s not. Not that I’d complain to Daddy of course, as long as he was not actually mean, he’s just so different from Mrs Webber! I bet she’d be happy if I went to live at her hotel full-time!

    Went to the gym for a bit but got bored so asked if I could go shopping. Daddy doesn’t like me walking around LA the way he lets me in Dallas so he sent me out in a car with one of his drivers who was a nice man a bit older than Daddy called Frank. He told me about his own daughter who has just had a baby and shared the candies he keeps in the glove box with me. I asked if he’d seen the posters and he said everyone had and laughed. There are certainly a lot in LA too but they don’t seem to stand out as much as the ones in Dallas. I bet NYC is even worse. It would be a good idea to have an office here too. It might help us get more noticed.

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    So, I guess this story won't be continued/finished..?
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    >>30675
    Oh it very much will! Don't worry! :)
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    >>30676
    Awesome! Thank you!
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    >>30677
    Just have to wait for the muse for any particular story to seize me :D

    *Soon may the Wellerman come
    Bringing sugar and tea and rum
    One day when the tonguing is done
    We'll take our leave and go...*

    (start with the Wellerman song)


    Once there was this cannibal gang, a band of pirates in the Caribbean that had taken wives among the Caribs and the Polynesians and managed to reproduce, and they had heard of the practice of tonguing a whale and thought to appropriate that habit.

    So, of course, along came a sailing ship, a Wellerman, up from New Zealand bringing sugar, tea, rum, and Chinese, Kiwi, and British migrants to the shores of Caribanesia, the isles of the pirate cannibals. The British and Chinese attempted to start towns and the Maoris tried a village of their own. However, the pirate descendants, clad in a mix of Native Caribbean and 17th century European garb and brandishing flintlocks and torches and pistols, raided the little settlement of New Liverpool. They burned the town and made off with a few young people, having slain elderly and other folks in the process. This consisted of three men and four women. Of the men, two were British and one Chinese, and the women were a blonde Brit, a flower of China with dark hair and white skin, a tanned and somewhat fierce looking Maori with chin tattoo, and a Malay in a hijab and flowery skirt. All were tied up in rope and made to walk a couple miles over rough tropical and volcanic terrain by sword point and gunpoint, until they came to the tonguing grounds.

    The Chinese man and one of the British men were made quick work of. They tied both to stakes already at the grounds and lashed them painfully. They cut off their heads, their private parts, and other extremities and started skinning and cutting the fat off of them while everyone else watched. They then cut the meat off their bones and threw the meat onto a smoking rack to slowly smoke.

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    Tonguing, or flensing, is the practice of cutting the blubber off a whale and butchering the whale, part of the process of making whale oil. The cannibals, being cannibals, decided to apply it to people and well.
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    Please note that all sexual victims in my stories are adults. Thanks for noticing.
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    Some eight or nine months passed. The strapped women were freed from their confinement and moved around for those eight or nine months, although they found the moving difficult on only leg and arm stumps. They had to eat food like dogs or horses, and the walking was often painful. Their boobs grew. Men (and the occasional wayward lass) kept flicking their vaginas for fun, and at least a couple forced themselves on the Malay woman. Towards the end of this time period, the Chinese woman, her own belly bulging, was eagerly fondled by a smelly pirate and then skewered roughly on his dick. The Chinese woman screamed. Her water broke with a splash onto her still remaining thighs, and she fell on her side. The swashbucklers wasted no time in putting her back on the frame and hoisting her up, screaming in excruciating pain as she went into agonizing labor, which lasted seemingly hours. At last, bloodily and slimily, the baby emerged, a boy, and almost dropped onto the ground. The pirates caught him and yanked him crudely from the woman's twat, cutting the umbilical cord roughly with a scabbard. The Malay woman went into labor at this point, so she, too, was hoisted up on a frame and her water broke and a baby emerged: a robust girl. Both women's boobs ached and spewed milk. The second baby was just ripped from the Malay 's womb, the cord tearing tissue in the womb. Heavy blood flow commenced as the Malay screamed in pain. Pirates started fucking and choking the buxom Malay. Her consciousness clouded and she became weaker and weaker. Her thoughts became erratic. Soon she lost so much blood that she became unconscious, and after several minutes of fucking her in the front, the ruffians became aware that she was dead. They skinned and took the fat off the Malay in front of the devastated Chinese woman, who didn't have her baby back. She never saw her son again.

    Instead, a buccaneer plunged a dagger into the Chinese woman's stomach and twisted, causing her to gasp and cry. The knife then pulled out her bowels, strand by painful strand, and they unraveled onto the ground. The Chinese woman gasped and screamed. Her bladder emptied, squirting yellow piss all over her stumps and frame. The bloody pirates continued to fondle her and insert stuff into her vagina...... She reached a screaming, bucking orgasm, squirting on top of her piss. By now, the Chinese woman ached all over. The pirates began to cut her skin and fat off, and she screamed. Someone stabbed her in the bla

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    Answer: You have to feed a Tribble before they will multiply.

    Can we please put all the Edward Hide stories into one thread? Most authors have threads for their work. Edward is great but he is now filling pages and PAGES of this place. It is getting to the point where it is hard to find anything else weather by scroll or search.

    Can we PLEASE! organise this a bit? Either Edward himself or a mod please?!?
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    @Janny In my opinion, your post has caused a certain amount of damage. Your criticism was misdirected at Edward; after all, he cannot be held responsible for how this internet platform is structured. To attack an author—or an artist—so harshly simply for producing "too much" content is so destructive that anyone reading this post—someone who might perhaps be considering publishing a story themselves—is likely to be left so discouraged that they might well reconsider contributing anything here at all. However, as far as I am concerned, I can put your mind at ease. You challenged me to revise my stories and adapt them for this forum.

    Furthermore, I would like to encourage Edward—and every other author—to continue posting here and to ignore criticisms that completely miss the point.
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    I have to disagree with OP.
    I'd much rather Edward Hyde keeps his stories in individual threads.

    It would be an absolute pain to have to wade through pages and pages of a single thread to find the relevant story you want to read.
    Plus, it's not like his stories are anywhere near being able to be considered spam. They all are of great quality and each is unique.
    I for one am thankful of Edward's prolific writing as it's always such a treat to read him, although it's sometimes hard to keep up with all the content.

    Secondly, for people who regularly check the forum, there aren't so many threads that it's hard to keep track of new ones.

    Now, ideally, we'd be able to have folders and could have multiple threads, one per story, in an author's folder.
    But that would require fundamentally changing how this board works.

    At the end of the day, it's just a reality that a board like this isn't best suited for writing stories. it is what it is, and that's what we have to deal with.
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    >>30671

    I have said this many times now. I didnt critisize Edwaed or his work in any way. All I did was suggest that due to the prolific amount of stories in the Sydnivers he might want to consider making a thread to put the FINNISHED stories in after their initial publication(*something many authors do on their own on traditional forums like this one*).

    I have complimented his work at every turn, however I WILL criticize his (and your) thin Skin. You people are being babies. If you can't take even the gentaliat of suggestions even about things only tangential to your writting than you shouldn't share it publicly.

    As for me I have been using the same name in the community since I was 11 years old. I am Janny. I have been helping, "The Geek," write the WSA200 series cince its second incarnation, I helped Grendal with the, "Changing / Changed World," stories(Yes it is my fault he didn't finnish them... Sorry... I went through a bit of a bitch period between 17-19), I consulted on a couple of PullApart's stories(I am especially proud of my suggestions on his superhero series) and have had positive coraspondences with most of the big names from Mayor Pero to Monk to Riawh(no they didnt know my age when I was talking to them). Oh and I created that Dolcett D&D setting that was popular for a couple years on Dolcettish and dolcettgirls...

    ... I am not sure WHY ANY OF THAT SHOULD MATTER!
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    >>30705

    I see you don't quite understand what criticism is. Criticism isn't just speaking ill of a work or a way of doing things. "Criticism is the evaluative assessment of a thing, an action, or a person based on specific standards. The term derives from the ancient Greek word *krinein* (to distinguish, to judge). The goal is to gain insight, point out errors, or bring about improvements." You are trying to bring about an improvement that you believe could be helpful.

    However, you have to understand that not every assessment is perceived as helpful. To offer an assessment or criticism, you need to know the motivation of the person you want to help—the goals of the author or artist.

    And no one here is being oversensitive or acting like a baby. While it’s true that some artists or authors seem a bit thin-skinned, I call it empathy. This makes one more likely to perceive negative or critical voices as harsher than perhaps intended. But that same empathy brings with it the ability for an author to put themselves in the shoes of fictional characters—a skill that is crucial for portraying believable actions in a story.

    Someone who is highly empathetic might misunderstand a comparison to Tribbles.

    Our comments about the Tribbles were rather inappropriate given the topic under discussion here; they could be interpreted as an attack. In a different context, it would be funny.

    I’ll leave the Tribbles out of it; my remark was just as odd as your comment about them. Besides, I don't like fur in my food.

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    >>30705
    Me? Thin-skinned?! That's the artistic temperament, darling! :-P

    On a serious note, you did clarify your intent later but your first post did feel very much like an attack, intentional or otherwise. Yes, I am a sensitive soul with a volatile mental state. As I said before, another time, just come to me directly and we can have a conversation :)

    Thank you to those who came to my defense but let's draw a line under this now and all get on with our lives :) There's enough shit going on in the world without us weird little perverts fighting among ourselves :)

    Peace out xxx

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